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Posted: 11 years ago
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Inter col fest cumin soon... Kria tensed but Ma Rey as always cool 😎

Rey ka car... Ne kria Ki temper raise kardi😆.
kria covered wid mud all over...🤣🤣. So saddd .

Kr meet... Was awesome.
Rey staring at her for 15mins... Seriously😲
Uska dil kria ko dek kar tez se dadakne lag jaayega😛

Kria's outburst on Rey... Omg aisa gussa koi kartha hai😡 ( idralli neenu ninna kopa theeruskonda Rey mele😆)
She n stone... But Rey saved his car😉 still... His eyes Neva left seeing her❤️
Dat sparks wala n Kr bg scene... Superb!!!! Loved it.

So here Kr journey begins!!!!
Update nxt chap soon dear.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Truely an amazing update !!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
thanks a lott for all the comments...😊

anytime feel free to give ur reviews
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: geeth_amar

Inter col fest cumin soon... Kria tensed but Ma Rey as always cool 😎

Rey ka car... Ne kria Ki temper raise kardi😆.
kria covered wid mud all over...🤣🤣. So saddd .

Kr meet... Was awesome.
Rey staring at her for 15mins... Seriously😲
Uska dil kria ko dek kar tez se dadakne lag jaayega😛

Kria's outburst on Rey... Omg aisa gussa koi kartha hai😡 ( idralli neenu ninna kopa theeruskonda Rey mele😆)
She n stone... But Rey saved his car😉 still... His eyes Neva left seeing her❤️
Dat sparks wala n Kr bg scene... Superb!!!! Loved it.

So here Kr journey begins!!!!
Update nxt chap soon dear.


hehe.. geeth..i love rey too...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Kria has the habit of penning her thoughts in her diary while rey recorded his thoughts in an iPod.😊

Kria's thoughts...😊

Dear diary...😛

Today wasn't a normal day.. My day got ruined by audi wala and had to cancel all my plans.. Though I was embarrassed as I shouted at the wrong person I didn't show it on my face and just walked away.. Yea and how can I not notice how handsome and hawt that guy was and chilled too.. he didn't shout back at me.. Don't know why I felt those sparks as soon as he touched me and shiver passed through my spine..😳😳 It's new but I don't wana think anymore about it.. Rest of my day passed wasting time at home n irritating my sweet granny.. I'm sleepy now.. Bye...😊

Rey's thoughts..😎

Hey dude.. Today I came across a gal who's charm attracted me and I got lost in her.. This is something new and strange happening for the first time in my life.. I'm still not able to get over those sparks in her dark black eyes.. so intense.. She's beautiful.. Just perfect.. For a minute I was like I need her at any cost.. Uhhh.. what the hell am I speaking... Noo.. let me get over you.. Miss hyper... Stay away..😊

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Finally it was the day. The competition was about to begin in a few hours. Rey parked his audi in the National Tech University campus and walked through the hall completing all the procedure's. There were a few students inside the hall who were strangers to all and buried inside their books. Rey had decently dressed up in his blazer's leaving all his funky style and spike's to give his best impression. He reached the notice board to read the instructions.😊

rey's uniform


Competition is for 3 day's.. there will be 2 hours gap between each event.. and each event lasts for 3 hours.

Day 1: Quiz competition

Pick and Speak

Day 2:Dance Competition

Model Making

Day 3: Programming Skill

Singing competition.😊

He knew he would easily crack it. He wanted to get rid of the nerds around him so walked away from the hall to the corridor's. He relaxed on a pillar looking at the view of the entire campus. The view was crystal clear with a cool atmosphere and greenery all around.. students walking in and out.. vehicles parked in the campus.. His eyes fell on a gal who was moving slowly with her bag on one shoulder.. book in one hand.. chewing the gum.. one eye on the book.. and the other on the surroundings so that she doesn't bump on anyone.. she was cautious.. She was looking hawt in that white shirt and a dark blue skirt and a tie hanging loosely.. he was again busy watching her.. He suddenly jerked when he saw her kicking his audi twice.. damn still she didn't forget it.. till now no one dared to touch his car and she kicked it..😡😡He lost his temper banging his fist went inside the hall.. and thought maybe she was a student of this university..

kria's uniform😉


Only when he entered the hall he realized she was a contestant here.. suddenly there was a pin drop silence.. Everyone's eyes were on kria.. n someone even commented "she's sexy.."Rey started fuming here this and wanted to punch him hard.. He tried hard t control himself why he's feeling so jealous..Kria gave a look around and didn't bother for anyone.. she royally walked right in front of him with full on attitude to the other side of the hall... his eyes were on her again..🥱

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Some officer's walked inside the hall.. One of them announced "THE STUDENT OF THE YEAR" competition officially kick start's. First is the quiz competition. There are 30 contestants and will be paired up to form 15 groups. You can go occupy the tables as per the number's allotted to you.. kria's number was 14.. she went n settled.. her partner hadn't come yet.. Rey's was 15.. he came n sat while she stared at him from the corner of her eye.. "Yee duffer.. universji.. y him.. aren't there many people here.." she frowned. Rey saw her but he too turned his face "Miss hyper.." though they were quiz partners neither of them introduced themselves.😲

Rey's thought..."till the last minute I knew I was the winner.. But now.. Miss hyper.. what if she spoil's everything.. I will never allow her to answer.. "😔

Kria's thought.. "I'm here to win.. I don't wana get filtered 1st day in 1st round only.. all because of this duffer... I will answer first and never will give him a chance.."😲😲


reviews plzz...😊😊

Edited by krazyarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Yipeee... 😃
i'm the first one to comment (by cheating i know but who cares) :p

Ohkey coming to update
Awsum start.. dere habbit of reading n recording.. n dey confessed dat they feel (spark) for each odr..

N i can imagine dem in dese dress's... Dammn hottt (while imagning)

n yusss.. kriya kicked audi lol.. she didnt forget.. n rey drooling ovr her.. n jealous ;)

N now dey are partner too.. hoping for some fun.. n spicy update..
n here d competition begin 😃

Ahmazingly penned down.. i loved d way u described when she entered.. n rey's jealousy too... ur way of explanation i like d most.. n story moving in a intresting way.. !!

All d best for next update.. n thnks again for reserving for me :*
Edited by jyoti_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res __________ Unresss 👏 👏 Snehuuu wht an amezingg update yrrr i totaly loved it 👏 👏 Its awesome the first start was Superb yr Dairy nd ipod me Apne thoughts Lol super cute 😳 Nd then The part When Kria kicked Rey's Car nd Some body complimented her "SEXY" rey wants to punch that guy 😆 😆 hehehe Hilarious nd last part Was intresting They both r partners bt giving Attitude to each other lol Then How willl they manage lol gossh haha its superb update Bt said me that u will give percap also where ...??? Pls give that nd Update soon waitinggg .!!!!! 😳
Edited by Sanchita_ArSha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Amazing boths parts 1 & 2
Loved kriya's dress
Sorry for late reply
Continue soon thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Awesome update..

Amazing...

loved each and every part of this update..

continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Unres
Hayee, Ekdum Jabardast update tha.
Pahela diary aur ipod waala part was super cute.

Then kriya ne jo rey ki car ko kick marna was so hilarious. Aur kriya ka attitude toh too much tha,
And "sexy" waala, jisne bhi agli baar rey ke saamne phir kaha toh Woh definitely Pitne waala hoga,

Rey ki jealously... has has kar aasu aa gaye yrrr,

Partners- interesting... kriya ke universeji ne without any doubt bilcul sahi kiya...
Inke khayaal kitne milte julte hai. Dono ek dusre ko nicha dikha na chahte hai.

Ab snehaaa pata hi hoga last mein kya bolti hun har comment mein...




UPDATE...jaldi jaldi Update chahiye.
Wanna read more.
Chota update likha hai ya mujhe lag raha hai.
Par next update aur lamba chahiye. I know bahaut demanding ho rahi hun.
Toh iss demanding devil ki demand bhi poori kar do.
Update soon.
Bubye...

Nikki.

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