FF In Her Majesty's Secret Service COMPLETED 2/9 pg 79 (R18) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: yhmfever

Omg that was hott
Mr and mrs bhalla on fire
Lol lab patachalega yeh plan
Lol poor them

I loveddd the way u
Described
Him
" he looked so damn sexy in his navy suit and a crisp white shirt, a carelessly knotted striped tie completing his look


Thank you for your comment. Plan coming up later today ( already 3.30 am in my part of the world). I'll know what it is when I start writing it I guess lol 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Amazing.

The desperation and longing..the love was penned down beautifully.
Update soon. Waiting for the plan


Thank you Nancy. I'm waiting for the Plan too... Lol. 😆 😆 Will update later today
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Rozy77

superb part⭐️
awww i feel for raman 🤣... poor guy is so frustrated 😆
u have wonderfully described their longing for each other😳
really enjoyed this 1 and looking forward to the next 1😉


Than you Rozy. Yes, I know poor Raman is always frustrated. He he, don't worry, will write him some relief soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: avni_19

OMGGG!!!! totalyy loved itt!! i love this talent of urs! secret romance and love! lol

awesumm and amazingg update!! updatee soonn plsss~!!! and plsss PM me... thanku soo much!!

want to knw wt the plan is all about! :P ;)


Thank you Avni. Am waiting for inspiration to strike so I can write about the plan 😃 😃 Lol. Later today, I promise
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
THE PLAN
PART 3

"I have a plan" said Raman. "But the question is, are you game for it?"

"Yes" said Ishita unhesitatingly, looking into her Husbands eyes.

"But I haven't told you what it is yet" he smiled at her.

"Whatever it is, I will do it. I ...I need you too Raman" she blushed as she admitted her longing to him.

He caressed her cheeks with loving hands " Jhooth bolna padega"

"Boloongi" she responded, shivering at his touch.

"Main jo bhi kahoonga, karna padega" he decided to press home his advantage.

"Karoongi" she caught his wandering hands in hers, pressing them to her lips.

"Then tonight " he shuddered at the feel of her lips " Hotel Taj, 9.00pm. Meet me in the lounge. Tell them at home that you have an emergency surgery and it will take you a while. I will call and say that I am held up in a meeting. Aur haan, the room will be booked in the name of Raj"

"Raj Kyon?"

"Are, yaar. I am a younger sexier version of SRK after all. So Raj Malhotra suits me no? Ghar par keh dena ki tumhara VIP patient hai, Mr Raj Malhotra." He smirked at her

"Aap Raj hai to phir main Kaun hoon? Simran? Simmi ?"" Ishita started giggling.

"Kya, yaar, sara passion hi kill kar diya" he hit his head in mock disgust. "Thik hai, yeh story zyada Chennai Express hai, after all. To main Rahul aur tum Meenamma. Meenamma Lochini."

"Raman..." She fell laughing into his arms. "Kuch bhi"

"Deepika then?" He tightened his arms around her, and tilted her face up to receive his kiss"

"Raman, no, I have to go. Bas yahi hai aap ka plan? Mujhe hotel mein bulana, surgery ke bahane?" She pulled herself out of his arms, straightening her sari as she did.

"Nahi, yeh to bas pehle episode hoga. Lekin din mein ab tum rest kar liya karna, because your nights are going to be very busy, Mrs Bhalla" he made a grab for her, but she moved swiftly towards the door.

"Mrs Bhalla? I thought I was Deepika."

"Tonight. 9.00pm" he repeated as she finally walked out the door, her head and heart both in a spin at the thought of the night to come.

Coming up: Episode 1 : Rendezvous at the Taj
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Omggg
Lolll they are so cute
Can u imagine its 4am and im reading this

Update soon but with a longer part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Whoo hoo..feeling something really hot coming up
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
omgg!!! lol.. loved itt!!! cant believe ishita s actually gonna lie!!! :O hahaha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Awesome plan...superbly written!
loved Raj Malhothra and Simran...🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
One request, please make it a little longer. This one was such a tease!
Loving this new plan ;)

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