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Okay sabse pehle I'm really sorry. Main khub time se feedback nahi de rahi hun as I'm too busy with studies. But anyway aaj maine 33 - 40 chapters padh liye. In a go and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Sabse pehle to great showing the new students.
But I didn't like that Ritu. She was very mean. And Yash.. full time sharon pain line marta hain. But it's good he got to know the truth. And nice ki tumhne iss track ko zyada nahi kheecha.
Now coming to Swayam going to London. The feelings and the expressions. Well done.
SwaRon were really well depicted. And then the fight. It was really good to see Sharon so concerned about Swayam.
And the holi sequence. Swayam giving sharon a surprise. The romantic moments and the kumkum filling gesture. Beautiful. I really enjoyed it. And now finally the haldi, mehendi and sangeet.
Poor SwaRon. Can't meet each other. But jab friends aise ho toh tension kai baat ki.
Friendship was portrayed beautifully. Which reminds me
'Happy Friendships Day'.
Really enjoyed reading all the chapters and I hope that the feedback is satisfying enough. Update soon and I'll try my best to read. You are a superb writer.
Love you
Thanks for all the PM's.
Stay happy. đ
Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago