Zaroon - Kashaf O.S ~ Confession~

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello ,
this is my first o.s on my new favorite couple .after long time i watched any show and i am glad it was " zindagi gulzar hai ". it was my first pak serial and i absolutely loved the experience..
There were many things in show which i thought left untouched , off course i know 26 episodes are not enough to cover everything ,
so here i am posting this o.s to deal on one such issue..hope you will like it..




Confession


''Abbu.. Abbu''..as soon as Zaroon entered his two princess pounced on him to deliver all the happenings occurred during his absence. IT was a ritual , daily when he came back from work his daughters zara and alvira use to fill him with all the details.


They were of 1.5 years now and watching them speak in slight babyish language was fun.



''Abbu..i love you'', zara crooned , they recently had learned this sentence and now- a -days it had also became part of ritual to say I love you various times during a day, after waking up, after having breakfast, before he goes office, when he comes back etc .and the doting father zaroon was he always loved this.


''I love also abbu '' alvira said not lagging behind .

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'And I love my babies very very much''..both sisters giggled and kissed his cheeks ...





After putting both his angels to sleep zaroon came to his room , as usual he saw two cups of coffee on table..oh another ritual before sleeping both he and kashaf use to have a cup of coffee aND talk about their lives..


He saw kashaf entering ...


Dono so gyi ( both slept )? Kashaf asked


Ha...( yes )


''Dono din par din itni badmaash hoti ja rahi h ..''( both are getting naughtier day by day)

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' toh kya hua bacchiyan hi toh vo, karne do shararatein '' (So what they are babies only...let them do mischief..)

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'Ha ha zaroon tumhare samne toh kuch keh hi nai skte h un dono ko bigad k rakh diay hai ...'' ( yes yes zaroon , we cant say anything to them in front of you , you have spoil' t them )


yes and i will spoit them more ...zaroor smiled brightly while kashaf mad a face



"Kashaf ...can I ask something will you ans me?''

'

'Ab yh toh ques p depend karta h..'' ( irt depends on the question )


'kashaF..'


'mazak kar rhi hoon pucho...' ( i am just joking ask )


'when did you fell in love with me??'


'What ..'


''I mean why did you agreed to get married to me, as far as I know I didn't fit in the equation which you have in your mind.then why..??''


'Armmm ...ok I will ans that ..but promise me you wont laugh'


'Why is reason is funny...?'


'No..not for me..'

'

Phir toh mere liye bhi nai hoga..tell me..'


'I agree to marry you because of cup of tea..

'

What'....zaroor shouted trying hard to control his laughter.when kashaf said not to laugh he had thought all million possibilities but never in world reason could be this funny..


'No..dont...no don't laugh zaroon junaid..'

'

Ok...sorry...I am serious now...you will elaborate?''


"Do you remember at sir abrar's place , when servant came with tea by mistake he dropped on me, but suddenly you came and put your hand in between . That was the first day some on else acted as a shield for me.All my life I use to be alone...When abbu left us Ammi had to struggle a lot to brought up me and my sisters .being eldest some responsibilities came on my shoulders also...since then I m used to face all the troubles , hardship by myself only. There was no one who could stand for me...but that day you were the first person who stood for me..i guess I fell in little love with you that day only...although I took time to realise..."


"But I am glad you realized ...and never ever think you are alone now and will ever be till I am alive" zaroon completed her with slight moistness in his eyes..he knew kashaf had to struggle a lot but he didn't knew her scars run this deep...


He gave a slight squeeze on her hand , while kashaf nodded slightly indicating that she understood what he was thinking..


While kashaf went to the kitchen to put cups here in the room zaroon pledged to himself he will be always there for his love ..


Ending sucked ,,,i know but will try to improve next time...don't know how much i succeeded what i wanted to show .but i hope you guys will at least like it..
suggestions and comments are always welcomed😊

P.S-i would loved to use urdu words like in show, i really liked that but alas i dont know urdu .

P.S -2 -I have few other scenarios also in my mind on which i am thinking to write ..do tell me if you want to read .😊


P.S-3 plz ignore typos and grammatical mistakes😆

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suhaaana thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahh i absolutely loved it
alvira and zara , zaroon's cuties..
It was so beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was so sweet shruti ,... awesome ... yes there are many things which were left to the viewers to imagine ,...

the cup of tea had really made their jodii😆

I loved it and would love to read more... if I collect right than zaroon never knew what kashaf had really gone through because of her father ... so I would like something on that
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love to :)
Awesome part dear...continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The idea was really good but I felt that it could have been elaborated a bit more.Nonetheless,it was a nice effort.👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsumm Dear!! Loved It..❤️❤️ loved Zaroon's cuties!! A Cup Of Tea really made their jodi..❤️ Do Keep Writing More on ZaShaf!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes that is the best thing i like about their relationship. I remember when Kashaf told Sidra about that cup of tea... it siad she had given the key to Zaroon finally. The explanation you gave was all in that tiny scene.
But i really liked reading it! Brings back the essence! Keep it up!

and Do write more!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

Ahh i absolutely loved it
alvira and zara , zaroon's cuties..
It was so beautifully written



thankyou😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shona_arhilover

that was so sweet shruti ,... awesome ... yes there are many things which were left to the viewers to imagine ,...


the cup of tea had really made their jodii😆

I loved it and would love to read more... if I collect right than zaroon never knew what kashaf had really gone through because of her father ... so I would like something on that



thankyou..
i really wanted this scene in show...

about her father , yes i was thinking to write on this too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: BlackMagicWoman

Love to :)
Awesome part dear...continue soon.



thank you 😊

will try to next one soon

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