second chance???? a os (consider couple which u want)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Second chance??? What is this??? Is really life gives us second chance or it is just a plane lie??? A myth which gives us a hope, a hope which gives us strength to dream, a dream which become the most important part of our life, our aim. They said life snatch our dream. But really our dream got snatched by life. He knew his dream matter to him and he also knew dreams never come true. But he again saw a dream, not for himself but for her.

Aaina dekha toh mera chehra badal gaya
Aaina dekha toh mera chehra badal gaya
Dekhte hi dekhte kya..? kya..? badal gaya !
Baadal meri zameen par aakar tham gaye
Aayi zara si dhoop jo, saaya badal gaya
Aaina dekha toh mera chehra badal gaya

A dream he had seen for her ignoring the pain which he suffered when his own dream got broken. We know lie does not stand too long. And it happened again. May be the dream he saw for her just a lie. His life again got stuck so her. Two lives have got stuck and a dream got broken. He did everything to make her happy. He did not let her cry even a once. But what a cruel game played by so called destiny. He himself broke her dream. He remembers the day when she comes to meet him last time.

She comes there to say him something and he afraid to listen that. He afraid to face her and the way she looked at him, it confirmed his fear. She did not waste any time. She said what she wanted to say. The three words which he never wants to listen from her, she said. His heartbeat become slow, very slow like something is slipping from his hands. His tongue got stuck and so her. Silence took over the moment.

Uljhi rahi sawalon me jeene ki har khushi
Jab bujh gaye diye toh mili hai roshni
Aankhon me neend aayi toh sapna badal gaya
Dekhte hi dekhte kya..? kya..? badal gaya !
Aaina dekha toh mera chehra badal gaya

His silence gives her answer. Her voice got stuck. She wants to say something but could not speak. A tear stuck in his eyes. Her lips start shivering, the pain reflect in his eyes so in her. He knew they never meant to be. She knew he never allowed to be loved. He wants to erase that pain from her eyes. She wants to be the part of his broken soul. He was the broken soul from long time ago. She was silent but he could hear the screams of her heart. A broken soul, brake another soul. Guilt took over him. His mind was screaming, again someone else will be like him. He looked in her eyes. She allowed him to see, how much his silence affect her. Then she spoke' I wish heart would have been made of stone" she give a chuckle and then a smile, a smile painful one. Then she again spoke "don't u dare to blame yourself for this. It's not your fault." A smile crept on his face and he speaks first and last time "you know me very well. Why?" she knew she can't pretend in front of him and next moment she jumps into his arms. The tears which had got stuck start falling toward their destiny. Two shattered soul were crying badly hugging each other.

Qaid kiye thay khwab kisine neend kisi ne haari
Haar gayi hai haar kahin par jeet kahin par hari
Tarah tarah se khoob waqt bhi bhes badal ke aaya
Mili mujhe na dhoop aaj ki mila na kal ka saaya

He felt something cold and come back to present. May be rain was going to start. He checked his phone. 5 missed calls from home. He wipe his tears and then start walking toward his unknown destiny.

Manzil qareeb aayi toh rasta badal gaya
Dekhte hi dekhte kya..? kya..? badal gaya !
Aaina dekha toh mera chehra badal gaya
Dekhte hi dekhte kya..? kya..? badal gaya !
Aaina dekha toh mera chehra badal gaya
kya ... kya badal gaya ...!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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its awesome...very emotional... 👏.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS...

👏👏👏
Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome super os
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thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tumara kuch nhi ho sakta! :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: piaviviandsena

Tumara kuch nhi ho sakta! :(

kyn? :( its just a story. Plz dnt be sad
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So emotional ...
Hrt touchy ...
Thanx 4 pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bhai too good
Keep writing 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vishu..!! Right.?Dude where were u..?Anyways u are habitual to potray such emotional stuffs in such an Awefull manner..I loved it dude,The concept was emotional n quite touchy..I enjoyed it
Thanx for the PM



Prateek
Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: My_loveis_gone

kyn? :( its just a story. Plz dnt be sad


Y do u even write such a os!? cnt u think positive and write smthing happy?

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