aarya os : ore piya pt 2,3 pg 3,4 ljuly 22

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

This story was magical...👏

It has been a long time I've read something so musical without the song ...

A flow in her movements, a glow in her look and a yearn in his chase...spoke volumes of the love they had exchanged in the form of feelings never to be forgotten ever! 👏

Simply marvelous!⭐️

I wish I could read more of your writings...😊

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suhaaana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

@kmfan 2
thank u so much
it is very first time i have written something lyrical
glad u like it

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roserosey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

beautiful suhaana...so beautiful ...

longing closure...

but excellent job👏⭐️

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: suhaaana

thanks ya sheen

she is student

Ur welcome 😊
Fab Updt 3 !
It seems incomplete plzz give an epilogue too plz
What happen to the girl after she gave him smile n went away.. After years he was thinking about Aarti,, where is she?

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

So beautiful love the ending ⭐️

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nirmala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Its beautiful, beautiful al d way...Emotions doesnt need any shape in d form of voice,marvelous...it s like a melody...

Edited by nirmalac99 - 11 years ago

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suhaaana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

thank u everyone
i am really feeling so good after reading your comments
this forum is best i never thought that people will accept this type of writing
but you people rock😉

😃

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roserosey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: suhaaana
thank u everyone
i am really feeling so good after reading your comments
this forum is best i never thought that people will accept this type of writing
but you people rock😉

😃

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