'Loota Khazana' (Lost Treasure) Poetry - Page 3

Originally posted by: desi chic

Hey guys, lately KAA has been so depressing,Yes tell me about it 😆 yet also very touching with all the emotionally dipped SG scenes... On the one hand, the rona dhona gets at my nerves sachi??😲😲😲 , but when you watch it... It hurts.hmm don't hurt me 😆.. Hurts to see it happen this way... *sigh* Anyways, seeing SG's in depth emotional clash in yesterday's episode... I've posted some lines below, which I'd written not to long ago...

Loota Khazana... (A Lost Treasure)

Chale tehe dariyaa paar, lehron ke sahaare…

Ubharte paani mein lipte huey, kahin dikhey na kinaare…

Musquraye hum… khushi ki kalpana karte…

Mit gaya makhauta… judaai ke gham mein marte…

Tah paas jeene ka tumse bahana…

Mohabbat bhaare iss dil ka… waqt ke panno ne loota khazana…

Translation

Set ahead to cross the sea, with help of the waves…

In vicious waters, the shores were nowhere to the eyes…

Smile, I did… in anticipation of a reason to…

Slid away the faade… as I succumbed to death in the sorrows of separation…

I had a reason to my existence… in you…

A heart filled in love... hath lost it's greatest treasure in time's inevitable grasp....

Cheers,

dc

*sigh* awww nice words there!! I just read the english translation..thanks for that 😃

Originally posted by: queenkumar

DC u r the best with all these poetry, just touches my heart.

thank u for putting these up 😳 😳 😳

DI

Aww Di, tussi great ho! 🤗

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Anisha7

*sigh* awww nice words there!! I just read the english translation..thanks for that 😃

merci boucoup Anshu beta! and welcome😊

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

omg Finally My sweet Neetu has managed to write wonderful words in the name of love, I know KAA is all sad and horrible 😭 😭 but ur poem makes me even more depressed, poor Gauri did everthing for Shiv but he still managed to let her down

Mohabbat bhaare iss dil ka… waqt ke panno ne loota khazana…

ke lutt gayay hum teri mohobbat main. poor babe gauri.

Love it so, keep writing. uummaaahhhh.

Long time no talk RD! Don't be depressed coz of KAA..😆 Typical guys though...letting girls down 😆 Oh well..Never mind..😉But then again, Gauri hasn't done everything for Shiv!! She's doing things for her own benefit too! 😳😆

Billo Rani, I've the song here for u... exquiste lyrics👏

Javed Akhtar:
Jaane Kiski Talaash Unaki Aankhon Mein Thi
Aarajoo Ke Musaafir Bhatkate Rahein
Jitane Bhi Woh Chale
Utane Hi Bichh Gayein Raah Mein Faasalein
Kwaab Manjil Thi Aur Manjilein Khwaab Thi
Raaston Se Nikalate Rahein Raaste
Jaane Kis Waste Aarjoo Ke Musaafir Bhatkate Rahein

For whom these eyes searched… who knows

Those riding the waves of desire… remain wanderers

No matter how many steps taken…

Distances between them grew at a greater pace

Dreams were destiny, and destiny were the dreams

From each path, unwound another…

For what purpose the unrequited wanderers [in desire] move along… who knows

Koyi Puraani Yaad Mera Rasta Roke Mujhse Kehti Hai
Itani Jalati Dhoop Mein Yuun Kab Tak Ghumoge
Aayo, Chalke Bitein Dino Ki Chhanv Mein Baithe
Us Lamhein Ki Baat Karein
Jisme Koyi Phool Khila Tha
Us Lamhein Ki Baat Karein Ke
Jisme Kisi Aawaaz Ki Chaandi Khanak Uthi Thi
Us Lamhein Ki Baat Karein Ke
Jisme Kisi Nazaron Ke Moti Barse The
Koyi Puraani Yaad Mera Rasta Roke Mujhse Kehti Hai
Itani Jalati Dhoop Mein Yuun Kab Tak Ghumoge

An aged memory obstructs my path and asks

In this scorching heat, for how much longer shall you walk…

Come, let us bathe in the shade of passed moments

Speak of that moment

In which a flower bloomed

Speak of that moment

In which a voice echoed ever so like the moonbeams

Speak of that moment

In which precious gems escaped from a pair of eyes

An aged memory obstructs my path and asks

In this scorching heat, for how much longer shall you walk…

Sach Toh Yeh Hai Kasoor Apana Hain
Chaand Ko Chuune Ki Tamanna Ki
Aasamaan Ko Jamin Par Maanga
Phool Chaaha Ki Paththaron Pe Khilein
Kaanton Mein Ki Talaash Khoshboo Ki
Aarjoo Ki Ke Aag Thandak De
Barf Mein Dhundate Rahein Garmi
Khwaab Jo Dekha Chaaha Sach Ho Jaaye
Isaki Humko Saja Toh Milani Hi Thi
Sach Toh Yeh Hai Kasoor Apana Hain

The truth is however, that I am at fault

Desired I did, to touch the moon

Desired I did, for the union of the skies and ground

Desired I did, for blossoms on stone

In thorns I desired the fragrance

That the fire of desire brings cool,

I searched futilely for heat in the cold

In desiring the dream that these eyes born, come true

For this desire, punishment was inevitable

The truth is however, that I am at fault

Hope I did aight!😕

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

omg Finally My sweet Neetu has managed to write wonderful words in the name of love, I know KAA is all sad and horrible 😭 😭 but ur poem makes me even more depressed, poor Gauri did everthing for Shiv but he still managed to let her down

Mohabbat bhaare iss dil ka… waqt ke panno ne loota khazana…

ke lutt gayay hum teri mohobbat main. poor babe gauri.

Love it so, keep writing. uummaaahhhh.

Will someone pinch me please? Kya hai na, yakeen nahin ho raha😳 RDI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tussi ehte? Hum dhanya hogaye😃 Seriously, missin ya like anything Raniye! My lines make u depressed? *slaps hand on forehead* satyanaas... I shouldn't do this to ya'll... I'm sorry!😭 Royie mat, think Mirchi☺️ But not too hard😳😆🤗 Shiv is destroyed... He needs to see the optometrist regarding his tear ducts😳 Poor Gauri indeed...

Thanks for the time Di, I know ur total booked! *mwuaah*

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic