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Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary

2 wish granted...😆😆

Which 2??

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Which 2??

Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary

oh oh preet di i ment second wish which is commenting on ur ff...not two wishes...

Oh ok! But u haven't unresd yet...

Kahan gayi?? Subah se update ready hai, ab post bhi kar de
Kitna wait karwayegi??

harshu.. tune bhi ab ye kaam shuru kar diya haan??😡

Hey everyone m back with the new chapter...

And I want to thank some of the people ..

I want to thank preet di for her support through all this days when I was in hospital then too she never forgot call me and ask about my health...she was always there helping me and supporting me...so thank u so much preet di for ur luv and support,,

Also jazz for just being there for me ...

Then I want to thank my sweet lil sis anushka for all the concern and understanding... and of cource all my readers for their wishes

Happy reading!!!

Chapter 18

The bus start moving n everyone is happy but as soon as it crosses the college gate it stop suddenly .everyone started asking wats wrong why they stopped the bus then the bus teacher after assuming says that one student has still not came n they are waiting for him.

Everyone in the bus start cursing that student for being late. Jodha says that sir i was the one who made the list of student coming on this trip .she looks around in the bus n says according to my list everyone is already here n no one is left . after hearing her the teacher informs her about the last min entry. She ask "kon hai who"

"ME" come the answer.

Jodha turns towards the gate to see the person wishing in her heart it not to be the person whom she thinking it to be but as her luck would have it he was the same person whom jodha didn't want to be ... "jalal"

Jalal comes in front of jodha "am the person" and gives 100 watt smile to her to which jodha give him how-is-this-possible look. They both were just looking at each other one with annoyance and other with mischief.

Jalal "i like it when u check me out"

Jodha "(smirking) hv u started day dreaming or something?"

And with that she goes and sit on her place, jalal goes and sit with the abdul adjacent to jo .

Abdul "dude mujhe toh laga tune bus miss kar diya"

Jalal "(looking at jodha) aaj agar khuda bhi aaj jate toh bhi mein yeh trip miss nhi karta" as he say this jodha turns towards him and they look at each other for a min then jo turns .

Abdul "(looking toward jodha then jalal) kya baat pyaar mein logo ko dewaana bante suna tha par kabhi socha na tha ki out of all the ppl tujhe dewaana bantein huye dekhunga...like seriously pyaar kya kya karwa deta hai"

Jalal ...smiles

Abdul "ohh ab jodha land se bahar aaja"

Jalal "wohi toh nhi ho raha hai... Kabhi tujhe pyaar nhi hua kisi say issliye tujhe nhi pata...ki how does it feels jab who aapke kareeb ho phir bhi aapse koso doore..." hearing that abdul smiles fade away he look at jodha "u r wrong jalal I knw how does it feel ki jisse aap toot ke chaho who kabhi bhi aapka nhi ho sakta aur ... Jab aap ko khud use kisi aur ke haato mein sauna pade...and wish ki kabhi tujhe iss dard ko mahsoos karna bhi na pade..."said abdul in his heart.

Jalal "(looking at jodha) yaar abdul mein kabhi use kho nhi sakta"

Abdul in heart (looking at jodha) aur mein kabhi use paa nhi sakta" with that he looks out the window and a lone tear made its way down his cheeks.

"jalal ! jalal ! jalal ! jalal!" everyone in bus was asking him to play his something on his mouth organ

Salima "come on jalal baho khana band karo aur jaldi se kuch bajao...kyun jo" jodha look at jalal and say "let it be salima kuch logo ko kuch bhi bol ke koi fayada nhi hota unhe dusro ki feelings ki koi parwah nh hoti "

With she turned away salima also became quite. After a min they hear a soft and a mesmerizing tune which made jodha to turn towards the direction from where the music is coming only to find jalal closed eyes playing his mouth organ.

Everyone became quiet they all got lost in the music played by jalal. Jodha too was lost in that music she closed her eyes and started to feel the music.

Jodha opened her eyes as bus came to halt she looked around and saw everyone moving out of the bus.

Jodha "(baby voice) salima hum pahuch gaye kya?"

Salima "nhi"

Jodha "toh sab bus se bahar kyun jaa rahen hai?"

Salima "who hum khan eke liye ruken hai"

Jodha "khana mujhe bhi bhukh lagi hai"

Salima "pahle uth toh jao sleeping beauty"

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IN THE DHABA

In the dhaba some were having their food some were freshening up .

Jodha, and salima were sitting on a cot and having their lunch while jalal and abdul both were busy in staring at jodha with different thoughts in their mind. Unaware of a pair of eye absorbing them.

Javeda was making affords to make ruqu agree to eat the dhabas food. While moti and maan were busy in talking something which was making moti blush.

After sometime their teacher asked them to board the bus as they were now going to leav hearing this all started to move toward the bus.

Moti "jodha iss bar tum mere saath baithogi ok"

Jodha "ok"

Salima "what ok she gonna sit with me waise bhi u enjoy ur company with ur maan "

Moti "shut up and jodha will sit with me"

Salima "no me"

Jodha "ok that's it stop fighting like kids and go to bus m just coming in a min or so"

Salima " bt where are u going now?"

Jodha "washroom"

Moti "ok bt make it fast k"

So jodha went towards washroom while moti and salima towards the bus.

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IN THE WASHROOM

Oh god ab yeh darwaz khul kyun nhi raha hai . Jodha once again tried to open the door bt all her attempts went futile.

She tried to shout and call someone bt nobody came she didn't have any idea from how long she had been here bt it seemed a very long tym now.

"koi hai bahar plz help me m stuck here plz open the door"

But still she got no response that's when she heard the bus engines sound.

"hell they are going oh no what should I do now...somebody open the door plz...plz stop the bus m still here...open door.."

She was very scared tears started to flow down her cheeks...she was literally banging the door now but still nothing from other side.

After a min or two she realized that sound of bus engines are now nowhere to be listening.

"NO DON'T GO m here plz don't go" now she had started crying bitterly.

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In the bus

As the bus starts moving ruqu comes and sit with salima.

Salima "ruqu where is jo?"

Ruqu "hmmm maybe be she is sitting with moti in the back"

Salima "k"

While in the back of the bus moti and maan were sleeping.

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Jalal "hell bus bhi chali gayi yeh ladki rah kahan gayi washroom gayi thi ya bana rahi hai...ab toh dekh ke ana hii pade ga ...nhi jalal tu waha kaise ja sakta hai...arrey kyun nhi ja sakta agar jodha kissi musibat mein huyi toh"

Asthis thought of jodha being in trouble crossed his mind without thinking anything further he went towards the washroom.

As he came near the washroom he heard faint sobs so he straight way went inside "jodha" he asked

As soon as jodha heard his voice he cried "jalal"

As heard her his expression ran toward the toward the door of the washroom which was locked from outside so hurriedly opened it.

As soon as jalal opend the door of the washroom jodha took him in a bone crushing hug hiding her face in his chest.

And started crying "jalal...jalal.."

At first jalal didn't knew what to do bt then he too hugged her back.

Precap :- Joja rain romance and flashback

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Ch 19 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/3979327/ss-betrayed-ch-1-21-thread-closed

awesome yaar thanks it was awesome cant wait for next chappu update kab mil raha hai.

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Welcome back dear
hope u r fine
Amazing update
continue soon😊

Originally posted by: marshi

awesome yaar thanks it was awesome cant wait for next chappu update kab mil raha hai.