Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8) - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome story.. loved it 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Totally loved the new story! Can't wait for the next chappy

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Posted: 11 years ago

Smita ... love ur new OS series ... this was hillarious and cute !! 👏

keep them coming !

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Posted: 11 years ago

I have stopped reading on going stories but, smita ji, this is too tempting ... I always like sweet, cute Khushi... My readers always complain, why Khushi is so immature in your story, cant she act little maturely 😆 But I cant help but make her cute, childish and you always give a cute and childish Khushi to read and this is one of the many reasons I keep reading your complete stories ..

I am loving this story. Hope to get a update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

I thought you were going to continue the first OS 😔

But new installment it too good and I hope you will continue this as abhi tak shaadi tak baat nahi pahuji hai😆

As usual Khushi was so sweet and ASR is smitten by his smiling girl ... 😳

Hope Khushi soon finds Arnav's dil ki baat..

Update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Mind blowing start

Can't wait for it to develop

ASR TOTALY IN AWE OF KHUSHI

Plz update soon

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