Rudra And Shambhavi (A Moharika FF) (Thread 2) updt pg 35 - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti07

chaithu the story is heading towards its end.it'll end with the birth of baby..only 4 more updates are left😃



Wow that is great I thought this was going to go like the unending dramas on our tv. It is always nice to give it a good end when going is good. Fond memories remain. Nice update. 😃
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love both the last updates.
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Vaidya and his wife comes running with birju. Shambhavi was screaming in pain. Shrijana sent Rudra out of the room. He don't want to left her but she makes him understand so he reluctantly goes outside. Vaidya's wife examines her. She touched her stomach and becomes relieved. She then gives her some medicine due to which shambhavi immediately got relief. Vaidya's wife nods looking at shrijana with a slight smile on her face indicating that baby is fine. Shrijana too becomes relieved. Shambhavi looks at shrijana.

Shrijana: the baby is fine.

She closes her eyes in relief and caresses her abdomen. Shrijana goes outside the room to inform others. Rudra asks her impatientely.

Rudra: how is she? Is she ok?what happened to her?

Shrijana: she is fine and the baby too. There is nothing to worry about.

Vaidya's wife comes outside and says.

Vaidya's wife: she has taken too much stress that why she got such severe pain. You have to make sure it never happens again. Its dangerous for the baby. Try to keep her happy as much as you can. She is sleeping right now.

Shrijana: but what happens suddenly?

Rudra turns around and looks at sameeksha angrily. He goes near her. She gets scared

Rudra: what the hell you were thinking? What was the need to tell her about last night? Have you lost your Mind? Don't you know about her delicate condition.

She didn't say anything and starts crying. Birju intervenes. He pats on his shoulder and says.

Birju: calm down Rudra..she is ok now. Go to her,she needs you

He gives her a disgusted look and goes inside the room. He sits beside her. He saw her one hand on her stomach. He keeps his hand on hers.

Next day

Shambhavi was standing in the balcony. she was thinking about something and getting happy, Rudra comes he was also happy. There was something special about that day. Something special happened a year back which changed his and shambhavi's life. He hugs her from behind and says..

Rudra: do you remember what day is today?

Shambhavi: yes..today we met for the first time. Last year you tried to kidnap me.

Rudra becomes surprised to know that she remembers everything.

Rudra: so you remember. I wanted to confess something today. When I saw you for the first time I got so lost in your beauty that for a moment I forgot my aim of kidnapping you.

Shambhavi: how can I forget? Even I was bowled over by your charisma.

She turns towards him. He looks at her with all the love he has for her. She embrace him.

Rudra: so much changed in a year. Before you came into my life I never even think of getting married. You have changed my life. You have made me a better man. I love you..

He cupped her face and kissed her forehead.

Shambhavi: I love you too. You know I always think that there isno man in this world who can win my love. I never think that I can fall in love with someone so deeply and madly. I fall for the man who tried to kidnap me.

She taunts him and he narrowed his eyes.

Rudra : you should thank me for that. If I didn't came to kidnap you then we would have never met.

Shambhavi: and I love you for that. Now I can say that trying yo kidnap me was one of the best thing you ever did.

Rudra: I saved your life and you slapped me.

Shambhavi: I did the right thing. You were a stranger for me back then. You were a kidnapper for me.

Rudra: that one act changed my life. Now I have the most beautiful girl in this world as my wife, whom I love more than anything else and who is soon going to be the mother of my child.

Shambhavi blushes. He gently holds her chin and placed a soft kiss on her lips.

At night

Shambhavi was sleeping cuddling Rudra. He was awake and was caressing her stomach. He smiles when she gets more closer to him. Watching her sleep has always been his favourite thing to do. After sometimes he too fell asleep. When he woke up in the morning he saw another burn mark on her shoulder. She was moaning in pain. His heart crushed watching her like this. Every night she had nightmares and every time she sees that hooded man. Birju searched the whole kingdom but he couldn't find anything about that mysterious hooded man. Rudra tightens the security of the palace and appoints two soldiers outside his room. No one was allowed to enter and leave the palace without his consent. For next 4 months everything went normal. Shambhavi stopped getting nightmares and No unusual activity happened with her but Rudra was not leaving any stone unturn to find out about those weird things happening to her. Shambhavi's baby bump started to show. Rudra starts taking care of even more. He don't even let her do small works. He was treating her more like a baby and she was enjoying this special treatment though sometimes he becomes way too protective but she knew that its his love for her. One day Rudra got some urgent work. He wasn't ready to go leaving shambhavi alone but it was necessary for him to go. He strictly denied going anywhere. Shambhavi makes him understand.

Shambhavi: you are the king. You have some responsibility towards our kingdom. I'll be fine. There are so many people to take care of me.

She convinced him to go and he reluctantly agreed. He told birju to take care of her in his absence to which he agreed.

Rudra: only for few hours. I'll be back soon. Last time when i left you.

Shambhavi: Rudra..i am not going anywhere. I'll stay here untill you'll return.

He kissed her forehead,he caresses her baby bump and kissed on it.

Rudra: daddy will come soon...

She smiles and he left. After he went shrijana comes to take care of her. Suddenly shambhavi started feeling very sleepy.shrijana makes her lay on bed. She stays with her all the time. Few hours later shrijana saw her stirring on the bed. She was asleep and frowning. She fists her fingers. Shrijana tried to calm her down. She realises that she is having nightmare. She even tried to wake her up but she didn't awake. Tears were rolling down from her closed eyes. She was grasping and soon got drenched in sweat. Shrijana panicks and immediately calls birju and he rushed to call Vaidya. Shrijana was trying hard to wake her up but she wasn't opening her eyes instead she started screaming. Everyone comes running and becomes horrified to see the scene. Birju brings Vaidya. He got confused at first watching her like this. He too tried to wake her up and gave her some medicines but no use. It looks like someone is stopping her from getting awake. She wasn't able to hear anyone's voice. She clentched her fists and dug her fingernails in her palms so hard that they start bleeding.

Here jwala was chanting some mantras. He has a woodoo doll with shambhavi's piece of cloth on it.

Her screams were getting louder. Rudra comes and heard her screams. He runs towards her. He got shocked and terrified to see the scene. Shrijana was crying badly. Rudra goes near her. He holds her hand.

Rudra: what's happening?

Vaidya: I have tried everything but she is not waking up. We have to wake her up as soon as possible or else anything can happen.she is not responding to anyone's voice.

Shrijana: don't know what happened...everything was going well since last 4 months and now it all started again.

Rudra caresses her cheek. Her loud screams were breaking his heart into,thousand pieces. Watching her in so much pain was becoming unbearable for him.

Rudra: she'll hear my voice. She will,listen to,me. I request you all to plz go outside.

Everyone goes outside. Rudra tried to open her fists. Her Hands were bleeding badly. He cries.

Rudra: Shama..i know you can hear me. You have to listen to me.plz wake up..open your eyes Shama..

She still doesn't open her eyes.

Rudra: remember when we met..remember when we came closer to each other...remember when I kissed you for the first time...when I came to your palace to win your love.

In between her nightmare..she started seeing the memories of Rudra..how he saved her life, how he confessed his love for her.

She loosen her grip and calmed down a bit but still remained unawake.

Rudra: when we get married,when we made love,when you got to know that you are pregnant.

Jwala becomes shocked watching his spell getting ineffective. Shambhavi calls down,she stopped screaming and her eyes got popped open. She gasps and looks at Rudra. Rudra becomes relieved but he was getting devastated to see her being suffered. She cries miserably and hugs him. He comforts her.

Rudra: its ok..i am here now...ssshhh...relax... I am sorry..i am not able to do anything..you are going through so much pain and I..i am so so sorry.

Jwala becomes infuriated watching his spell failed. He killed one of his men. He yells furiously.

Jwala: its impossible. My spell can't be failed. No one one can challenge my powers. That king..no matter how hard he try but be will never be able to save his wife...never..

She broke the hug and looks at him painfully and helplessly. He needed no words. He shook his head in no and kissed her forehead.he hugs her again, she sobs in his arms. His tears were falling on the top of her head. He calls Vaidya. He comes and applies medicines on her hands. Watching Rudra crying shambhavi smiles and tried to be strong. She signals him not to cry. She decided not to weak at any cost. She'll be strong for Rudra and for their baby no matter what happens to her. He applied bandage on her hands. Birju signals Rudra to come outside. He goes with him.

Rudra: what happen ?

Birju: i think you should inform Radha maa and Gopal baba..this is getting serious..to be very honest i don't think she is sick.

Rudra: what do you mean?

Birju: nothing just call them. I am sure they'll be able to help us.

Rudra: you are right but i don't know how are they gonna react. They'll be very angry coz i didn't inform them. The only reason i didn't tell them about her is because i don't want them to get worried.

Birju: i can understand but the situation is getting out of control. Even after so many months we couldn't find anything so its best to call them.

Rudra nods in yes and sent some soldiers to kalpi to bring them.

At night

Radha maa and Gopal reached the palace. Rudra becomes elated to see the. They bless him and before he could say anything Radha maa says..

Radha maa: what happen? Why did you called us so urgently? Is everything ok? Is shambhavi fine?

Rudra didn't say anything. Gopal asks birju and he tells them everything. They became shocked But at the same time they were hurt coz Rudra didn't inform them. Radha maa slaps Rudra angrily.

Radha maa: why didn't you called us before? Now i understand we are nothing to you..is it?

Rudra: no Radha maa its not like this..i just don't want you two to get worried.

Radha maa: where is shambhavi?

She is resting. Radha maa goes to meet her. Gopal pats on his shoulder and gives him a consoling look. She opens the door and was taken aback seeing shambhavi not because of her condition but because she knew the reason of her worsening health. She got horrified and instead of going inside she steps back and goes from there.she comes running and colapse with Rudra and Gopal. She looks at Gopal worriedly and he understood that something is terribly wrong coz never saw her so much freaked out. Rudra asks.

Rudra: what happened Radha maa?

Radha maa:shambhavi..she...why didn't you called me earlier? You should have called me sooner.

Rudra: why? what happened? Do you know what happen to her? Plz tell me i'll do anything to save her from,all these miseries.

Radha maa: you can't do anything untill you find the person who is doing all this.

Rudra: what do you mean? I don't understand.

Radha maa: she is under a spell. Some one is doing black magic on her.

Rudra becomes stunned hearing this. He looks at her in disbelief.

Rudra: black magic? But why would anyone do black magic on her? No I,don't believe.

Radha maa: you have to believe. You saw her. Deep,inside you also know thats its something else and not just sickness. The place from where we belong these things are very common and very dangerous. The moment I saw her I get know that she is in grave danger.

Rudra becomes numb hearing this. He didn't respond. He was unable to believe that someone could do black magic on. She has no enemy then who it could be.he goes in thinking mode.


Edited by jyoti07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
super duper awesome update 😃👏...1 year ago rusham's journey ws started ,loved tht part when rudra nd sambhavi went in a flashback nd remembers their 1st meet...donno why i had tears in my tears reading tht part 😭...still can't believe 1 yr itni jaldi bit gayi ...many things changed in ths 1 yr
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely Jyo. Thanks for the update 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Morning and another intense update.
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In the morning

Radha maa comes to meet shambhavi. She was awake. She becomes surprised and happy to see her. She tried to get up but stopped by Radha maa. She looks at her condition and becomes devastated. Shambhavi smiles.

Shambhavi: I am fine Radha maa..how are you? When did you come?

Radha maa: last night. You were asleep.

She sits besides her. Examines her carefully and finds that she becomes very weak.

Radha maa: why didn't you called me before?

Shambhavi: coz I don't want to see that look on your face which I am seeing right now.

Radha maa smiles.she notices the burn marks on her body. Now she was sure that someone is doing black magic on her. She asks her to rest and goes outside to talk to Rudra,gopal and birju.

Radha maa: you have to do something.this is even more serious than you thought.

Gopal: Radha you know who can help us and I have called him here. He will be here any moment.

Rudra: whom are you talking about?

Gopal: he is a tantrik but a good one. He uses his powers to help others.i know him since very long. He lives near the shambhavi's kuldevi's temple. He is also her ardent devotee. He generally don't go anywhere but i insisted him that's why he is coming.

After few minutes they saw a man with big beard, moustache, long hair with two soldiers were coming towards them. Gopal says.

Gopal: Rudra he is kalki..

Rudra: thankyou for coming here.

Kalki: i am here coz Gopal insisted me to come.why am i being called?

Gopal: i told you about a girl who is under a spell. Only you can get us clear picture. Till now we only knew that someone is doing black magic on her.

Kalki: where is she?

They take him to her. She was asleep. They slowly get into into the room without waking her. Kalki becomes shocked to see her..

Kalki: she?

Gopal: do you know her?

Kalki: yes but we'll talk about that later.

He takes out some rice in his fist and wakes around her chanting something. When he opens his fist the rice turned black. He goes outside the room and everyone follows him.

Kalki: from how long all,this is happening?

Rudra: about 4 or 5 months.

Kalki: its surprsing that she is still,alive. No one person could survive this.

Rudra: what are you talking about ?

Kalki: I know her. I met her once in kali maa mandir. She is an advent devotee of her and probably maa kali helped her in surviving. Its not less than a miracle that not only she is fine but also her child is safe but for how long they'll be safe I don't know.

Gopal: so someone is doing black magic on her.

Kalki: its not an ordinary black magic. Its certain that Whosever is doing it wants her dead. This is far more serious very very serious. You have to find the person who is doing this otherwise you will lose your wife and child. No one can help,you not even me.

Rudra: but she was telling about a man whom she kept seeing.

Kalki: there is no such man exist. Its a hallucination which happens when someone is under a spell. There was never a man. Whosever is doing this is very powerful.

Gopal: thankyou for your help Kalki.

He nods and left from there.

Radha maa: now what? How are we gonna find the person behind all this?

Rudra: I know how to find him.

at night

Rudra and birju dressed as commoners goes in the city. They reaches a place where all the tantriks, aghoras and sadhus were living.

Birju: this place is so creepy.

Rudra doesn't say anything and keep walking to a particular place. They goes inside a house and saw some tantrika doing some kind of havan. A man turns and saw them standing. He freaks out and everyone there stopped whatever they were doing. The owner of that house,the tantrik recognised Rudra and says.

Tantrik: king... I swear I am not doing anything wrong. We were just doing pooja. I am a changed man.

Rudra looks at him suspiciously and walks towards him.

Rudra: are there any more tantriks living in this kingdom apart from this place.

Tantrik: no no king.

Rudra turns around. The tantrik says.

Tantrik: why do you want to,know? Someone casted a spell on you.

He asks sarcastically. Rudra turns around and looks at him furiously.

Rudra: someone is doing black magic on my wife and I want to know who he is.if you know anything then tell me.

Tantrik: no no king..why would any of us do something like this and that too on queen. We didn't do it but why are you worried you are a king you can get anyone as many wife as you want so what if one dies.

He laughs. Rudra grabs his neck and hang him on the wall with one hand. He choked him. Another tantrik tried to,intervene but he knock him down.

Birju says sarcastically.

Birju: i bet you didn't saw that coming.

Rudra: its my wife, my queen,mother of my child, you are talking about. Listen to,me very carefully if i find out that you are behind all this and if anything happens to my wife or my child I'll rip you apart.do you get that?

Tantrik nods in yes but doesn't looked at him. Rudra choked him harder.

Rudra: look at me..i will RIP YOU APART...

Rudra releases him and he falls on the floor coughing.

Rudra: enough of your non,sense now tell me what i ask.

Tantrik: there was a man but he left us years ago. Some other tantriks also joined him and left. As far as i know they left the kingdom years back. No body saw them since then.

Rudra goes in thinking mode and left from there with birju.

Rudra: we have to find that man. I am sure he never left and still lives in this kingdom.

Birju: you are right..we'll find him as soon as possible.

Rudra and birju starts searching for those tantriks. Birju searched in every corner of the kingdom but couldn't find them. Shambhavi's condition was worsening day by day. Due to nightmares she couldn't sleep. She was mentally strong but physically she wasn't. She had dark circles around her eyes. The twinkling of her eyes gone. Rudra stays with her all time. He was shattered and devastated but didn't break down. Few more months passed like this. Shambhavi was now in,her last month of pregnancy with a big baby bump. She became so weak that she can't even get up from bed by herself. Radha maa's medicines and good care was keeping her alive. But to everyone's surprise baby was healthy. There was no sign of harm to baby. It looks like shambhavi was taking all on herself thus saving her child. Radha maa's tension was increasing by every passing day.she decided to talk to Rudra about this who was already frustrated coz he couldn't find out about that man. He was with shambhavi trying to make her sleep but she was too scared to fall asleep because of the nightmares. Radha maa calls him out.

Radha maa: Rudra, shambhavi has become very weak but i am more worried coz she is pregnant. She have to be physically strong to give birth to a child. I am afraid if her condition didn't improve then..

He looks at her terrified. She gives him a sad look enough to tell him what she was talking about. He steps back. He was crushed and heart broken. He looks at her painfully. A tear drops from his eye. He pleads softly.

Rudra: save her.plz save her..you know she is my life.you know i can't live without her. I beg you plz save her.

Radha maa hugs him and consoles him.

Radha maa: i will try my best. I will do everything. She is my daughter too. I just can't let her go like this.

He broke the hug and walk away. He goes and sit outside the palace on stairs. He reminisces raj purohit's word that baby will have only his father. he cries. Gopal comes and consoles him.

Rudra: baba..i am failed. I couldn't do anything. I couldn't do anything to stop her from being suffered. I am not able to do anything. She is slowly going away from me but i am not able to do anything.

Gopal: you are trying your best.i am sure you won't let happen anything to her. Shambhavi too believes that. She believes in you. I am sure we'll find a way.

Rudra: but how? I am still not able to find out about that man neither birju.

Gopal: do you ever think that why a tantrik will do,something like this without a purpose?

Rudra: what do you mean baba?

Gopal: what i am trying to say is that someone else is behind all this because for doing black magic on someone tantriks need sthat persons things that belongs to that person only like hair, clothes,jewelley. Tantriks work for money. Someone else is mastermind of all this. Person who hates shambhavi.someone who wants her dead. Now think if there is any person who hates her.

Rudra started thinking. He thinks about everyone one by,one who are related to them. The last person whose name clicked in his mind was sameeksha. He even reminisves the moment when her necklace gets stuck in shambhavi's hair and she pulled her necklace so hard that shambhavi's hair also comes up with that necklace He decided to find out the truth. He wipes his tears and say.

Rudra: thankyou baba.. You have given me a new ray of hope. Now i know what i have to do. I will save my wife and my child. My child will not have the same fate. He'll Never go through the same pain which i have been through. He will get his father as well as his mother's love.

Rudra once again got his self confidence back. Gopal looks at him proudly.

Rudra goes back in his room. It was already midnight shambhavi was awake. He goes and lay down beside her.

Rudra: you didn't sleep yet.

Shambhavi: can't sleep

Rudra: c'mere..

He puts his hand around her. She rests her head on his chest. He caresses her head.

Rudra: you can sleep sweet heart. I am with you. I'll be awake whole night to make you sleep. You are safe in my arms and so our baby.

He moved his palm on her belly. After a while she fell asleep. She was standing in the corridor alone. She puts her hand on her stomach and panicked. There was,no,baby. She freaked out and start looking for her baby and Rudra. The palace was empty. She searched everywhere but couldn't find anyone. She came outside the palace. She heard a baby's cry. She looked around but no one was there. She lifts her head up and become horrified to see the view. That hooded man was standing on the edge of the terrace holding a baby by his leg. The baby was upside down and crying badly. Shambhavi freaked out more. She calls out for her baby. She steps forward,and that man drops the baby. She woke up with a scream. She was scared to death. Rudra tried to pacify her but she was inconsolable. She was so scared that she wasn't even able to speak properly.

Shambhavi: he..he..he killed my baby..he threw him from terrace..my,baby died...my,baby..

Rudra cups her face.

Rudra: hey nothing happened to our baby.our baby is fine.

She cries miserably. He puts her hand on her belly to make her believe that baby is fine.

Rudra: see our baby is fine.he is here.

She gets relieved and hugs him.

Shambhavi: I can't take this anyone. When will this end?

Rudra: it'll end soon..i promise.

He lay her down again and placed his hand on her forehead. She was in lot of discomfort and was caressing her belly

Rudra: what happen?

Shambhavi: I scared him. He is awake. rusham is twirling and kicking.

Rudra smiles and says

Rudra: let me talk to him..wait...rusham?

Shambhavi: I think of this name for our baby. Combining our names I made a name rusham..and the best thing is it can be applied on both boy and girl.

Rudra smiles gets widened

Rudra: its perfect but what does it mean?

Shambhavi: rusham means peaceful.

He kissed her and caresses her belly.

Rudra: hey buddy..don't be afraid..daddy is here to take care of you. He won't let you happen anything. You are my brave kid. Aren't you? I love you so much.. go back to sleep..

He kissed on her belly. Soon the baby stopped kicking. Shambhavi looks at Rudra lovingly.

Shambhavi: he is very lucky to have you. You'll make a great father.

Rudra kissed on her forehead and make her sleep again.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Great work, Jyo 👏.
The last few months are very critical both for mother and the child, but it is the love of Rudra and Shambhavi for each other that makes both of them face tremendous adversities.
So happy that finally Rudra got a clue of who is doing such things, and he guessed it right, it's Sameeksha.
But the sweetest part the name of the child Rusham so sweet 😃.
And thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hai jyo,
it was awesome update and last few tracks were painful to shambhavi and also to rudra, at last he found out the culprit sameeksha, give a happy ending to RUSHAM family.😊

next story plz write on the same couple moharika with triangle love romantic story
.👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello Jyoti,

Just read the last two updates of this tremendous story and it has ended beautifully. Thanks for this amazing journey of Rudra and Shambhavi and u have ended it with a bang.
Do write more u have the talent for it. Thanks again👏

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