TAAREY HORROR FF : SSSHHHHH... RAAZ HAI! *PART 11*Pg 51* - Page 32

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update...
Song seq was awsum...
Hope Taarey realize their past love story soon
Plz update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just completing my pm's now only
An amazing horror story loving it..
Sorry for commenting late as I was held up with exams and had loads of pm's to complete...
Looking forward for next update
Update it soon :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awasome update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vrindaroxz


It's 10:00 pm in Los Angeles. Keeping her mobile between her ears and shoulder, a girl opens the door of her house. She could hear the phone ringing. Placing the keys on the dressing table, she shifted the phone with her other hand.

Note : Writing a horror story for the 1st time. Hope you guys like it. Plz do like and comment. Criticism is always welcome. This is just a small intro to the characters.

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Somewhere a girl was shouting or screaming...
" AAAHHH !!!"

Boy : (just as the scream ended so did his head-ache) DAMN IT !!! (pressing his forehead) FIR SE NAHI...
Sw : Dude seriously tu ja ke kisi doctor ko kyu nahi dikhata?
Boy : Jaa ke kya bolu doctor ko - "Doc mujhe sudden head-aches hote hai and within 5 mins thik ho jate hai." He'll just say I am crazy. Thats it !
Sw : But Rey ye tu bhi janta hai ki ye normal nahi hai...
R : Dekh agar tujhe kuch abnormal lag raha hai, then I can't help. Ho sakta sudden stress ke wajah se ho...
Sw : But Rey... ( his phone starts ringing. He notices the caller and knows that he can never ignore this call)

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Sharon had finished all the paper works with her clients. She was very happy that her company had got the deal. She wanted her sister to be the first one to know b
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey im sai aishwarya 😊
im new to d forum😊congo on tis ff👏
i jus luvd it n nt oly d writng ka mehanath bt d entire presentation of each n every chaps jus amazing n creditable continue d gud wrk n plz plz plz plz plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey guys. Pehle to sorry for such a late update. Kaan pakad ke sorry. Jitna marna hai mar lo.
PART 11
She kept on staring at Rey without blinking. She was sure she had seen it recently. But would Rey believe her? Would he believe her dreams? How could she share all this with him, a stranger, when she had not shared this even with her own sister? She decided that she was not going to share her secret with him but there was nothing wrong in gathering a bit of information from him.

"Rey wahan us jungle me kaun rehta hai?" she asked, her eyebrows raised.

"Jungle me? Kaun rehta hai?" he stared at her in disbelief. "She's gotta be kidding me !" he thought. "Tanu, I think tumhe rest karna chahiye. Tum thode der aur so jao..."

"So jaon?" she looked at her surrounding and noticed that she was in a well-decorated room. "Rey... hum kahan hai?"

"Mere ghar me..."

"Tum mujhe apne ghar me leke kyu aaye?"

He turned and stared at her with an irritated look on his face "Because. You. Fainted." he said emphasizing each word.

"Ok. Thank you for bringing me here now answer who lives in the forest?"

"Ajib ladki hai !" he thought. With a smirk on his face, he said "Jungle me..."

"Ya... Jungle me... batao na Rey"

"Wahan... us andhere jungle me..." he crept behind her as she sat her eyes closed waiting for the answer. " Bhoot rehte hain... BOOO "

She jumped as he shouted from behind. She stared at him, anger in her eyes, and threw the pillow at him. " I am going ! Bye " and she got up to leave.

"Ja kahan rahi ho?"

"Apni behen ke ghar !"

"Matlab wapas us jungle me jaa rahi ho ! After all chudail to wahi rehti hai na..."

"YOU... ! " she stomped out of the room in anger. While leaving she took his car keys and left for Sharon's house.

"Arey... wo meri car hai..." Rey shouted running behind his car. "Pagal ladki " he muttered angrily.

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Sharon stared out of the plane's window as it started on the runway. She was now finally going to meet her sister after such a long time. This would be such a great surprise for Taani. She looked at her hubby adoringly who had came up with such a brilliant idea.

Finally the plane took off.

Little did she know that she instead of decreasing, the distance between her and Taani was increasing.

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Taani drove to Sharon's house only to find it locked. She banged the door shut drawing everyone's attention towards her.

"WHAT? BACK TO YOUR BUSSINESS !" she screamed as the people stared at her.

Frustated, she turned back to the car but was surprised to see Rey leaning against the car with a smirk.

"Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?"

"Jahan aap wahan hum..." came the reply.

"How did you know I came here?"

"Har sawal ka jawab nahi hota hai..."

"Guess what... YOU. ARE. IRRITATING !" she shouted at him.

"Jungle me kaun rehta hai janana chahti hai na aap... chaliye hum dikhate hai aap ko."

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He was pacing up and down in his room, frustration clearly visible on his face. He checked his cell for the umpteenth time.

"Great ! How slow can people be?" he said impatiently and decided to call again.

"Any news?" he asked.

"No Sir. We are still tracking your car."

"Why the hell is it taking so long?"

"But Sir it's just been 15 minutes since you asked us to track."
"Stop giving me excuses !"

"But Sir..."

"Speak less and work more !" and without giving a chance for his secretary to reply, Rey disconnected the call.

"Ye ladki gayi to gayi kahan?" He sighed in irritation. "Aur gayi bhi to meri car le ke gayi !" Totally frustrated with the present situation, he closed his eyes and fell on the bed.

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Taani applied the brakes on reaching the destination. Without turning, she simply shouted on the person sitting on the passenger seat "STOP. STARING. ME !"

"Ji? Kuch kaha aapne?"

Taking a deep breath, she repeated again but this time facing him " Rey ! Stop staring! "

"Zara pyaar se kahiye..."

"Pervert !" she said under her breath.

"Humme kuch sunai nahi de raha..." he smirked.

With a sickly sweet smile plastered on her face she said " Please stop staring ME, Re..." she stopped suddenly with a sharp intake of breath.

Taani glanced at the mirror through the corner of her eyes and then back to Rey who was now grinning at her... evilly.

She felt as if someone had punched her in her guts and all the air came out Words seemed to choke her as she stared at the person, her eyes wide with fear. She tried to remove her seat-belt but her hands were numb with fear.

The last words she heard before her world came crashing down as darkness engulfed her were...

"AAP AKHIR HUMARE PAAS AA HI GAYI TAHANI...!"

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"Sir your car has been tracked. It is on the road near the cemetery."

"Cemetery?" Rey asked again.

"Yes Sir. Shall I send someone to bring your car back?"

"Definitely..." he said and then something struck him. "Wait. What do you mean send someone? Ask her to drive my car back!"

"Ask whom?"

"Tanu... I mean the girl who's driving the car." Rey said rolling his eyes.

"But Sir there's no one in the car."

"WHAT?" Rey jumped from his bed and ran downstairs as he disconnected the call and ran to his other car.

He had a gut felling that something bad was going to happen.



WHAT OR RATHER WHO WAS WITH TAANI?

WILL REY FIND TAANI?

OR WAS HISTORY GOING TO REPEAT ITSELF?




NOTE : OK... I know aap sab mujhse naaraz ho for not updating. But I am really sorry guys. DTYHR ka update kal main pakka de dungi. But abhi filhaal ke liye like. comment, criticize and questions (gaalyian bhi) all are allowed and welcomed.

Love you guys and again kaan pakad ke sorry.

P.S. - I have got your PMs. If I have liked then that means I have read your updates and I still have lots of your PMs and I am going back to reading your stories again.






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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awsm update
Loved it
Very scary though
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Why the hell you were 😡
I miss u so much spl ur stry
This prt was scary taani is in
Danger I hope rey find her out
Thanks for PM n Wlcom back
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres
Damn angry wid you!!!
It is after ages dat u r updating!!!
months babe!!!
where were u all THIS TIME??!!!''
Update was awesome though very very very short!!!!
Bt andhere se behtar ek diya hota hai :)
Damn scary yr... I am scared to hell!!
Loved TaaRey nok-jhok!!
man, nooo!!!
Taani ke saath Rey nahi woh spirit hai..
Poor baby!!!
update soon & Must pm me!!
love,
Mohini<3
Edited by TaaRey_VD_AJS - 11 years ago

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