DANGEROUS ISHQ...updated last pt 70 on pg 99 nov 23 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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dance hogayi wo bhi passisionate waali ab iss dance ko dekh kar sab ne dhoka khaaya aur sam bhi gussa hogayi geet se
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 8
awesome dear...
oh so yeh hua tha...
stupid Maan...
poor Geet...
and hes worried about Sam?
yaar then why is he behind Geet now?
does he really love Sam?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update, finally the secret of party is out.
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Part - 9

Geet's apartment...

Geet is still crying lying on her bed...

Someone knocks...

Iss waqt kaun ho saktha?

Sab Chandigarh chale gaye...

Manisha aur Romeo bhi umkke saath unkke madat karne chale gaye hai...

Ab kaun iss waqt yahan aayega?

Aur kissko patha hai ki Geet Chandigarh nahi gayi aur yahan akheli hai...

Shayad uss Maan ko patha chal gay hai kya?

Geet ko thoda dar lagtha...

Lekhin Geet ne bhi decide kar liya hai ki aaj woh uss DD ko nahi chodegi...

Ussko lagtha hai ki bechari Geet bahut boli hai, woh kuch nahi kar sakthi...

Ussko sirf ronna aatha hai, haina babaji? ab mein bhi ussko dikhathi hoon ki ye Geet Handa Hoshiarpur ki sherni hai...

Geet kitchen ke andar jaakke ek bada knife lekhe jaathi...

Ab koi dar nahi hai...

Agar ussne phir se mere saath baktameezi ki toh mein ussko zinda nahi chodonngi...

Geet opens the door hiding the knife at her back...

But to her surprise it's not maan...

It's Dev...

Suddenly her face brightens...

She feels a sigh of relief...

Ab koi dar nahi hai...

She is safe...Dev jo aagaya haina?

Ab koi Geet ko kuch nahi kar saktha...haina?

Geet: dev...

Geet drops the knife and goes and hugs him...

Dev ko patha hai ki Geet kitna dhuki hai...

He tries to console har...

Dev: Geet, ab kyun rothi ho? mein aagaya hoona?

Geet: lekhin tum yahan kaise?

Dev: kyun? Mein yahan nahi aasaktha?

Geet: aaise nahi hai

Dev: lagtha hai ki tum kissi aur ko expect kar rahi thi

Dev shows the knife...

Geet: haan

Dev: Geet, kahin aaise toh nahi ki tumne ye mere liye laya tha?

Geet: Dev, ye kaise baat karthe ho? Actually meinne tumme expect hi nahi kiya tha

Dev: what? Toh mein chaltha hoon Geet, bye

Geet stops him...

Geet: hare, tum yahan aana nahi chahathe haina? issiliye

Dev: mein hamesha aaise hi surprise entry detha hoon, waise tum akheli ho, toh

Geet: what?

Dev: hare, mujhe patha tha ki tum Chandigarh nahi jaanewali ho, aur tumne mera phone bhi answer nahi kiya tha, kal tum itna upset thi toh meinne socha chalo tumse ek bar millkke aatha toh mujhe bhi thoda achcha lagega

Geet: tahnks Dev, tumme patha nahi ki mein suabhe se kitna pareshaan hoon, agar tum nahi aathe toh shayad hi mein pagal hojaathi

Dev: Geet, ab toh tum teek ho gayi haina?

Geet: haan

She tries to smile...

Lekhin Geet abhi bhi bahut dukhi lagthi...

Dev: par Geet, tumme dekhkke aaisa nahi lagtha

Geet: woh...bas Sam ke barein mein soch rahi thi...*Sam ke barein mein ya MSK ke barein mein?)

Dev: Geet, bar bar soch ne se sirf tummari takleef badega, haina?

Geet: par ye Sam toh mujhe galat samajthi hai

Dev: I know, lekhin issmme tummari koi galthi nahi hai Geet

Geet: par Sam ko mujhpe itna bhi barosa nahi? Mein aur woh DD?

Dev ko bhi kuch samaj mein nahi aaya ki Geet ne aaise kaise kiya tha?

Dev: par Geet, tum usske saath kaise? Aur Sam ko toh patha haina ki tum kissi se pyaar karthi ho

Geet: ye sab toh Mr.Handsome ke chakkar se hi hua hai

Dev: meinne kya kiya?

Geet nakli gussa karthi...

Geet: tumne kya kiya?

Geet pretends to hit him...

Dev: hare, tumne hi Sam se vada kiya tha kit um Mr.Handsome ko Sam ke b'day pe milayege, aur tumne mere jagah Maan ko lekhe gaya toh issme meri kya galthi hai?

Geet: teri koi galthi nahi? Babaji, sab mujhe hi galat kehthe?

Dev: kya zaroorat thi usskke saath jaane ki ? ab toh mujhe bhi shak hotha hai ki kahin tummare Mr.Handsome MSK toh nahi?

Geet: Dev, tum bhi?

Dev: no baby, just kidding

Geet: Dev, this is not funny, I just hate that DD, mujhe usskke naam bhi nahi sunna, samje tum?

Dev: teek hai teek hai, ab mujhpe kyun chilathi ho?

Geet: kya? mein chilathi hoon?

Dev: shayad tumme bhi usski hawa lag gayi?

Geet: tumme ye sab mazak lagtha? Tumme toh har cheez mazak hi lagtha hai, ye toh ussi ka natheeja hai

Dev: kya? ab tum mujhpe inzaam lagathi ho?

Geet: haan, na hi tum Mr. Handsome ka game khelthe aur na hi mein aaise pasjaathi

Dev: lekhin Geet, ye khel toh tumne shurru liya tha?

Geet: par ussko continue kissne kiya tha?

Dev: Geet, mujhe patha hai ki tum itne gusse mein kyun ho?

Geet: kya? toh mein gussa karthi hoon

Dev smiles...

Geet: tum hasthe ho?

Dev: Geet, relax, yahan aao

Dev takes her to the dining table...

Dev has got her favourite chaat...

Dev: pehle kuch kalo, phir dekho tummara gussa kaise gayab ho jaatha

Geet: nahi, mujhe bhook nahi hai

Dev: mujhe patha hai Geet, tumne kal se kuch bhi kaya nahi, ab zidd mat karo, aur kuch khalo

Geet couldn't resist any more, she is so happy that atleast Dev believes her

She starts eating...

As her stomach fills she feels a little better...

Dev: Geet, tumne sab ke saath jaya kyun nahi?

Geet: kaise jaathi?

Dev: Geet, tumne aaise yahan rukhkke teek nahi kiya hai, ab sab ko tum pe shak badjayega

Geet: Dev , mein Sam ko kaise samna kar sakthi?

Dev: aaise tum usse chupkke rehthi toh ussko sach kaise patha chalega? Aur usski galatfami kaise dhoor hogi, ulta ussko lagega ki usska shak sach hai

Geet: kya?

Dev: Geet, ab tumme hi ussko bathana padega ki tum kisse pyaar karthi

Dev points himself proudly...

Geet smiles...

Geet: mein abhi chahaithi hoon, sab ko chila chilakke bathaoon ki mein tumse pyaar karthi hoon, aur uss sado se nahi, par kaise?

Dev: yahan se chilakke koi faida nahi hai Geet

Geet: phir mein kya kar sakthi? Sam toh mera phone utathi hi nahi

Geet looks very upset...

Dev: Geet, tum phir se galat soch rahi ho

Geet: kya?

Dev: pehle hi itna confusion hai, ab tum phone pe ussko samjaathi toh Sam aur confuse ho jayegi

Geet: toh hum kya karein?

Dev: tum mujhe Sam ko introduce karo, aur kaho ki yahi mera pyaar hai, this is Mr.Handsome

Geet: lekhin ab Sam Chandigarh mein haina?

Dev: hum bhi Chandigarh chalenge

Geet: Dev, tum mazak toh nahi kar rahe ho?

Dev: Geet, I'm serious

Geet: lekhin dev

Dev: trust me Geet, mein sab kuch teek kardhoonga

Geet: sachi?

Dev: I swear, come on , hurry up, humme abhi nikhalna padega

Geet has already packed up her things...

They leave for Chandigarh...

Ye tha Geet ki pareshaani...Sam ko galatfami ho gayi ki Geet ne ussko dokha diya hai...

Haaan, Geet ne Sam ka boyfriend jo cheenliya haina...

Woh bhi usski apne BF hothe hue bhi Geet kaise Sam ke BF ko usse cheen sakthi?

Yahi toh Sam ko bahut hi bhura laga...

Par ye sab kaise hua?

Aakhir Maan kisse pyaar kartha?

Kya Geet sach mein Dev se pyaar karthi hai?

Maan ka Delhi aane ka ek hi maksat tha...Sameera...

Lekhin Maan ki taqdeer mein Geet hai toh Maan kya kar saktha?

Geet se milthe hi Maan ka nishana badal gaya...

Par Sameera ko bhi nahi chod saktha, she is his first priority...

But Geet is his weakness, his longing, his desire...his necessity...

Jaise MSK kehtha haina? Geet toh ab usski aadat bangayi, aur usski zaroorat bangayi...

Isske pehle hum peeche ki kahaani ko jaanthe hai...

Maneet ke mulakaat kab aur kaise hui?

Aur Geet Maan ko itna nafrat kyun karthi?

Maan Sam ko kaise jaantha?

Ye Sam kaun hai?

Maan Sam ko kaise jaantha?

Dev aur Maan ek dusre ko kaise jaanthe?

Unkke peeche koi na koi raaz toh hai?

Ye sare sawaalon ka jawaab toh pehle aapko bathana padega...

Tabhi toh aapko patha chalega ki Maan yahan kyun aaya hai?

Precap...Maneet ki pehli mulaqat...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 9
awesome...
nice...
poor Geet...
Dev is here to console her...
and this Maan is so so mysterious...
am so confused with whom hes interested in...
cont soon dear...
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Part - 10

On the way to Chandigarh...Geet thinks about the twists and turns of her life...

How she met Maan and how her life turned upside down...

Maan stormed into her peaceful life and from then Maan kept haunting her like a ghost...

Though he is only interested in Sameera and never bothers Geet, still there is some unknown force that drieves them crazy whenever they are in the same place...

Both try to hide it from the other and keep denying that they don't affect each other...

Lekhin donno se kareeb aane se donno ko hi farak padtha hai...

This uncontrolable desire kept brewing inside them like the molten lawa until one day it erupted like a volcano and engulfed them leaving them hurt for ever...

There is no stopping this and they had to succumb to it...

That's what happened to Maan and finally he erupted...

Ye toh Maan ka dimag aur chahat ki ladayi hai...

Maan ka dimag hamesha kehtha hai ki Sameera, par Maan ka chahat toh Geet hai...

Lagtha hai ki anth mein Maan ki kamzori jeet gayi?

Ab Maneet ki ab tak ka safar...

More confusing? just confusing you to keep the story interesting...

Don't worry we will get back to the present after knowing more about Maneet...
6 months back...
Geet holidays ke badh Hohiarpur se abhi abhi lautti hai...

Pinky bhi saath hai...

She heads to the college hostel...

Sameera must be waiting there for her...

Sam calls...

Geet: Sam, hum abhi aathe hai, tum aagayi?

Sam: haan, tum log iss waqt kahan ho?

Geet: meinne kaha na, hum pohunch gaye, abhi abhi taxi lenewale hai

Pinky: taxi

Sam: koi zaroorat nahi, tum log wait karo, mein wahi aarahi hoon, tumme pickup karne

Geet: usski kya zaroorat hai? hum hamesha ki tarah taxi lekhe aathe hai

Sam: Geet, patha haina ki tum kisse baat kar rahi ho? Sameera khanna se, meinne ek bar decide karliya hai toh mein apne baat ko bhi nahi sunthi, samji

Geet: haan haan, mujhe sab patha hai, itna lambi dialogue marne ki koi zaroorat nahi, waise bhi ye mere Sallu ke dialogue hai

Sam: ab meinne boldhiya na? aaj se ye Sam ka dialogue ho gaya, samji?

Pinky: Geet, kitne dher baat karoge, jaldhi andar beito, mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai

Geet: bye Sam

Pinky: Geet, kab se bhula rahi hoon

Geet: Pinky, bahar uthro

Pinky: kyun?

Geet: hare, hum taxi mein nahi jaarahe hai

Taxiwala: ye kya tamasha hai?

Geet: sorry bhai, humme koi lene aaraha hai

Taxi: kahan se aathe hai subhe subhe , ab mere savaari ka kya?

Geet: ye lo 50, ab toh tumme iss savaari se itna hi milega haina?

Taxi: teek hai, teek hai, jaldhi uthro

Pinky: Geet, ye kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: hare, Sam aarahi hai, humme lene

Pinky: Sam? Yahan kaise?

Geet: mujhe bhi abhi abhi patha chala

Pinky: achcha tum rukho, mein koi snacks lekhe aathi hoon

Sam comes...woh kudh drive karkke aathi...

Uncle bhi saath hai...

Uncle kabhi Sam ko drive karne nahi dethe...

Lekhin Sam jaise bhi moka doondhkke gadhi lekhe goomne jaathi...

L;ekhin kuch bhi ho, uncle Sam ko kabhi bhi akhele kahin bhi jaane nahi dethe...

Geet: namasthe uncleji

Uncle: hai Geet, toh kaise hai meri girl friend

Uncle is a very cool guy...he always calls Geet GF...

Geet: I'm good, toh aap kaise hai boyfriend

Uncle: itne din tumse dekha nahi na? dekho kitna pathla ho gaya hoon

Geet: koi baat nahi, mein aagayi na, toh pehle kahan jaathe?

Sam: Dad, this is not good, mujhe patha hai ki aap ka kya plan hai?

Jab bhi uncle aathe hai woh Geet aur Pinky ke saath Delhi goomne ke chakkar mein sare street food kathe hai

Doctor ne toh salt, spice, sugar aur jitna bhi swaad hai sabko mana kiya hai

Lekhin aaise bahar aathe toh uncle ko koi control nahi kar pathe...

Uncle ne toh yahi shard pe Sam ko drive karne diya hai...

Pinky comes with bread bhaji...

Pinky: uncle, ye aap ke liye hai

Uncle: pinky, ab toh tum hi meri GF ho

Uncle winks at her...

Geet: ye kya BF? Apne GF ke samne koi aur ladhki ko GF kaise keh sakthe ho?

Uncle: hare ye koi aur nahi, hummari apni Pinky hai

Sam: Dad, ab chalein, inkko apna surprise dikhana haina?

Geet: surprise?

Zaroor uncle koi nayi gadhi lekhe aaye honge, Sam ke liye...

She has been pestering him for her own car for a long time...

But uncle had rejected her plea saying that she has not yet got her license...

Ab toh sam ne license bhi leliya hai...

Uncle: toh chalo, ab mein drive kartha hoon

Geet and party start talking about the holiday adventures...

After a while uncle stops the car and Geet peeps out...

Geet: BF, hum kahan aaye hai? ye toh hummare hostel nahi lagtha

Sam: Geet, jaldhi uthro

Sam Geet ke haath pakadkke ussko bahar nikaalthi...

uncle: hare sam, sambalkke, mere GF kahin ghir na jaathi

Geet: Sam, mujhe patha hai tum mujhe kahan lekhe jaa rahi ho?

Sam: kya? Tumme kaise patha? Dad, toh aapne pehle hi apna GF ko bathadhi? Meinne mana kiya tha na? ab dekho aapne hummare surprise ko karab kardhi

Uncle: hare Sam, meinne kuch nahi kaha

Geet: Sam, mein toh pehle hi jaanthi thi ki iss saal uncle tujhe zaroor nayi gadhi lekhe denge, haina uncle?

Uncle: GF, mujhe uncle mat kaho, mein toh abhi bhi jawaan hoon, dekho

Sam: Geet, gadhi nahi, ye hummara ghar hai, hummara kudh ka apartment, ab toh uss jail se chutti

Sam toh apne dad se do saal se ek apartment maang rahi thi...

Lekhin uncle Sam ko bahar akhele rehne nahi dena chahathe hai...

Sam uncle's only daughter haina?

Issiliye unkke ladli hai...

Sam bhi thoda Geet ki tarah innocent hai...

She is stubborn and just wants everything she likes...

But dil se toh abhi bhi bachi hai...

Ussko thoda garv hai ki woh business tycoon Mr.Sandeep Khanna ki beti hai...

Issiliye hi Sam se sab bahut darthe hai...

She is the gang leader in their college...

Geet is surprised to see the high class residence...

Sammera: Geet, kya dekhthi ho? aaj se hum yahi rehnawale hai, chalo guys

Sam and party enter their new apartment...

Everyone is excited...

Geet shares a room with Sam while Tasha and Pinkt share the other...

Ye hostel se kitna behthar hai...

Ye toh unkke ghar se bhi bahut achca hai...

Sam is used to this kind of uber class but this is new for the others...

They feel like some princess staying at a royal palace...

This is not less than any palace...

They just love it...

Sam: toh guys, kaise lag hummara naya ghar

Geet: ghar? Ye toh ghar kam aur Mahal zyada lagtha hai

Pinky: fantastic Sam, hummara apna ghar! Woh bhi apna kitchen aur cook ke saath, and arefrigerator full of goodies, I just love it

Pinky toh ab kitchen se bahar nahi aayegi?

Tasha: silly girl, ye toh 24*7 kahthe hi raheggi, just look at this place! Kya furnishing hai? kya lighting hai? aur ye decors? This is awesome, this is unbelievable, so cool

Geet: apne friends bhi saath hai, kitna mazaa aayega, haina?

Tasha: this is great Sam, I feel very lucky, tummare jaise friend milna toh bahut mushkil hai

Geet: thak you uncle, sorry BF

Uncle: GF, ye Sam ke liye nahi, ye toh sirf tere liye hai

Uncle winks...

Geet: mujhe patha hai, aapko mere haath ka coffee chahiye , haina?

Sam: Geet, nahi, dad , no caffine, Dr uncle ko phone karoon kya?

Geet: hare Sam, mere BF ko kyun blackmail karthi ho?

Sam: ab coffee banthi hi ho. toh chalo mein tummari madat katthi hoon

Uncle: what? Nahi nahi, Sam tum kitchen mein jaakke kya karogi? Tumme toh cheeni aur namak ka farak bhi nahi patha, tummare liye toh donno safed hi hothe hai, tum takleef kyun akrthi ho? manisha haina

Manisha is the caretaker & Romeo is their driver...

Mr.khanna doesn't want the girls to stay alone...

Manisha: Sam baby, tum hot cholate loge?

Sam: Manishaaa, stop calling me baby

Manisha runs inside the kitchen...

Mr.Khanna leaves after they settle...

Next morning...time for college...

Manisha: breakfast ready

After breakfast...

Pinky: hare, sab kahan hai?

Geet: Pinky, jaldhi kar

Romeo bhi aagaya...

Romeo: Gud morning m'am

Sam: mir, tasha, ye Geet aur Pinky itne dher kyun lagathe hai?

Tasha: how would I know?

Tasha aaram se lip gloss laga rahi hai...

Romeo instantly likes her...

He looks at her and drools...

Romeo: gu gu gud mor Tasha m'am

Tasha turns her back to him...

Sam gets in the car and starts blowing the horn...

Geet knows that it's for her...

She runs yo stop sam...

Hoshiarpur express bina break ke chal rahi thi...

Aur tension mein samnewale se takraathi...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nics part😊
Geet maan ke alaava kisse takrayegi😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 10
awesome dear...
finally finally my doubts and confusions will be cleared...
so her father has bought a new house for them to stay...
cont soon dear...
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awesome part
now all confusion gonna clear
geet again bumbed into maan
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slowly sab confusion clear hothi jaarahi hai
indono ki attraction without knowing only lead them to this stage

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