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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

Hehee...your note on translation reminded me that I haven't commented since your last chapter ..and that means i have been more late-lateef than even you Ji 😳 😆

I don't think I qualify to comment on this, as I keeping competing with myself in the delay relay 😆
Maafi... But my excitement is running high with the end note of a promised updated tonight ... I have been missing this story so much !! Well there is so much to miss in here !! Miri's childish wits... Her mother's child-womanly wit Hehee ..Maan's in-depth ways of manipulation in the case of Brij and Pari Godbole... The insanely hilarious crap from the beautiful Pari's Mouth and ufff so much more !!
All the characters are a manifestation of some real and some fictional. I only hope I manage to blend the two together seamlessly😳

But I wish for a window of seclusion the most!! - Amidst the discovery mission that Maan is on.. on Geet's past ... and this window of seclusion with just Maan, Geet and Maahiii ... Haaye.. so much needs to be said through the eyes..needs to be felt in their beats ..beats that are beginning to thud for each other ...and so much needs to be touched 😳 ... And I mean touched ..to touch beyond the surface of their facade: The solace of companionship hidden beneath the staggering loneliness of Maan's and the innocence and naivety behind the pain and scars of past for Geet.
Haaye... I can already imagine so many brilliant focal points of chemistry and and even physiological biology ( whaddupp reference to Ms Physio Handa...loooll) sizzling on the screen of 'Binding ties'... And all this is just my imagination ...what you will brilliantly write will only escalate the beauty of their binding relation so many times more...
******** Uff the above has been just my thoughts and wishes ...
I am reading the above paragraph in awe and wondering to myself, is she really talking about my story.😲 No surely not. And I think I might officially be ready to pass the writing baton of continuing this story to you. You can continue it with my full blessings.😆

Will I be able to fulfill the high expectations you have from me I wonder? Even as I fear the expectations, your words push me towards striving for excellence.😳

On a side note, I would really like to hear what it is that you would like to see?
Is there perhaps a particular scene that you want to see played out. If there is, please do share. I would love to write it, better yet I would love to see you write a scene for BT. I think it will be amazing.😳
Think about it, ok?😉

But coming to the last of the latest chapter...
The description of the split screensaver I relished atleast a few times over, so to digest the beauty of expressions in your words ! From the streaks of silver on her cheeks which Maan trailed over the screen with his fingers to the tumbled wheelchair on the end, I felt like I watched not the photo but that moment in time in actuality through a zoom mode in slow motion with your words.. everything in that pic was so crystal clear that I guess just like Maan realised in the end, so did I along with him, that I have fallen head over heels for this writer who writes so fabulously welll. 👏 ⭐️

This was one of the first few scenes that I had written for this story. I wrote and re-wrote it over and over again, till I was marginally satisfied. I did not know how it was going to play out, but I am really glad that it had the desired impact and that you liked it😳
I hope you will still be head over heels with me after reading the next chapter, unlike a certain somebody.😉😆

PS: with regards to translations... I am waiting for whatever you dish out of your multi talented writing basket ...the language of love transcends through any language even without its translation. 😃 😳

I read this comment and then re-read it. Honestly Mishti you have such a beautiful way of moulding words and making them dance to your tune. Words flow like molten magic through those fingers of yours😳
You really made my day with this beautiful comment.
Thanks for being here Mishti
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Ok I have not given any translation this time. Not much conversation anyways. However if anybody wants translation do tell me, I will add it in.😃




CHAPTER 23

It was just past midnight when Maan entered through the double doors of the Khurana Residency. It was very quiet except for the muffled sound of his footsteps as he made his way upstairs towards his rooms. It was a series of interconnected rooms, at the beginning of which was a gym equipped with the state of the art exercise equipment. Beyond that was a fully functional home office and the last room was his bedroom. He entered his bedroom, shut the door, leaned against it and closed his eyes. Geet's image floated before him. His eyes popped open immediately. He exchanged his clothes for a pair of track pants and began a punishing routine with the punching bag. He was determined to exhaust his mind and body until he could not hold on to a single thought. He punched the bag rhythmically for 2 hours straight, then went into the bathroom and freshened himself up. He walked into his bedroom, drew back the covers on the bed, slid in and closed his eyes. And there she was again. The joyous eyes, the silver tears trailing down her cheeks, the laughing lips, the outstretched hands. He pushed back the covers, picked out yet another pair of track pants and this time practiced some martial arts moves. Another couple of hours later he slid back into bed and Geet Handa's joyous face greeted him yet again behind closed eyes.

"Ahhh." He punched his pillow in frustration and jumped out of bed yet again. He changed into a pair of jeans, pulled on a white shirt, grabbed his car keys and pounded down the stairs. The guards at the gate on night duty saluted him. He acknowledged their greeting with a nod as he drove off into the darkness of the night.


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Geet was fast asleep when she felt a small hand shaking her awake.

"Mmm. Kya hua Miri?"

"Mumma su su jana hai."

"Thik hain chalo."

"Nahi main jaaongi, tum bulao."

"Mmm thik hai. Jao."

Miri walked out of the room and started walking down the corridor which was dimly lit, towards the bathroom.

"Mumma"

"Miri"

"Mumma"

"Miri"

"Mumma"

"Miri"

"Mumma"

...

"Mumma"

...

Miri, who was almost at the bathroom door, raced back to the bedroom and wailed out loudly.

"Mumma Mumma tum ruk kyu gayi? Main dar gayi na phir."

Geet who had fallen into a drowsy slumber while calling out Miri's name snapped awake at the accusing note in her daughter's voice.

"Sorry bete. Mumma is really sorry. Su su kiya?"

"Nahi kiya. Tumne mujhe awaz nahi di toh main bathroom ke darwaaze se waapis aa gayi."

Geet bit back a grin hearing the irritation in her daughter's voice.

"Accha chalo main aati hoon tumahre saath."

"Nahi tum idhar hi raho, par uthke baith jao. Nahi toh tum phir se so jaaogi"

Geet arose from the bed and leaned against the pillow. They started the name calling routine all over again. Her daughter was slowly turning independent and was determined to do things on her own. She had started going to the bathroom on her own since the past couple of weeks, but she needed to hear Geet's voice, during the whole journey. The bedroom was feeling slightly stuffy to her, so she arose from the bed, drew back the curtains on the window and opened one pane to draw in some fresh air.

A familiar looking car with its headlights turned off was parked directly across the street. The street lamp was a little ahead and it's light faintly touched the car. She saw a vague movement in the driver's seat and frowned. It looked similar to the one that Maan had driven her and Miri back in the day before; but, since it was parked sideways she could see neither the make nor the model.

Geet you are crazy. Why will the Khurana's car be here at this time of the night?

She leaned out of the window to take a closer look at the car when she heard Miri's voice from behind.

"Mumma kya dekh rahi ho bahaar? Mujhe bhi dekhna hai."

"Kuch nahi bete, koi gaadi hai udhar usse dekh rahi thi.Chalo chodo so jaate hai."

Miri raised herself on her tiptoes and peeked outside the window.

"Arey Mumma yeh toh Sheru ki car hain. Mumma andar koi hain." She suddenly gasped and clapped her hands over her mouth, her eyes shining with excitement as she looked at her mother.

"Mumma kahi gaadi mein Sheru toh nahi?"

Before Geet had a chance to stop her, Miri leaned out of the window and started yelling loudly, while furiously waving both her arms.

"Sheru...Sheru.

Geet clasped her hand over Miri's mouth and pulled the window pane shut and drew the curtains against it.

"Miri woh tumhara sheru nahi hain. Woh yaha iss waqt kyu aayenge?"

"Ye koi rah chalta gadiwala hoga, jise gaadi chalate chalate shayad nind aa rahi thi, toh thodi der ke liye ruk gaya."

She thought it was a more likely a drunk driver loitering there unable to drive the car properly on the roads.

"Pata nahi ye log sharaab pike gadi kyu chalate hain. Bilkul nikkame." She muttered under her breath.

She heard the squeal of brakes and she assumed that the car had taken off.

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Maan Singh Khurana you are a patient eligible for the psyche ward. What the bloody hell were you doing parked outside the Handa household. You were almost caught in that criminally foolish act of yours by the little pixie.

All evening his mind had been a jumbled mess. His eyes refused to let go off the picture of Geet he had seen on Brij's computer. However his mind refused to accept the pure, unadulterated gut wrenching emotion he had felt in that moment. He had been driving aimlessly on the streets of Delhi, past 4:00 AM in the early morning, trying to bring some order to the chaos in his mind; when he found himself involuntarily parked in front of the Handa house.

He had been rattled hard at this unconscious act of his and had been getting ready to drive off, when a light had turned on in the bedroom facing the road. He'd held his breath unconsciously, when suddenly the window had popped open and there she had been again. Loose curls, ruffling in the breeze that gently washed over her. He'd frowned and wondered why he could not see her face properly. The whole evening she had been clearly visible whenever he had closed his eyes. He had been drinking in her silhouette hungrily, when suddenly a tiny voice had yelled the words "Sheru, Sheru" and he had seen two tiny arms waving at him furiously. That is when the reality of his situation had hit him hard. He had also realized that the Geet standing in the window was not a figment of his imagination, but the real deal and the reason he had not been able to see her face was because the light was behind her.

He had taken off from there like a bat out of hell. Had Miri seen him? It was impossible. The car had been in the shadows and the lightly tinted windows had surely masked his identity. Perhaps it had been the familiar car that had prompted the little girl's outburst. He hoped that it was so, coz he could not bear to think of the embarrassing alternative.

He took a deep breath and slammed his hand on the steering wheel.

Damn it!! Enough was enough. He was not in love with Geet Handa.

He got out of the car in front of KR and handed the keys to the guards there for parking. This time as he went up the stairs, his footsteps rang with determination. He made his way to his home office, pulled out his laptop from the bag and opened up an Excel spreadsheet. He was not a person given to emotional decisions. Logical reasoning had always been his approach to seemingly impossible problems and he decided to approach the emotional confusion he found himself facing, as he would any other problem. He started listing the events that had led him to the emotional downfall on seeing that picture of Geet..

It had all started with seeing a distraught Geet hurt herself on that glass. He had a perfectly logical explanation for that. He had been brought up by his parents to respect and protect the members of the opposite sex. Instead he had been indirectly responsible for her injury. That had been the first step to him being shaken up.

Secondly, Dev's outburst and the revelation of his misplaced guilt had dragged Maan's emotional barriers even further down. In that moment when Geet Handa had been able to reach out to his brother, when nobody else could, he had felt an overwhelming sense of gratitude towards her.

Thirdly, he could not deny that there was an intense physical attraction between them that fogged up his logical thinking, whenever he was in her vicinity.

Fourthly, on hearing that she had been shot by her very own father... He got out of the chair and punched the solid wall behind me. How dare any man try to hurt her. How dare anybody take a shot at her. She was just a soft vulnerable...

"Ahhh!! God Damn it Maan. You are losing focus again."

He ran his hands through his hair in frustration, gave his head a hard shake to snap out of the lingering anger, settled back in the chair and focused on the list once again. He carefully deleted the fourth item on the list. He was going to deal with the fact that she had been shot at, at a later time.

Finally he listed the last item...The picture. What was it about the picture that had gotten to him so much, he wondered. He let his mind drift back to the photograph. Seeing that look of sheer triumph, of overcoming had been a pure joy to watch. Suddenly a light bulb went off in his head. That was it. That look of triumph was the one that he someday wanted to see on his little brother's face. That desire to see his brother overcome his handicap and seeing the manifestation of it, right in front of his eyes in the form of Geet's picture, was what had shaken him up so much. It had not been the image of Geet Handa herself that had impacted him.

Maan glanced at the clock on the laptop. It was 5:30 AM and finally after a long and restless night he had it all figured out. He had not lost it after all. Everything was slotted into back into it's proper place and finally he was at peace.

The only thing that did not make it to the logical list of Maan Singh Khurana was the actual source that had started it all. The photograph in his mobile of the screen saver called, Geet's Victory.'

He neither deleted it, nor acknowledged it. It was there waiting.

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A short narrative:

It was actually my sister who was the source for Miri's bathroom adventure. She was three at the time and it was my father who had to call out to her, coz the bathroom was at the end of a long corridor and my mother's voice did not make it all the way to the bathroom. She would come back racing and jump on my baba's stomach to wake him up if he fell asleep in the middle of calling it and if she had not completed her peeing business.


Edited by Susegad - 11 years ago
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😃
Tee hee!

I was giggling when Mr. Khurana pulled up the Excel spreadsheet. It is something I do😆

mr. Khurana the river in Egypt is calling out to you... De nile... denial as much as you can

loved Miri again..

doll baby

Sheru ko almost pakkad liya😆

Haiyee I loved it so much😃
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


thank u first for updating ...🤗

love the update ..
so sheru aka maan fell in love but still so stiff to admit it ..
aare maan aacche accheman gaye toh aap kya cheez hai ..
maan went at hh 4 in the morning ..mimi calling up sheru ...
love that ..can imagine maan's face worth watching ..
maan finding out logics what attract him towards..
haha again failing ..


wait to see when he confess geet ..

thank u for awesome update ..
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tum raat ke char baje bhuton ke jaise kyu jaag rahi ho Avi😲
Ab bhoot mafia ka adda phir se re-open karna padega lagta hai😆
Still jetlegging?
Migraine is better?😃
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Originally posted by: Susegad

Tum raat ke char baje bhuton ke jaise kyu jaag rahi ho Avi😲

Ab bhoot mafia ka adda phir se re-open karna padega lagta hai😆
Still jetlegging?
Migraine is better?😃


jetlagged and taking a break from office work😃 ghar se kar rahi hu

u r updating?

waah👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


jetlagged and taking a break from office work😃 ghar se kar rahi hu

u r updating?

waah👏


Good for you. Tum bohot zyada kam karti ho.🤢
India se aayi sidhe kaam pe lag gayi. Hope you get a nice break😃

Yeah yeah even I am shocked that I am updating😲
But these days I have time on my hand and my brain is cooperating with me.
Toh socha lage haathon dono stories ka kalyan kar hi doon.
Will try to give as many updates as I can this month😉

This might be the first time since we are on the forum that my late night has coincided with your early morning nahi?😆

Edited by Susegad - 11 years ago
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Good for you. Tum bohot zyada kam karti ho.🤢
India se aayi sidhe kaam pe lag gayi. Hope you get a nice break😃

Yeah yeah even I am shocked that I am updating😲
But these days I have time on my hand and my brain is cooperating with me.
Toh socha lage haathon dono stories ka kalyan kar hi doon.
Will try to give as many updates as I can this month😉

This might be the first time since we are on the forum that my late night has coincided with your early morning nahi?😆


Yeah😆 Usually I don't check IF in the morning unless I have to give passwords to anyone for TL

I don't work hard just long😃 hours

Hubby is jetlagged too so he wants Bhakri at 4 in the morning, lol

off to read the update.

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Nish your PM says in the eyes of beholder🤣
so jao

GN😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Yeah😆 Usually I don't check IF in the morning unless I have to give passwords to anyone for TL

I don't work hard just long😃 hours

Hubby is jetlagged too so he wants Bhakri at 4 in the morning, lol

off to read the update.


Bhakri. Ohhh yummy. My kaku makes the roundest yummiest bhakris.
Bhakri ka naam sunke muje phir se bhook lag gayi.😭
Dinner is long since digested.
Ok going to eat a banana and I am off to bed
Mera good night Avi
Waiting for TUTIKH next chapter 😳


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