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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

fantastic os, shriya !

and welcome to RR forum...wow !another writer...the more, the merrier !!

plz write more.😃

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

I literally could not contain my smile at the end! Short and sweet :)

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

aaw!he reflected his commitment in his own way.

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Hope

@Hope

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Beautifully written... That last few lines were so well written... Loved reading it.

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HappilyLost

@HappilyLost

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

loved it thoroughly !!. I have read your works and i won't start about a particular story of yours here, but i just love your stories!.
This is one of those stories which apart from being beautifully written managed to bring a smi8le to your face with the over brimming innocence!. I could imagine the scene while reading and i think that is the biggest accomplishment for a writer. But i have a complain! This was too short . Can we get a part 2 please?

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1sarun

@1sarun

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Enjoyed your writing, nice read. Do continue.

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Welcome to RR forum.

Nice OS. The end was hilarious. How he conveys his whereabouts to her.. 😆
Looking forward for more from you.

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goguma

@goguma

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

aww ... he indirectly let her know of his whereabt ... isn't that sweet...?🤗

hey, i rmbr your works on Arshi, and they're AWESOME...!

i hope this is not the only one for PaRud ... pls write more ...☺️