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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: fairylover

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First of all... Kalpi was always a selfish and practical gal.. We have seen it post leap in first 4-5 episodes.. She dint bother to tell her mother about her swimming competition.. She let her mother worry for her safety but dint tell her that she learnt swimming. Even Kamla also told Vitthal that "I lost my daughter.. She doesn't share anything with me and Sometimes it's hard for me to realize that she is in the home." Kalpi is doing the same.. So I dnt think Kalpi has changed.. That time Kalpi was hurt coz her mother saved Pakhi instead of her and this time she is hurt coz her mother prayed for Ra..Khi relationship.

Secondly... Kalpi can never hurt anyone intentionally.. N as I said in previous many posts.. Kalpi is not doing all this to hurt Kamla. U can see the Vada pao part.. She has seen sadness on her mother's face and picked one from the tray to make her happy. But than Roshni entered with burger and she forgot about vada pao.. Kalpi has seen this many times in her life.. Kamla has done the same with her and claimed that she loves both Kalpi and Pakhi. So I feel Kalpi thinks that it's normal for Kamla.

Most imp thing.. U said Kalpi is hurting Kamla by calling someone else as maa... I think I have explained Roshni-Kalpi bond very well and her reason for calling Roshni Maa. Kalpi never thought of Kamla while doing this.. When someone else can call Kamla ayi than why can't we accept Kalpi calling someone else as maa. Sorry but in this case I felt u failed to understand the emotional bond between Kalpi and Roshni.

Coming to Raghav.. Kalpi is a human being.. why we always expect her to be a devi and forget other's deeds... When Raghav thought about himself while marrying Pakhi than why Kalpi can't take decision to move on.. Kalpi has never forgave Kalpoors for their mistakes.. She fought with Rags as well for her promotion and most of all she accepted Pakhi's challenge for her mother.. Kalpi was always a fighter and right now she is fighting with her emotions becoz the person whom she loved most ditched her on the altar.. His that one mistake not only hurt her but her father as well whom she loved dearly. I believe the trust once broken can't be mended again.. So Kalpi can forgive Raghav but can't accept him. N Raghav dint commit one mistake only.. U can check the history.. He insulted her various times and never apologized. He dint came on time o meet her parents.. He wasn't bother to call her before taking a decision of revenge marriage and most of all.. he had guts to come in front of her after marrying some other girl. He left Kalpi to bear all the taunts from society. Will u call it as only 1 mistake?? For me it's crime. Kalpi was strong enough to not commit suicide else I have read few cases where girl committed suicide after some sort of humiliation to her and her family.

P.S. : Strictly my POV. Urs can differ,

your all points are correct... no doubt in it.
but i must say HAR INSAAN KO APNI GALTI SUDHARNE KA EK MAUKA MILNA CHAHIYE.
i know raghav did several mistakes but i think you heard that PYAAR KI PEHLI SIDI NAFRAT HOTI HAI.i know raghav insulted her so many times but after that they fall in love with each other , agar kalpi raghav se ki hui insult dimag mein rakhti to woh kabhi bhi raghav se pyaar nai karti, raghav bhi uski insult isiliye karta tha taki vo kalpi ko majbut bana sake.he didn't meant t heart her.he always apologized for his mistskes like after project presentation just coz of misunderstandind he fired her but sais sorry for that to kalpi in car while coming from pakhi home.and after cutlery breaking fiasco he said sorry to her.
he didn't came in time to meet her parents coz he want to make her true result in front of everyone coz fake result became a wall btw her nd her mother in terms of trust.
he came to kalpi after marrying pakhi coz he don't want to loose her trust nd even dont want to lie her...as he said to her thatMAIN CHAHKAR BHI TUMSE (KALPI) JHUT NAI BOL SAKTA his this statement reflects the true love for kalpi.
coming to kalpi i know she suffers a lot in all manner but still she should give a chance to raghav to rectify his mistakes and m sure he will do it...if kalpi love is true she will definately give a chance to raghav...coz as your story said raghav is still trying to find out kalpi's whereabouts, this shows his love

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

your all points are correct... no doubt in it.
but i must say HAR INSAAN KO APNI GALTI SUDHARNE KA EK MAUKA MILNA CHAHIYE.
i know raghav did several mistakes but i think you heard that PYAAR KI PEHLI SIDI NAFRAT HOTI HAI.i know raghav insulted her so many times but after that they fall in love with each other , agar kalpi raghav se ki hui insult dimag mein rakhti to woh kabhi bhi raghav se pyaar nai karti, raghav bhi uski insult isiliye karta tha taki vo kalpi ko majbut bana sake.he didn't meant t heart her.he always apologized for his mistskes like after project presentation just coz of misunderstandind he fired her but sais sorry for that to kalpi in car while coming from pakhi home.and after cutlery breaking fiasco he said sorry to her.
he didn't came in time to meet her parents coz he want to make her true result in front of everyone coz fake result became a wall btw her nd her mother in terms of trust.
he came to kalpi after marrying pakhi coz he don't want to loose her trust nd even dont want to lie her...as he said to her thatMAIN CHAHKAR BHI TUMSE (KALPI) JHUT NAI BOL SAKTA his this statement reflects the true love for kalpi.
coming to kalpi i know she suffers a lot in all manner but still she should give a chance to raghav to rectify his mistakes and m sure he will do it...if kalpi love is true she will definately give a chance to raghav...coz as your story said raghav is still trying to find out kalpi's whereabouts, this shows his love

Thank u for reading my story and liking it.. I know Raghav loves Kalpi truely but it's difficult for a guy to accept his gf as someone else's wife. I am sure Raghav would have created havoc on seeing Kalpi with some other guy unlike Kalpi who is keeping her calm on seeing Ra..Khi.

Coming to these post.. I agree that Raghav apologized twice to her. But my only point is whether Rags dint got time to call her before marriage? It was court marriage and Kalpi was waiting till late night so I am supposing that Raghav has enough time to explain his dilemma to her.

N Raghav came there coz Pakhi wanted them to meet Kamla maa and not for Kalpi. So before coming there he should have thought about Kalpi's emotions as well. Raghav dint lie to Kalpi but he can hurt her.. Isn't that stupidity??

About result fiasco.. Who gave Raghav the rights to decide on Kalpi's behalf.. Kalpi's priority was her parents and not result. Raghav should have at least buy some time depicting some or the other reason instead of letting her wait. The 2 days were most difficult for her and her family. She was living under insecurity that whether Rags will come or not.. In fct she was about to throw his gifts but he appeared just in time. I felt that was rude on his part. For Raghav it was always about what he feels is correct.. He never considers Kalpi's feelings.

Kalpi's love is true.. she can give chance to Raghav but will she be ever able to feel secure in his presence?? I feel she will be always living in the fear that Raghav may do something without consulting her which may cause few losses. A practical girl like Kalpi would not like to live such life.. Not talking about the current Kalpi of show.. She is dumb, emotional fool and Kamla's puppet. I am talking about the Kalpi which was introduced post leap.

One more thing.. Kalpi loved her father the most.. Raghav humiliated him in front of the society by leaving her daughter on altar.. Vitthal who always supported RagNa is now opposing them.. Do u think Kalpi should go against him for Raghav. What was Vitthal's fault in all this??

Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago

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@shahsb_26

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Vish..!!! I must say its going on great ...!! sorry am unable to comment upon it everytime..!! cuz.. I sit in train and read it. from cell and I cannot log in for some reason from there..!!
But it's amazing..! waiting to know ahead..

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: shahsb_26
Vish..!!! I must say its going on great ...!! sorry am unable to comment upon it everytime..!! cuz.. I sit in train and read it. from cell and I cannot log in for some reason from there..!!
But it's amazing..! waiting to know ahead..

No issues Seju.. M happy that at least u r reading it. Thank u for liking it as well.😊

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hello guys.. Updating part 29 of the story.. No faltu rant today.. Straight to update

Kalpi is waiting for Roy at the cafe.. It starts raining outside.. Kalpi calls Roy but it doesn't connect. She has assured Roshni that Roy will come to close cafe and she will leave with him but now she is not sure whether Roy will come today or not.. she comes out to look for the auto outside but no one is ready to go in rain. She thinks to stay at hostel for today as it's at walking distance but than remembers that Kamla is waiting for her and starts walking to search auto.. Few goons start following her.. She walks hurriedly to avoid them and start calling Roy furiously but fails to connect. She curses her decision for leaving restaurant alone. She also forget her spray and other safety items she used to keep with her. She increases her speed to go towards the main door and starts running.. Goons following her.. one goon screams at other to run fast and cover from left.. Kalpi gets scared but doesn't turn around and keeps running when one goon holds her hand and she trips to the ground.. She looks around and finds herself surrounded by 4 goons.. She requests them to take whatever they want but let her go.. One goon tell her to handover her purse and all the jeweleries. Kalpi gives them all and tells them to leave her now when other goon misbehaves with her..

Goon : What so hurry sweetheart.. Let us taste u once.. U look like a jelly.. this sweet sweet cheeks...With this beauty u are playing with our heart and now throwing tantrums.. Come to us.. We promise u won't feel much pain..

Kalpi tries to get up and run when one of the guys holds her and tries to kiss her.. She pushes him back when other one stops her and passes her to the first telling to show this girl her aukat.. That goon again tries to force himself on Kalpi when Kalpi pushes him again and in this process she too falls on other side.. One guy comes and holds her from the shoulder when she gets scared.. but that guy picks her up and she looks at him.. He is Roy. She hugs him tightly. He comforts her and looks at her saree being all dirty.. He takes out her coat and wraps it around her.. He takes out his watch as well and tells Kalpi to go and sit in the car. The goon yells at him telling not try to be hero and let them have the girl..

Roy : Don't dare to take her name from ur dirty mouth.. Else u won't go home alive today.. How dare u touch my Kalpi..

Goon : Kalpi.. Nice name.. Looks like the girl is very important to u.. Go home kid else u will lose ur life today..

Roy : This girl is more important to me than my life.. Do not dare to mess with her

A goon attacks Roy and he fights back to him.. Other to follow the suit.. Roy starts fighting with everyone.. She has overpowered everyone when one of the goon hits him with the Rod.. He falls on the road.. Kalpi gets worried on it.. She takes out her cellphone and calls the cop.. Roy bounces back and again starts fighting with the goon.. One goon takes out his knife and injures him in the hand.. Roy gets hold of him and throws him in the air.. Cops arrives and gets hold of everyone. Kalpi too comes out of the car and rushes towards Roy.. She looks at his wound.. When cop handover her belongings to them and praises Roy for his bravery. Kalpi takes out her hanky from the clutch and ties it on his wound. Kalpi wants to thank him but her tears doesn't let her speak a word.. She starts crying bitterly when Roy hugs her.. She clutches her fist on his arms..He feels pain but stays mum on seeing Kalpi's condition.. He cups her face and lifts his face to look into her eyes..

Roy : Everything is fine Kalpi.. u r safe and me too.. Thank u for calling cops..

Kalpi : I was scared..I was scared to lose u.. But thank u.. I dnt know what would have happened to me..

Roy : But what are u doing here.. Why u came alone?? Wasn't u suppose to come with mom??

Roy : I was waiting for u at cafe but u dint come so I thought to leave alone. I am sorry.

Kalpi breaks the hug and tells him not to tell anything to maa as she will get tensed.. Roy assures her that he won't. Roy drops her at the home.. Kalpi comes out of the car to get inside the house.. Roy stays there to ensure that she enters safely. Kalpi turns back and looks at him waiting. They share and eyelock when she waves her hand in bye and gestures him to live as she is safe now.. Roy moves her car a bit and Kalpi rings the bell. She turns around to see Roy but he has already left, she smiles and looks at the coat around her.. Kamla opens the door.. Kalpi enters and closes the door back.. Roy who has just moved his car a bit and was watching Kalpi from far smiles and leaves.

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Kamla notices the coat and wants to talk to the Kalpi about Roy but doesn't know where to start from when Payal enters and tells Kalpi that she came early as her frn got discharged from hospital.. He asks Kalpi about the event when Kalpi gives a faded smile saying it was fine.. Kalpi was still thinking about the incident and Roy. Payal keeps on blabbering and Kamla was listening to them. In her talk Payal reveals to Kamla that Kalpi has to join Oberoi industries tomorrow. Kamla gets shocked on knowing that it was decided and Kalpi dint share it with her.. Kalpi who was least interested in talk excuses them and goes to her room.. Payal follows her. Payal has sensed her sadness and asks her what happened when Kalpi narrated whole incident.. She gets worried and hugs Kalpi.. Kalpi assures her that everything is fine and Roy is not much injured. Payal asks her where she has been.. Kalpi replies she has gone to meet Sammy. Kamla who has just arrived listens this and gets angry..

Kamla : How could u Kalpi..

Payal realizes that she needs to give space to mother-daughter, leaves from there saying she needs to call someone.

Kamla(yells) : Tell me Kalpi.. How could u do this.. U went to meet Sammy and dint budge to inform me.. Why r u hiding things from me.. I am ur ayi..

Kalpi : Ayi.. there was nothing to tell.. Sammy wanted to meet me alone hence I went. Do not create an issue. I am not in a condition to talk right now.. Please leave me alone for sometime..

Kamla : Why.. Why r u not in condition to talk to me? Just coz am ur ayi and not ur roshni maa... Ur Roshni maa has created distance among us..But she is not my own.. u r my own.. How could u do this to me..

Kalpi : Stop blaming Roshni maa.. She dint do anything. N I am not hiding anything from you.. For god's sake leave me alone. I am not in right frame of mind and I do not want to hurt u with my words.. So plz go before I say something to u..

Kamla : Say.. whatever u want to say.. I am ready to hear everything.. I have already lost my daughter to some other lady.. What would be worst than u calling someone else as ur maa..

Kalpi : Why is it worse.. When Pakhi can call u ayi than why can't I call Roshni maa as maa.. What is ur problem.. Why u do not want to see my happiness??

Kamla : I do not want to see ur happiness?? I?? I am ur ayi.. I am just trying to make u realize that I am ur mother and not Roshni.. U love her more than me.. U share evrything with her.. She comes and tells me what my daughter like.. She knows that u have got a job in Oberoi industries.. She is doing everyhting what I should do and u r saying that I am wrong..

Kalpi : Yes u r wrong.. She is doing what u never did.. U never had time for me.. U always loved Pakhi more than me.. U are my mom just by name but she is giving me the love that I expected from u.. U sent me to the hostel when I needed u the most.. U always considered me as a pawn to fulfill ur dream but u were never bothered to ask me about my dreams.. U punished me for working at Kapoor's house but u ever tried to find the reason for it.. I did it to save u.. To save my mom n U r the same mom who left me to drawn coz u were busy in saving ur so called daughter who knew swimming..

Kamla : But I did that to make u strong.. I wanted u to emerge out as winner..

Kalpi : Stop this bullshit ayi.. U can't fool me so plz stop fooling urself.. How can u expect a 8 year old girl to swim without knowing abc of it.. The truth is that u were always worried about Pakhi.. U gave all my love to her. From childhood, I have seen u giving every right to her.. On my birthday u broke ur promise and went to meet her.. When I came back from pune I was waiting for ur hug but u dint had time for me.. I love Raghav but u slapped me saying I do not have right to love him coz Pakhi loves Raghav.. U supported their marriage.. why dint u slapped her when she came as bride.. Why u dint ask her that how dare she marry Raghav when I love him.. coz u always wanted her to marry Raghav.. Accept the truth ayi that Pakhi was always ur priority and she is still ur priority.

Kamla(tones down a bit and tears flowing from her eyes) : It's not true Kalpi.. I love u beta.. I love u a lot..

Kalpi : Right Ayi.. U love me that's why u dint sensed sadness in my tone.. Payal is just a friend of mine but she understood that something is bothering me but u.. U can't read ur daughter's heart.. Well u never had the eyes to read my heart that's why u considered Sammy as my love.. But I forgave u for that but what about today ayi.. U know what happened today.. Leave it ayi.. U won't understand..

Kamla : Kalpi.. what r u saying beta.. Try to understand ur ayi.. I just wanted to talk to u coz I felt u r again going on wrong path.. That Roy.. he is a rich guy.. N u r making a mistake of coming close to him.. I saw him at the door. This coat is his naa.. Bet people will tag u as gold digger.. I just want to protect u.. u r from a poor family.. Try to understand what m saying..

Kalpi : Enough ayi.. I do not care about the world.. My frnz have taught me to live my life for myself. N m not a gold digger. Neways I do not want to discuss about Roy with u.. I just want to tell u that u should go to mumbai.. Ur daughter is getting married soon and m sure she needs u.

Kamla : Pakhi is getting married?? With whom?? Who told u this??

Kalpi : See ayi.. Just a mention of Pakhi and u started worrying about her. Neways I do not want to interfere in her life but just telling u that Sammy is planning to propose her and m sure Pakhi will accept it as she loves him. Now plz go and let me sleep. N plz do not call Pakhi now as I do not want u to create problems for them. Let Sammy propose her first.

Kamla leaves the room with tears in her eyes... Kalpi bumps the door loudly and slumps on the bed.. She hides her face under the pillow and starts weeping loudly.. Payal who was listening to all this decides to let Kalpi cry for a while as it will lighten her heart. She goes to Kamla nad gives her water.. Kamla hugs Payal..

Kamla : Thank oo beta for taking care of my Kalpi.. I knw I was wrong and now I can never rectify my mistakes.

Payal : Don't worry aunty.. Kalpi's heart is very soft.. She loves u a lot. Give her some time and she will forgive u.

Kamla : I hope so. Beta, will u book my tickets for tomorrow. I do not want to hurt Kalpi anymore.

Payal nods her head in yes. She too has observed change in Kalpi in presence of her mom and she too feels it's best for Kamla to leave from here. She assures Kamla that she will talk to Kalpi and make sure that she forgets everything.

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Next day morning

Kamla comes out with her luggage in her hand.. Kalpi who was ready to leave for the office looks at her mother and get surprised. Kamla tells her that she is leaving. Kalpi apologizes to her for yesterday night and requests her to stay but Kamla tells her that it wasn't her mistake, It was Kamla who never understood Kalpi's Pov. Kalpi hugs Kamla and both gets emotional. Kamla bids adieu to her and tells her to take care whereas Kalpi feels bad on hurting her mom. Kamla leaves the home with Payal. She knows that their relation won't be same ever. She has finally lost her daughter dues to her own mistakes.

Kalpi(in her mind) : I am sorry ayi.. I was never bitter to u but I just failed to control myself yesterday.. I will try to forget all the past and will try to mend our relation but I don't know how much time it will take.. The wounds are deeper and it will take time to heel, I just hope they doesn't leave any mark and we can become one happy family.

Kalpi looks at the time and runs for the office.. It was her first working day and she doesn't want to be late.

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Precap : Pakhi tells Sammy that she has aborted the child.

Raghva yelling at Sammy to tell him about Kalpi

Kalpi purchases a new scooty.

P.S. : Sorry for all the mistakes. Hope u r liking it. All types of feedback are welcome.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Yippee...me first😆...

Awesome update again...really happy that kalpi atlast made kamla realise her mistakes...superb...

Roy's entry was awesome...👍🏼

Atlast i'm out of my confused state and just want RoKa to live happily ever after..felt like killing dumbla when she said Roy was rich and kalpi again making mistake etc.. Roy's rich but luckily he'z not like Raghav he's perfect for kalpi..😃

Omg paakhi really aborted the child...poor sammy..😭

Edited by appyK - 11 years ago