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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: KReyAS
superb
awsom updtes
loved it

Thank u😊

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: Saj1109
Absolutely brilliant update, the way u have brought everything together is really proof of great talent , I have been out of action for some time, so trying to catch up with all the missed chapters of my favorite FF's.
Eager to read more
Saj

Thanks Saj.. M grateful to u for liking the story.. That talent word.. I would like to show it to my mom.. She will be happy to read it as thinks I have only eating talent.😊

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rinka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#643

awesome update. loved meenakshi's speech. my fav line "There is boundaries on earth, but sky belongs to everyone.. 👏👏

continue soon.

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Cinderella

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Posted: 11 years ago

#644

Ya I agree raghav divorce pakhi no doubts he madly loves kalpi but it doesn't meant that she can't move on her life with someone who love her, by doing this she is not betraying raghav as he chooser revenge as priority that also well but for that he married pakhi. Ok one question if same things kalpi does she marries someone for revenge and left raghav in altar n divorcing him and as raghav to her her will u agree, then why kalpi? Is true said she can't trust him?

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Hamsa Anbuselvan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#645

dear i like ur writing but punishing a mother and if kalpi did this to both kamala and rags what is the difference between her and them... taste of one own medicine doesn't proof anything...

hurting kamala by calling someone else ma is nt acceptable and ditching rags for 1 mistake means she never loved him at all cause she is now thinking only about her and this is not the kalpi we saw and loved.

btw its ur story so good luck...

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#646

Originally posted by: Chin2_n
Beautiful update👏👍🏼

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Amazing updates

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: rrinka
awesome update. loved meenakshi's speech. my fav line "There is boundaries on earth, but sky belongs to everyone.. 👏👏
continue soon.

Thank u dear.. I have heard something similar to it somewhere and used it.😊

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: Cinderella81
Ya I agree raghav divorce pakhi no doubts he madly loves kalpi but it doesn't meant that she can't move on her life with someone who love her, by doing this she is not betraying raghav as he chooser revenge as priority that also well but for that he married pakhi. Ok one question if same things kalpi does she marries someone for revenge and left raghav in altar n divorcing him and as raghav to her her will u agree, then why kalpi? Is true said she can't trust him?

Exactly my point.. Rags is expecting Kalpi to forgive him and accept but would he have accepted Kalpi after her marriage with someone.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ragnaheaven
dear i like ur writing but punishing a mother and if kalpi did this to both kamala and rags what is the difference between her and them... taste of one own medicine doesn't proof anything...
hurting kamala by calling someone else ma is nt acceptable and ditching rags for 1 mistake means she never loved him at all cause she is now thinking only about her and this is not the kalpi we saw and loved.

btw its ur story so good luck...

Thank u for liking my writing and I respect ur POV.

First of all... Kalpi was always a selfish and practical gal.. We have seen it post leap in first 4-5 episodes.. She dint bother to tell her mother about her swimming competition.. She let her mother worry for her safety but dint tell her that she learnt swimming. Even Kamla also told Vitthal that "I lost my daughter.. She doesn't share anything with me and Sometimes it's hard for me to realize that she is in the home." Kalpi is doing the same.. So I dnt think Kalpi has changed.. That time Kalpi was hurt coz her mother saved Pakhi instead of her and this time she is hurt coz her mother prayed for Ra..Khi relationship.

Secondly... Kalpi can never hurt anyone intentionally.. N as I said in previous many posts.. Kalpi is not doing all this to hurt Kamla. U can see the Vada pao part.. She has seen sadness on her mother's face and picked one from the tray to make her happy. But than Roshni entered with burger and she forgot about vada pao.. Kalpi has seen this many times in her life.. Kamla has done the same with her and claimed that she loves both Kalpi and Pakhi. So I feel Kalpi thinks that it's normal for Kamla.

Most imp thing.. U said Kalpi is hurting Kamla by calling someone else as maa... I think I have explained Roshni-Kalpi bond very well and her reason for calling Roshni Maa. Kalpi never thought of Kamla while doing this.. When someone else can call Kamla ayi than why can't we accept Kalpi calling someone else as maa. Sorry but in this case I felt u failed to understand the emotional bond between Kalpi and Roshni.

Coming to Raghav.. Kalpi is a human being.. why we always expect her to be a devi and forget other's deeds... When Raghav thought about himself while marrying Pakhi than why Kalpi can't take decision to move on.. Kalpi has never forgave Kalpoors for their mistakes.. She fought with Rags as well for her promotion and most of all she accepted Pakhi's challenge for her mother.. Kalpi was always a fighter and right now she is fighting with her emotions becoz the person whom she loved most ditched her on the altar.. His that one mistake not only hurt her but her father as well whom she loved dearly. I believe the trust once broken can't be mended again.. So Kalpi can forgive Raghav but can't accept him. N Raghav dint commit one mistake only.. U can check the history.. He insulted her various times and never apologized. He dint came on time o meet her parents.. He wasn't bother to call her before taking a decision of revenge marriage and most of all.. he had guts to come in front of her after marrying some other girl. He left Kalpi to bear all the taunts from society. Will u call it as only 1 mistake?? For me it's crime. Kalpi was strong enough to not commit suicide else I have read few cases where girl committed suicide after some sort of humiliation to her and her family.

P.S. : Strictly my POV. Urs can differ,

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#650

Originally posted by: fairylover

Exactly my point.. Rags is expecting Kalpi to forgive him and accept but would he have accepted Kalpi after her marriage with someone.

i read your this story on kalpi in one go...thats amazing...
yes raghav will definately accept kalpi coz his love for kalpi is true...