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ASHLOK OS- SH.. SH... SH...

This happens after the Carrom game.. Shlok brings Astha to their room dragging from the drawing room to their bedroom...

After their argument.. he shouting.. she yelling and disclosing NA's truth.. he not believing.. then finally... she coming to him for apology.. then.. he telling her to ask sorry to NA.. blah..blah..

She apologises to NA ..next day.. but still Mr. Patidev is not down in the earth.. he is in Mars.. I guess.. Red and burning like AGNI - ALL THE TIME...

Astha plans something... in her room.. SHE IS NOT THE KIND WHO LET GOES OF THINGS..LIGHTLY..

This time too.. no proof so baba bach gaye... But saying Sorry for no reason.. na .. naa..

NOT MY CUP OF TEA... Astha plans..

Shlok and Astha have patched partially... but he still has his... laptop.. work .. etc in his hand...

Astha.. thinks.. finally...

Shlok gets call from his first wife.. Suresh...

Yes Im coming in 10..

Astha.. sees him.. running here and there like just now birthed BILLI ... in frustration.. searching his things...

Astha.. helps him.. he ignores her..

Astha.. to herself.. this is big insult for me...

Yup baby.. 2 more mins ... then...

( She has locked the room ..before entering..Time is evening.. 7.30pm)..

He is about to tie the laces-( knot )of the Shoes.. Astha says.. no sweety.. you sit down and arrange your files.. let me help you...pls save some time...

He sits.. he does say.. that.. no need .. I will do it by myself...

But .. she insists.. that she will do... he lets her do it...

Aap baito.. aur file sambalo..

She bends down and starts knotting them - the laces..

She gets up. .. telling hey.. its done.. you can now carry on...

She in her mind.. ( TICK TICK1.. TICK TICK 2 ...TICK TICK 3... TICK TICK 4... TICK TICK 5..AND NOW...)

AKDU HOTRI... AMMM AAA.. karke falls.. on the bed... his face on the cushions scattered.. his face resting on the bed..

Ya ya... he was sitting on the T- POy... or coffe table next to the bed... and she was helping in tying the shoes...laces..

WHAT HAPPENED ???( NOT NIRMA .. ITS KIDS ACT..)

ASTHA... had tied both the shoes laces with one another.. not with the shoes.. SO .. IT IS THREE LEGGED TIE /KNOT.. he couldn't walk.. he moved one leg forward.. the other had also come .. unable to move forward.. he slip and fell on the bed.. and rested his face down...

Shlok dint expect this.. he was angry A LOT with her... Like... oil on the tawa... SRRR... when we put dosa.. sound.. ya .. the same thing...

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NOW Astha.. comes..

HAH H HA.. keise tha... mera TEASER.. TRAILOR...

Shlok: kya bach pana hein.. muje meeting ke liye jaana hain... kholo..na... aab..

Astha : nahi.. nahi.. nahi... No meeting.. No work...

Your work is with me...

S: What will I say to the client..

A : say something... I don't give a damn...

S: But why are you doing this..

A: because... you are such an Idiot.. and I cannot be a partial idiot like you... so only..

S: mein .. aur idiot... saban sambal kar baath karo ..Astha...

A: Im talking right only .. Mr. Akdu...

S: fine.. I don't want to fight... let me go.. pls.. help..

A : no ways.. .. Im not letting you go and already I have texted Suresh...you are not comig...

S: you did .. it

A: yes.. honey...

S: what you want to ...

A: SHE STARTED.. YES.. ENTIRE... GANGES..KA WATER.. IN THE BEDROOM.. TILL OUR IF GALS.. HOMES.. U KNOW... yuppp...so...much...

After... Some time... you have to decide... BIWI OR BABA...

S: You know it is baba..

A: NAHI...

They get into a small argument and do TU TU MEIN MEIN..

A: biwi

S: baba

A: biwi

S: baba

A: baba

S: biwi...

A: ha... pakadi gayi.. you said.. BIWI... SO ITS ME.. YOUR BABA IN GUTTER..

S; HEY...ok meri ma.. it is biwi.. ab to kholo .. Is knot ko...

WAIT... IM COMING...

She removed his shoe laces...

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OK NOW THE INTERESTING... NIRMA.. PART..

She was about to get up.. he couldn't control.. his anger and frustration.. he immediately pulled her hand.. and pushed her on the bed... to the other side of himself... and cupped her with both the arms.. by arresting her inside his broad... whitish.. sexy.. arms.. which was unfortunately... for our imaginative eyes.. not naked... but in the scene.. with my favourite.. light blue cotton shirt.. two buttons from the top.. not put.. and slightly his.. whitish.. skin revealed... ya...

He dint let her move... then.. yup.. the fragrance ..of hers... Jasmines.. I gues.. her rosy lips.. deer s eyes.. etc.. etc.. HE WAS HALF THE WAY.. MAKING HER.. HIS.. with his .. BADMAASH.. ACTS...

It ended only after.. 5 rounds... Na... 3 rounds..

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NEXT DAY:

He called her biwi and asked her to take a file from the cupboard... she went .. opened the cupboard... She saw that thing and screamed...Shhh ..shhh... shhh..

YUP.. MR. AKDU.. had put a rubber snake.. so she could... shout...sh.. sh.. sh..

TIT FOR TAT..

SHOES LACESS- SSH SSH.

RUBBER SNAKE- SH ... SH...

END OF DAY: BOTH.. AGNI'S GET WHAT THEY WANT BY HOOK OR CROOK.. SWEET REVENGE BY BOTH... ONE ON ONE... LEADING TO.. NEVER ENDING... LOVE..

Hope you guys enjoyed...

Rgds

DV.😭😭

Your love.. emails.. and Likes...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it deepa
awesome update
plz check my first os tooo
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4093521
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashlok

loved it deepa

awesome update
plz check my first os tooo
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4093521

I Read it already darling.. MASK UNVEILED.. TRUST.. I saw...
and to say.. frm morning.. I have been wanting to read.. OS.. than FF>> no body rights.. many.. OS...
realyy..yours made my day... GOod one.. honey
Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepavasudev

I Read it already darling.. MASK UNVEILED.. TRUST.. I saw...

and to say.. frm morning.. I have been wanting to read.. OS.. than FF>> no body rights.. many.. OS...
realyy..yours made my day... GOod one.. honey

im soo happy as u liked it dear
i loved urs tooo
its simply awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS...Deepa...
Amazing work...
Keep writing more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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tks Nadine ,ray,.lilly ,sajan , sathya, sree ,bobbie ,niki,cool, mehare
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