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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u so much guys!! Sorry again as m not able to reply individually but I have read each and every comment n m really thankful to u guys for liking it. I will try to update next part today. Love u all šŸ¤—
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Vish.. As always brilliant updates dear. Was on a vacation and then fell sick hence caught up with last 2 parts today and lovved it...'''
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Vish.. As always brilliant updates dear. Was on a vacation and then fell sick hence caught up with last 2 parts today and lovved it...'''


Thank u Shyama.. Hope u r fine now!! 😊
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please update the next part soon
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please update the next part soon


Update is in progress..😊
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Hello guys.. I have wrote part 27.. It became too long so dividing it in two posts.. I did not get time to read it after reading so expect lots of mistakes.. I can say more that u guys expect. Hope u will like it.This time i need genuine feedbacks as I am not satisfied this part.. M feeling something is missing in it.. If u too feels so than plz share. So here goes the next part


2days later

Kamla and Kalpi spent two days in Kalpi's flat with minimal talks.. Kamla is not leaving any stone unturned to pacify her daughter but Kalpi is not paying any heeds towards her. Kamla is feeling depressed coz of this. She has seen Kalpi chatting with Roshni for hours.. She feels bad on seeing her daughter sharing everything with other lady. She has started losing her patience.

Sammy has gone to her dance academy for finding her whereabouts, when he came to know about her injury. He calls her and asks her to meet him when she tells him to come at her home as she can't walk much for couple of days. Sammy tells her to meet him after 2days(i.e. today) as he can't want to talk in front of Kamla.. Kalpi gets amuse to know that he is aware about Kamla' presence but he tells her tht they were on same flight. Sammy decides to not tells Raghav about Kalpi till he meets her. Raghav calls his spy to get info but Sammy manipulates him to buy some more time from Raghav.

Kalpi is reading some legal documents.. She has to shift her classes today. Roy has helped her a lot in taking loan and purchasing a new place for her academy. She has to join Oberoi industries from tomorrow, hence she wants to complete all academy work today. Kamla comes to Kalpi with vada pao in her hands..

Kamla : Beta.. I have prepared vada pao for u. U used to like it in Mumbai.. I thought to make it for u as u might be missing it.

Kalpi : Thank u ayi.. but m not hungry n I do not eat without Payal..

Kamla : Beta Payal has gone out, she told me to tell u that she will be late and do not wait for her.BTW I have kept some for her. U have one for me. Please..

Kalpi : Ayi.. Please!! Stop it.. No need to make any efforts for me.. I am not hungry. I do not want to eat anything.. Please do not

Tears come rolling down from Kamla's eyes.. Kalpi looks at her and thinks that she is hurting her ayi too much.. She picks one vada pao from her tray.. Kamla smiles on this and thinks that her Kalpi still has the golden heart who can't see anyone sad... Kalpi was about to eat when they hear door bell.. Kalpi keeps vada pao back in the plate and goes to open it.. She finds Roshni at the door and hugs her.. Kamla too greets Roshni.. Kalpi tells them to sit while she will bring coffee for them.

Kamla : U here??

Roshni : Yes.. I used to come here very often.. I am sure Kalpi have told u this..

Kamla : I dint knw it.. Actually my Kalpi is reserve types.. She doesn't speak much.

Roshni : What?? Kalpi doesn't speak much?? U must be joking Kamlaji... she has become just like Payal.. Can't keep her mouth shut for a single second..

Kamla : I guess than she doesn't like to talk with me...

Roshni feels the sadness in Kamla's tone.. She realizes that Kalpi hasn't forgiven her mother yet... She assures Kamla that she will talk with Kalpi. Kamla feels bad on hearing that some other lady will try to convince Kalpi to talk to me properly.. Kamla goes to the kitchen saying she will be back in a minute.. Kalpi comes back with coffee and asks her the reason for her coming here.

Roshni : That's a big news.. I will tell u in sometime.. Right now I have bought this veg burger with ur extra cheese for u.. U wanted to have it naa. So I thought to get it for u.

Kalpi : Ohh Maa.. Thnk u so much.. U know I love this type of burger... U r too good.

Kamla who has come there with Vada paos gets unhappy on seeing Kalpi eating burger with Roshni.. She feels like crying but manages herself.

Kamla : Roshni ji.. I have made vadao paos for Kalpi and u bought burgers.. Now what will I do...

Roshni : Sorry, I dint knw it.. While talking she told me she want to have some burgers... I am extremely sorry...

Kalpi : Maa.. y r u saying sorry.. And Ayi.. I do not vada paos now.. I am loving this burger. Please maa do not mind..

Kamla(fakes Kalpi) : As u wish beta.

Kalpi : Maa... Finished!! Now tell me what big news u have for me..

Roshni : U remember Meenakshi?? That poor student whom who gave money for her IAS exams preparation..

Kalpi : Yep I remember.. She comes to my coaching classes as well...What happened to her...

Roshni : She topped her exam and got placed.. The basti people wants to keep felicitation ceremony for her and want u to be honored in it as it was ur efforts who helped her.

Kalpi : Really maa.. M so happy for her. She deserved it. But why honor me?? I dint teach her.. They should honor the teacher of my academy..

Roshni : They taught her but u helped her economically and morally.. U boosted her self confidence and she has given credit of her success to u. Media is talking her interview and it will be on air soon.

Kalpi : M really happy maa. Tell them that I will come.

Roshni : Kamlaji u too come with her.. Basti people will be happy to meet u.

Roshni leaves from there after giving venue and timing details to Kalpi.. Kalpi switches on the tv.. Meenakshi's news is coming on local channel.. She excitedly shares about Meenakshi with Kamla.. Kamla gets happy on seeing her daughter talking to her.. She hears her properly and remembers the day when she too dreamt the same for her daughter... Kalpi remembers that she has to go to set up her new academy and calls Roy

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Kalpi and Roy has set up new academy completely.. from last few days Kalpi has not worked due to her injury.. Roy told her all the details and she gets impressed on seeing roy's dedication towards it. She thanks Roy but Roy tells her that he need the price for doing all this work..

Kalpi : What do u want??

Roy : something very special.. I want something which u have never shared with anyone.. Anything u want..

Kalpi : Do I have any such thing??

Roy : I don't know.. U decide.. Take as much time as u want..

Kalpi : Okk... Let me think..

Roy : Okk.. I will wait!! Let's go now as u have to go to Meenakshi's place as well..

Kalpi : U won't come there??

Roy : I want to but Sorry.. U know I am starting a new branch of our cafe.. so I need to meet few people.

Kalpi : Hmm.. Can I ask u something??

Roy : Yes..

Kalpi : I still dnt understand ur aim.. U want to open a chain of romantic cafes but ur love is choreography.. I mean this two things doesn't goes together..

Roy : I want to open romantic cafes for others.. I want them to enjoy there love life whereas I want to opt for choreography for myself.. For my passion. Just like u.. u dance for urself while u r trying to achieve heights for ur dear ones...

Kalpi : hmm.. Great thought Mr. Oberoi!!

Roy : Thank u.. Let's go now!!

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P.s. Plz hit like and comment. Sorry for all typos and other mistakes.
Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago
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Part 28

Kalpi is getting ready for the function.. She wears a pinl silk saree to wear with matching small earrings
and watch in one hand while a pretty bracelet in other.. She takes out her brush to straighten her hair and make a bun. Next she does is subtle makeup with a light eye shadow and lipstick.. Kamla who was watching these gets pleasantly surprised to see her daughter like this.. She looks at her own sarree and gets embarrassed. Kalpi notices her mom and takes out another new sarree.. Telling that she bought it for her.

Kamla : Why u bought this sarree?? are u ashamed of ur mom??

Kalpi : Ayi.. Ur daughter has changed but not this much.. I bought it for u coz I want u to wear a new sarree...Today also clothes and class doesn't matter to me.. I still care about emotions, love and relationships..

Kalpi tells Kamla to get ready as they have to leave soon. Kamla feels proud on her. But she still misses the love Kalpi had for her.

Kalpi and Kamla reached to the venue.. roshni is already present there. Some local newspaper reporters were also present there. Kalpi calls Payal to ask where she is when Payal tells her that her classmate is in hospital and hence she can't come today.. She is going to stay there only.

A young gal starts the function.. She welcomes Kalpi and other guests,.. function starts with giving a trophy and gift to Meenakshi.. She is requested to say few words.. Meenakshi starts her speech..

"It was my dream to become a big officer but I was scared to take steps for fulfilling it.. But an angel helped me.. I think everyone gets an angel in her life who helps them in achieving their success and my angel is Kalpana di. One day I met her at my college.. She has come to promote her coaching classes..She gave me template... and I told her sarcastically that this coaching classes are for rich people.. We poor people are managing our college fees by great difficulty.. y is she promoting her classes in Govt. college. She hold my hand firmly and told me that she is from poor background only.. What she said I can't forget till now.. She said.. "There is boundaries on earth.. but sky belongs to everyone.. If u have the capability than do not worry about people on earth but look at sky and steal ur One mutthi asmaan.No one can stop u from that.Instead of worrying about rich and poor she told me to try and try until than I succeed. " I did exactly that.. She helped me in purchasing books for IAS preparation. N constantly motivated me till my exam.. I am really thankful to her.. N I dedicate my win to her only."

Everyone claps on her speech.. Kamla and Roshni has tears in their eyes.. Kamla is happy to see her daughter's success. This is what her dream was. Kalpi is being called on stage. Basti peope requests her to say few words.. Kalpi says..

"I am not a big personality and I do not know what to say on stage.. Meenakshi got what she deserved... It's her big heart that she is giving me credit but the reality is that Meenakshi has the capability and she worked really hard for this exams.. But I agree with Meenakshi.. Everyone has angel in her life who helps them in their success.. Well my case is different.. I have many angels who helps me and prays with me for my success.. But the big part of my credit goes to one lady who is here with me.. The lady who always supported me.. who guided me and is the reason of my success.. It was her who make me strong.. I fumbled many times but she hold my hand.. When I was confused she helped me in taking decisions.. I would like to call her on stage"

Kamla who was listening all this feels happy.. She remembers the time when she told Kalpi about her dream.. The day she sent her to the hostel and told her to move on and not to think about Raghav.. She get up to go the stage when she hears Kalpi saying..

"And the lady is none other that Mrs. Roshni Oberoi.. Roshni maa.. will u come on stage."

Roshni smiles and goes on the stage.. an old lady who was sitting behind Kamla asks her whether Kalpi is Roshni's daughter and u r her relative.. Kamla doesn't reply anything.. She wants to scream back that I am her ayi but stops herself from creating any drama.. The function ends with some dances and Kamla see Kalpi and Roshni chatting.. She feels neglected nd lost.. The function ends and Kalpi tells Kamla to go home by cab and she will come later as she has to meet someone. Kamla sees the watch and says this late when Roshni tells her not to worry as she will make sure that Kalpi reacjes home safely.. Kamla agrees reluctantly. She goes to the cab while Roshni tells Kalpi to come with her.. She will drop her.

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Roshni drops Kalpi to Roy's cafe where Kalpi has called Sammy to meet. Kalpi goes inside the cafe and sees Sammy waiting for her.. Sammy waves him and asks her about her injury.. She tells that it's fine now. Kalpi asks the reason for Sammy coming to Delhi when he fumbles to find the answer..

Kalpi : Do not hesitate.. I know u have come to talk about Raghav.. Go ahead!!

Sammy : Okay.. I want to tell u about Raghav's divorce..

Kalpi : I know about it, Pakhi told me. She has come to meet me.

Sammy : Still u dint call him?? Any special reason.

Kalpi : not such.. It's just I do not want him back in my life..

Sammy : Or u have someone else in ur life..

Kalpi : What do u mean..

Sammy : I mean Roy.. I have seen u guys..

Kalpi : He is not related to my decision.. It's my decision that I do not want to meet Raghav. N FYI he is just a good friend...

Sammy : But why?? Don't u love him anymore??

Kalpi : I don't know. But I don't want him to ruin my life again..

Sammy : Give him one chance Kalpi..

Kalpi : Sammy.. consider ur sister at my place.. would u let ur sister one chance to a guy who left her on altar..

Sammy stays mum.. He doesn't know what to say. He would have killed that guy but here it's about Raghav and his love.. He knows the depth of Raghav's love.

Sammy : No I won't. But I have seen Raghav's love for u.. He is crazy for u. He will die without u..

Kalpi : It's not about love but trust Sammy.. Can I trust him again.. Can u tell me that he won't leave me again in his anger.. Take the guarantee and I promise I will meet Raghav.

Sammy : U know I can't do that.. no one knows about Raghav and his decisions..

Kalpi : Exactly.. I do not want to spend my life in this jeopardy.

Sammy : What should I say Raghav now.. He have sent me here.

Kalpi : Do whatever u feel correct. I won't tell u to lie ur frn for me.

Sammy understands Kalpi and decides that he will tell Raghav about Kalpi and her decision.. Now he doesn't want his frn to live a restless life.. He feels guilty on thinking wrong about Roy and Kalpi. He apologizes to her for the same but Kalpi tells him not to bother as she doesn't care about other's thinking anymore.. Roy was his bst frn and will be.

Sammy thinks to ask Kalpi about Pakhi as he is doubtful that Kamla was talking to Pakhi on airport..

Sammy : Hows Pakhi??

Kalpi : Fine.

Sammy : Anything special in her life??

Kalpi : How would I know?? What u want to ask.. be clear.

Sammy : Okay.. I heard Kamla maa talking to someone on call and I felt it was Pakhi and she was speaking about baby so I thought to ask u. Is Pakhi pregnant?

Kalpi doesn't knw what to reply.. It's Pakhi's life and she doesn't want to interfere but she can't lie to Sammy as he will come to know about it someday. Kalpi stays mum which makes Sammy more restless.

Sammy : Tell me Kalpi.. It's very important for me to know about her.. u dnt know anything.. U know what we..

Kalpi : I know everything.. She shared it with me.

Sammy : So plz answer my question.. Is she pregnant with me..

Kalpi : I dnt know..

Sammy : Kalpi plz.. u know it.. U r hiding something.. For god's sake plz tell me..

Kalpi(yells) : Yes, she is carrying ur baby.

Sammy gets shell shocked on hearing this.. He doesn't know whether to jump in happiness or to cry. Tears start rolling down.. He turns to go back when his wallet falls down.. Kalpi picks it up and sees Pakhi's photo in it..

Kalpi : Do u love Pakhi??

Sammy : Yes... I do.. I love her like crazy.

Kalpi : Than y u said that it was ur mistake..

Sammy : Coz she loves Raghav and I do not want her to be with me for that one night..

Kalpi : U dumb guy.. who gave u the right to take decision on a gal's behalf.. She loves u.. She wanted to confess her love but u stopped her by saying it as mistake..

Sammy : What?? She loves me?She told u this? U r not lying na??

Kalpi : No I m not.. She loves u a lot.. She dint told u about her pregnancy coz she doesn't want to be a burden on u.. Sammy, Pakhi has suffered a lot in this fake marriage.. Go and give her all the happiness..

Sammy(with a happy smile) : Yes.. I will give her all the love she deserves..

Kalpi : N do not forget to invite me in wedding..

Sammy nods yes and leaves for the airport.. He doesn't want to waste a single second now.

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Precap : Kamla shouting on Kalpi saying "How could u do this to me.. I am ur ayi."

P.S. : Hit like and comment. Sorry for all mistakes
Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago
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Ha ha now Kamla is getting the taste of her own medicinešŸ˜†šŸ˜†...thanx a lot for the back to back updates... I dont know what are you planning for Kalpi but I am really looking forward for Ragna only...Its ur story and u can write it in the way u want.. It was just my POV... Loved it and continue soon😃😳
Edited by Chinu_Rose - 11 years ago
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awsm update.
Kalpi done ryt wid kamla, she wl understnd wat is ignrance nw. Kamla hv no more ryt to yell on kalpi, to expect anything frm kalpi.
Cming to meenakshi, she is ryt evry1 get angel in der life. I love her speech, n evn today also u gv me leson i.e. ""There is boundaries on earth..
but sky belongs to everyone.. If u
have the capability than do not worry
about people on earth but look at sky" love dis lines. I like d way kalpi gv honourd to roshni maa.
Samy n kalpi convo abt rags lv it jst awsm evn i dnt hv enough words to expres it. Its beyond d limit of our expection.evn convo regarding pakhi i jst lv it finaly sakhi wl geting maried they reunite.
Precap wnt to kill kamla, i hope kalpi wl burst her iner turmoil n kamla undrstnd wat n hw much she hurt kalpi.
Update sn.
Big hug for both lvly update šŸ¤—
Edited by shonali164 - 11 years ago
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Awesome update. Keep writing 😊

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