VidArth OS: Bleeding Hope - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: whinyteen96

Shruti! :***

TOM FELTON! <3 <3 <3

What I REALLY liked about this is there is absolutely no sugarcoating. Nothing. Nada. Yeah? There was real, raw substance between them which is what I tried to bring out :")) I'm glad you thought so :D

He gauges what makes her tick. He is familiar with her functioning, her flawed perceptions and wishes to tinker, uplift her from the darkness she has made a home in. How? When? Where? and above all Why? He doesn't have the answers but what he has is hope...And Love? It is not in his hands. You've added more to what I wrote with this. Thank you SO much! I would love to see a piece about VidArth from you! :D

His sudden bout of possessiveness is well highlighted and the wrap-up is just fab! ❤️ :")) <3
Keep writing. 😊 I shall & you do too! :D

Thank you SO much, Shruti! :**




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anki08

My Tess! Hello, hello! :*****

Its just stupefying Arushi... *Harry Potter spell* Stupefy! :P :P Really? Thenksoo! :**
Well,,your writing needs no credibility..Its like "naam hi kaafi hai"... Hai Ram! I might just fly towards the sky and never come back, Himi! :")))The way you have woven Parth's subtle and yeah,,,kind of calm composure(past tense😉) Ahahahaa! I don't believe that his calmness and composure is gone. Its just that he's in a certain phase now. It'll come back for Vidu :"))

,,with the witch Vidushi's intricacies is magnanimous...Esp. the layers of Vidushi you have unravelled,taking cognizance of every miniscule detail is simply <3...You always make the reader dive in ecstasy!!!!I just love you Arushi!!! Awwie! I'm glad you liked it SO much, my Tess! Love you more :**** And I think that not everyone is one or two-dimensional. Some people take more time to reveal themselves :"))
Truth be told,,i dont heart them much,,for the simple reason being they are in a trial phase like sa-----Rth were from march. I didn't like them either of them much either till I saw all the episodes. I don't believe that they are in a trial phase ether. This is just the beginning for them. SaRth was an unrealistic and inhuman possibility

----effin' may(a round of applause for fans still.sticking to the crap) AHAHAHAHAHAHHAAA! :P

but yeah,,There is def. so much scope for exploring in their relation because Vidushi.as a character is multifaceted just akin to Randhir!!! That is true. Both of them are different though :"))
I daresay that you have stirred a spark in me for them!!! Aww! But all of us SanDhir
shippers will always be loyal :"))

Lots of love,
Aru :****

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Craziness123

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I'm seriously spell bound after reading ur amazing price of work..

It was sooo apt and sooo good..

I'm seriously happy that I could read something like this on vidarth...

Love you sooo much for writing something soo amazing like this on vidarth...

I loved this couple and now I love them even more aftr reading ur os...

Keep writing...

Love
Ayesha...


Hey Ayesha! So you're the villain in Ek Villain, eh? :P :P
Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked it so much! :D

Arushi!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: AzureLicht


There is so very much of both - Parth and Vidushi, that I think you have put through through your writing. There isn't much one would think, going on beneath that broody look of Parth's, but I think you've captured it brilliantly. And this is probably the best work I've come across that puts forth Parth's views so perfectly, ever since he seems to have gone off the deep end.
He knows her, faults and all. And up to some extent, she knows him too. Her brash honesty affects him, as does his (still there?) patience and goodness.
This was really something :)


Hey! I'm sure you've told me your name and I've forgotten! Please tell me again? *puppy eyes*
Parth does look very broody, doesn't he? :P
He's gone off the deep end only for a little while, I think. He'll come back soon :"))
His patience and goodness will come back. Isn't that what she loved so much in the first place?

Thank you SO much for such a lovely review! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Aastha! Please correct me if that isn't your name!
Please unres quickly? :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh Sheet! I haven't read this yet!
Will read it soon!

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