Secrets du coeur...RA/EA/IN FF

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Imane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: angelsabreenxz
waao just an amazing part zara...n waiting for da next exciting part😃😃😳

thanks alot!! posted the next part hope you like it!!

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Imane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: VishakaGal12
Hey Imane..
I really loved today's part..it is really sweet..hehehe..🤣 glad u loved it😳..Sahil enters Naina's room to take MP3 from her room ..but he got to see her in the other attire..such a badmaash!!🤣well poor him he didnt knew..bechari Naina..could really imagine her situation!!!..And Shifali took tips from Natasha how to dress like her ..and with the new look , Samir gotten mesmerized by her beauty..O hoo..Samir ki to Nikaal paddi..lage raho.. he liked her simple way to dress..and as per their plan..they have successfully surprised Naina and she was very thrilled..it was very sweet of them..it was also really nice to see Sandeep and Shifali got along with them as they are such an amazing friends..Romilla aunty ki english..😆😆 ..cute and sweet..but somebody should give a sweetener to Samina..uff..itni bitterness aachi nahin hai dear...thoda meetha khaa lijiye..aapke sehet ke liye aacha hoga!!..Thank you so much for the PM dear..please do continue soon!!thanks alot for your support and long lovely comments

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Imane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: spvd
part 5
nice...
cont soon...

thanks😊

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Imane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Recap: All celebrate Naina's birthday and Naina is happy to have such nice family and friends

Secrets du coeur part 7:

In that Saturday early morning Samir was as always disturbed by Natasha, after speaking to her as he always speak to her as first person of the day he went into sleep again...for a while and then...and then what he hated the most his sister's sharp voice...on the other side of the wall Naina was calmly making her bed of while and light pink sheets...Naina then opened the window and as every morning let some rests of bguette of the evening out giving it to some pigeons and fawls who were outside in the intense green grass...after smelling the air her eyes closed she closed the window...Naina but not only all peaple loved smelling mlc' air it has his own smell...it was cloudy and cold as usually and its in cold that this air was the most beatifull...her room smelled a soft but lovely perfum...a melange of perfum something natural and pure...Naina then went into the bathroom she does all that while singing some soft music...all loved her voice and praised it a lot but Samir..Samir found it verry irritating even more than the loud exited voice of Natasha...he put his pillow on his ears...but that was not it...the kids of the cite used to get up really earlier and do a lot of noise...as the parents and elders sibblings used to sleep till 9h or 10h..kids used to Wake up arround 6 or 7h as they were used to...they do a lot of noise on the music really loud and on the TV with their morning carttons also loud...Samir got up fed up and irritated he was rubbing his eyes and checked the Watch it was only 8h...god what was the need of a week end if you cant sleep he thought...he went to the living room greeted by his parents and then he directly ate his breaklfast as he was hungry...
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Sahil's side...he was goign throught the same Natasha used to sleep till verry late college days and sunday but on Saturday she used to Wake up reeally early...and unfortunetelly so as Samir and Naina's Sahil and her rooms were adjacents...He knew once woke up she is like a bomb...infact he were right when she was correctly Wake up she just jumped out of bed without wasting time and after that Sahil know he was dead he has the most loud cite of the city plus...god Natasha used to get ready really quickly once again to his badluck as once out of her room she and her mother were the most loud persons on earth for him...Sahil was not as Samir he lost patience verry quickly and Wake up..he comes in the living rrom ready but still half sleeping...
Natasha: Hey Sahil!!
she said as she hugged him
Romilla: oye puutar...tu a gaya...now come, come early lets the do the breakfast!!!
Natasha: yes come on I am hungry!!
Romilla: you are the always angry live my puttar the do the breakfast..
Sahim: maman she mean she is hungry for food!! and its let..let my son do the breakfast!!
Romilla: chal chup kar...I know the better than the you!!
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Shifali just woke up...she was not sleeping at all just lying on her bed as usual...she was lost in thoughts it was going to be again the same boring week end which she hate...her mother must had leave by the time...but she was resting on the bed as sleeping time was 22h00 not a minute less or plus and same for waking time at 9h00...if she'll wake up too early all the shedule will be spoiled...she always wanted to have a nice organised life but not a jail life...she was usually confuse between her feelings...as much she loved her mom...her mom used to ignore her...On Sandeep side he was awaken by the yellings of his dad...he was 5mins late in waking up...Sandeep protested saying he has nothing to do and no college but his dad adament got angry and yelled at hi to Wake up and leave...Sandeep was fed up...he thoughts of others boys like Samir or Sahil who play Football,Basketball...who hangout with friends who enjoys dmn!!but he...he was stuck all the day in his big empty house...Shifali woke up as she hears the 3005 bus annoucement...of 9h00...yes as Samir used to hears Natasha's voice as first of the day Shifali used to hears that metalic pathetic same voice everyday as first and last of the day...at least it was an time indicator for her...she woke up and did her breakfast on that big table alone every chair was empty...she On the TV but never payed attention to it...it was just to not feel alone...
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The four center friends met at carrefour...they used to go there...all peaple used to go there it was not only for buying things or important work it was also to enjoy meet peaple...chat and have a walk...they were sitting on a bench/couch were they used to do...
Samir: what shall we do today??
Sahil: let's go to the spa near Gare du Nord...I need to have a haircut...
Naina: yes why not I'll have a hairmake to...
Natasha and Samir looked at eahc other as they both said togheter: "and we'll enjoy!!!"
Yes in fact every time they used to go to others cities usually...it was an enjoyment...the journey long and boring for peaple was short but amazing for them...they talked and enjoyed that much that time passed so quickly and when they looked back it was a full moment of joy to remember...the longs walks in Paris were painfull and irritating for peaple but liked by these...
Natasha: okay done have you all your Card Navvigo??
Samir: yes offcourse
Natasha: then lets go directly...
Sahil: okay you peaple wait at the bus stop I ll just take some money...
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Shifali took her mug of hot Chocolate open the window...she was still in night suit and with a sleepish face...she was drinking her coffe putting some on her lips and looking peaple out of the window...
A bus come and peaple got down from it...Shifali foccussed on drinking rather than what was out...when she hears some familar voices...the gang were laughing and walking they were chatting and laughing when Samir'eyes land on Shifali
She was looking pure and beautifull he thought...
On the other hand Shifali was sad...she wanted to be like them...like every teenager of her age...
Natasha: Sssaam!!!
Samir: huh??
Natasha: where are you lost??
Samir(sarcastly): I was thinking about you!!!
Natasha: yeah...yeah my foot!!
She look where he was looking
Natasha: hey thats Shifali!!
She said as she wawed a hand to her as Hi
Shifali smiled as she wawed her hand back...she had started to like Natasha..she was a nice friend who wont let someone alone...who never let someone feeling appart or sad...
Natasha: Samir I have an idea...why not we bring Shifali too...and the other duffer Sandy too he lives just there...she pointed to a house...
Sahil: nice idea...Naina go with Tashu bring Shifali we ll go to Sandeep...the friends did so they didnt care if they miss their RER they'll take the next but wont let their friends alone
So after a lot of hesitation...Sandeep and Shifali agreed..
So at the doors...all took out their cards but the all was only, Samir, Natasha and Shifali...all others forgot
Sahil: Tashu I'll pass with you
Naina: I'll pass with Sam
Sandeep: I'll forgot mine too
Natasha: You are such a duffer
Sandeep: please stop irritating me now!!
Natasha: Samir please give your card to Naina and Sahil and pass with Shifali..
Samir did so...
Sahil and Naina who knew how to pass did quickly
Samir passed with Shifali close to her by back...
But her hair got stuck in his Wacth as he held her by shoulders for passing
Shifali: ouch!! my hair...
Samir: sorry...sorry I'll remoove it

he said as he got again close to her and removed her hair

Shifali moved quickly away

Shifali: thanks...
Natasha: come on

Sandeep: how..0.I think i should get my card its not good to fake like this

Natasha: you are really...got scared?? Take this and pass

He took her card and did so

and he didnt even realised that Natasha passed also...

On the quaie all took some snack for the jouney

and soon went into the train

they all sat on 6 round place upsatairs

Natasha, Samir,Sahil, all three does masti

Shifali and Sandeep also got in and start laughing hearfully

Samir looked amazied at Shifali she looked really nice when she laugh...that sparkkle in her eye...he saw it for the first time

they soon arrived and walked to the SPA Sahil and Naina got busy

Sandeep also thought of having a hair cut

Natasha: Shifali come with us!!

Shifali: yes but where??

Samir: let's just have a walk naa...

Shifali: okay...

they start walking Samir between the both...

In a shop Shifali saw a pair of earrings which she liked a lot!!

Shifali: wow these are beautifull...

Samir and Natasha stopped

Samir: you like them

she nodds

Samir: I'll buy for you!!

he said as he entered the shop followed by Natasha

Shifali: no..there is no needs...Samir...I have money too I'll buy myself!!

Samir and Natahsa: between friends!!!

Shifali sight and smiled

Samir bought them for her and give it to her...

Shifali felt nice...he was a caring and loving man...

Natasha: let's go to that park

Samir: yeah!! nice idea!!

Come Shifali

It was a typical parisan park with flowers..green benchs...a kiosk...and a beautifull original fountain

Shifali sat on a bench after admiring the park she let her purse there...along with her jacket which she removed

Samir and Natasha quickly removed their coats...and went directly playing with water near the fountain...

Shifali was surptrised they were playing jsut like kids getting all wet...not caring about anything...the peaple the word

Natasha took some water and start coming towards Shifali

Shifali: no...no please Tashu...nnnooo

She screamed in joy Samir also splashed water on her

Shifali: yyuuuoo!!

Shifali said runnign after them...enjoying..she pushed Natasha in the fountain...so she got all wet!!

Samir slipped and felt in also and Shifali laughed and joined them...they played in water for some half an hour then its start getting cold and late so they went back to the bench taking their coats...

Natasha: lets go quickly

Shifali: its cold...really cold

she said shivering

Samir giggled

Samir: yeh lo take this i have another coat in my bag

she took it and thank him

Natasha: let's have an ice cream

Shifali: are you md...in this weather all wet??

Samir: with us stay ready for complete Madness!!

they ate an ice cream and made their way to the SPA

Shifali: what will we tell to others

Samir: dont worry Shjifali just relax sometimes we are here na!!

the others three came from the SPA

Sahil: hey nice haircut Sandeep!!

Naina: your one is also good Sahil

Sandeep: yes you look nice too Naina

the three looked at the others who were wet and complitely wet

Sahil: Tashu!! what is this?? you are all wet if you take cold?

Samir: actually its not her fault...some strangers peaple attacked on us...with their water bottles and I jsut chased them away beating them with my shoes

Natasha: yes they had a big dog also!!

Sahil: Oh my god

Shifali just smiled as how naughty the duo can be..

Samir: ouch my foot

Shifali just noticed he was only in sock in one foot

She was surprised

Naina: where is your shoe??

Samir: i said i used it to beat the peaple i forgot it there

they walked and near the park Samir took his shoe who he had kept there on purpose and wears it

Shifali smiled and retain her laugher

Back at the gare the Transilien which they were gonna take was late of an hour

Shifali: oh no what we will do now!! i must go home before 20h00

Natasha: dont worry yaar...we'll take the RER C and have a break at Ermont from where we can take a bus to your home

Sahil: my sis is the best!!

Natasha: i know Sahil!!

they did so...they reached Ermont in arround 15mins and the bus was in five mins so they sat on a bench

Samir: you already come here Shifali??

Shifali: maybe look familiar to me

Natasha: its our four birthcity there is a big hospital and a clinic behind these buildings...thats' where we all four were born!!! in that street there is a lycee also...my mom studiyed here

Samir: yeah its a verry nice city!!

Shifali was looking at the city it remember her something but she didnt knew what...

the bus come and thankfull to Natasha Shifali and Sahil were back at home on time...

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Monday morning Shifali come in the college and went to the CDI for keping back a book but when she come there she was surprised to see a crowd of students and Sahil;Naina and Sandeep standing there looking at Samir who held Natasha'hands and bends down

Samir take out a red rose
Samir: I love you Tashu...you had always been my best friend...the one who knows me the most...I love you so much...i didnt realised when this relationship become a need for me...please will you marry me???
Natasha smiled.
Natasha: yes i will...
they both hugged and Naina and Sahil clapped and smiled...so as all

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here is the update hope you like it leave comment and sorry for late posting and errors if there is any

Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

where is part 6?
part 6 or 7
nice part...
cont soon...

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Imane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

It has been a week and only, 3 reply? 😭 sorry for being rude but i had time n wanted to continue it but seeing only 3 reply made me disapointed...i need at least 5 comment to continue incuding the three i already have two more for the next part...and please if u feel that the ff is boring or not interesting say it then and i ll close it...i am once again really sorry for behaving like this i am someone who content of what she have but so less reply made me really disapointed...sorry

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Vishaka Sanjana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Hey dear!!

I'm extremely sorry for not replying your thread because I was inactive in IF for a while so please boora maat manna!!..Anyways..as far as the update is concerned..I really really loved the update that you wrote and yes..don't you dare to close this thread and don't worry about the quantity of the readers ..because everyone knows that how extremely talented you are as a writer and by closing this thread you are doing injustice to yourself ..so think positively!!😃😃..Samjhi meri jaan!!😳😳..so the friends went to the SPA to have some time there and to have a makeover ..O hoo..my Sandeep has got a makeover..I'm sure..agar yeh look Natasha ko dekhayegaa..to voh uspaar laatoo ho jayega!!😉😉..I also loved the moments between Shifali , Samir and Natasha..it's really good to see that she is having a good time with friends..and I can totally understand her character because she also wants the same lifestyle as them because she has come from the different family background..but it is great to see the growth of her character and most importantly ..is to be yourself..and she is worrying that she is going to be home at late..but not to worry as long as their lovely friends are there..she will be reaching safe and sound..but I'm worrying about her nagging mother's reaction..O hoo..Samir proposed to Natasha😲😲..hope yeh saach nahin hai!!...Hope you update soon dear!!..Please continue soon and PM me whenever you can!!😃

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Imane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Recap: all go out for a day and have fun, SHifali is getting involved in enjoying with her friend and Sandeep too, Samir proposed Natasha...

Secrets du coeur part 7:

Monday morning Shifali come in the college and went to the CDI for keping back a book but when she come there she was surprised to see a crowd of students and Sahil;Naina and Sandeep standing there looking at Samir who held Natasha'hands and bends down
Samir take out a red rose
Samir: I love you Tashu...you had always been my best friend...the one who knows me the most...I love you so much...i didnt realised when this relationship become a need for me...please will you marry me???
Natasha smiled.
Natasha: yes i will...
they both hugged and Naina and Sahil clapped and smiled...so as all
A lady: yes finnally!! Damn you both we have done it 20 times before it is perfect, we have to perform a play in two weeks and u both!! Really u should do more practice
Samir: sorry mam its not my fault, whenever i see her face it just made me laugh, she look like a monkey
Natasha: oh shut up!! Mam, we are not really a couple thats why it took some difficulty!! Even we are confortable but why dont you take a real couple??
The teacher: miss Natasha if all films directors take real life couple then all work is done!! But thats true you both dont suit the couple...you suit the gignol of the cite!! Hhhmm(thinking)hey you both(pointing to Sahil and Naina) come here
They both came
Miss Delamarre(the theatre teacher): do you think you can perform it??
Naina: me?? Emm mam i am sorry...actually..
Samir: dont be shy Naina please for the college
Sahil: i dont have any probs
Naina: ok why not...
Miss Delamarre: done i am waiting for you in room 203 i ll give you the script you have to learn...
Both: yes mam...
They three left
Shifali saw all this but didnt hears properlly appart from proposing thing as all were silent that time...
She came towards Samir and Natasha
Both were sitting on same table
Samir was playing finding charlie on a book all frutrated staring full in the book and Natasha was doing some homework a pen in her hair, one in her hand and the bouchon in her mouth..
Shifali(hesitating): hi!!
Natasha: oh hi Shifali!
Samir: sshh, i will find it...i am sure concentrate Samir concentrate!!
Natasha: you duffer here is charlie(pointing in his book)
Samir: damn Tashu i know that you know where he is but i wanted to find out by muself...
Natasha: yeah it would have took the whole week! Now please help me for this naa!!
Samir: no you have to do it by yourself!!
Natasha(making a face): Samir yaar!!
Samir: no dont make puppy faces (put his hands on his eyes) i am not watching i dont know you!!
Natasha: I have helped you to find Charlie
Samir(still in same position): to kya mere baap na kaha tha help me?!
Natasha(acting to cry): how mean!! I hate you!!
Samir quickly opened his eyes to console her
Samir: sorry yaar i was joking!! I will help you
Natasha: promise??
Samir: yes!!
Natasha showed her face to him and he undertood she was joking
Natasha: lets start then!!
Samir(whispering to himself): main bhi kitna ullu houn...yeh koi ro sakti hai never, yeah actually i have never seen her cry for real, from 15 years i know her but never...
Natasha: did you said something??
Samir: not at all
But Shifali heard it...
Natasha(as she saw staring at them): oh Shifali, i am really sorry i complitely forgot you dear, not my fault when Sam is arround he make me mad(giving killing look to him, which Shifali took as shy look)
Shifali: erm i wanted to ask you something
Natasha: yeah sure
Shifali: are you both in love
Samir just laughed like a mad while Natasha surprised hit him and he stand correctly trying to kot laugh
Natasha: well Samir and me, if u think we are in love, as we are maybe not or maybe yes, it can be it like it can never happen, its like i know where u are but someone think i dont know and if i come to know than i donno what will happen...(she said all in one breath) and yeah Samir and my relationship is really simple, we never justify it, if you think we are in love then think...(saw someone) hey Bruce!! I will ask him to help me for science thing you start math one Samir...i am just coming
She left
Samir saw Shifali's face and start laughing
Samir: kya hua you are shocked?? Thats my Tashu dear...she is like that
Shifali: the awser of my question was yes or no
Samir: she did pruposelly confused you with her non stop talks...actually as she said we never give any justification Shifali but i will awnser your question as you are a nice friend...off course no, i think she will remain single for life!! Whose idiot will love her??
Shifali: dont you do??
Samir: off course i do as a friend, you know i know her from 15 years and she is so cute, we have grown up togheter, we have played togheter in childhood, if someone harm her or made her cry i ll kill him, she never cried she is really strong, whenever the whole house is sad she make every one happy...Sahil is also a verry caring brother...
Shifali: hhmm
Someone: Ssaaamm!!
Samir: coming Sonia!!!, bye Shifali
Shifali: bye!!
Shifali kept on thinking why it affect her so much...and why is she so obssesed with it...
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In room 203:
Sahil and Naina were learning their lines, they were confortable and joking and laughing...
Sahil knew Naina from long time but now he didnt knew why he was looking at her from a differant angle, her innoncence, her shys, talks, she was differents from others girls...her simplicity, her talks, her voice...her every movement, Sahil was begining to like everything in her...
Naina was also feeling weird, she was feeling some sweet feeling, she was attracted to the handsome man, from some days she was attracted to him but kept it inside her...she didnt knew if he like her or not, maybe he just dont care about her, maybe he is just using her for timepass like others girls...
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Outside all were having fun, Shifali forgot morning incident and she was enjoying too, and Sandeep was sitting in a corner and working...
But Naina was still lost in her thoughts...she didnt knowed how it happened, why it happened, what happened but she was feeling something for Sahil...and she was just thinking about him, Natasha was noticing that from morning she is upset and lost, she was just waiting for her to come and share her problem with her as she always do but this time she didnt, Natasha got worried and came towards her
Natasha(speaking slowly for a rare time): what happen Naina, you are so lost from this morning! Is there anything bothering you??
Naina: huh?? No...nothing...
Natasha: are you sure?
Naina looked at her...she couldnt lie to her...althought they do not spend much time togheter...Natasha was like her sister...she was the one to whom she could tell everything...
Naina: lets have a walk...
Tbey both started walking near the college bu away from all students...
Natasha: you can tell me Nainush!!
Naina looked at her
Natasha: sorry sorry sorry, i forgot you dont like pet names!!
Naina: its ok...but i dont know...how can i tell you...plus he is your brother...(she said without noticing)
Natasha(thinking loudly): my brother...Sahil...(thinking about morning) oohh you both were togheter in same classroom...oh my god...kya usne tumhare saath kuch ulta sidha kiya?? You can tell me...i swear i wont leave him!!
Naina: Tashu...you think too much...nothing like that...he is verry nice and polite with me...
Natasha: then whats the problem dear, Naina its the first time you are hesitating to tell me something!!
Naina: i dont know if its a problem or what is it...i feel...i think i feel attrackted towards Sahil...i mean he is so handsome...so caring...with you, with me...and whenever i see him its just weird i feel shy and like u know...how to explain...i just..
Natasha(shocked and happy, cuting her): you are in love!!! Oh my god...i dont belive this...
Naina: please Nats...i dont know at all what does he think or feel about me...dont tell him!!
Natasha: dont worry i ll keep it a secret!!
Naina: promise
Natasha: friend promise
Naina: thanks Tashu...you are so nice and understanding to your family member...do you remember when we were 9 years old we went to a camping for holidays...
Natasha: yeah i think yes...
Naina: we rode in a magazine for your euroscope that you are really helpfull, nice, loving and caring to your close ones...
Natasha: hhmm yeah remember...so?
Naina: that was true...i know you dont belive in it...but that was true...i was so tensed ans whenever i talk to you, i share my problem with you i feel so relaxed...
Natasha: hey dont be filmy and dont thank me!! Anyways you have told me that you love Sahil so what is next??
Naina(giggled): i am not being filmy!! Tum naa, apni aadat se baaz nahi aao ghi...i was telling you that you are nice and something emotional and you...rumhe koi faarak hi nahi parta...anyways what do you mean...nothing next...
Natasha: Naina!! I will talk to Sahil about it!!
Naina: no! I know you cant do that...you had promised!!
Natasha: i wont tell him dont worry...main houn naa!!
Naina looked at her and laughed...as she was used to say that last sintence from always!!
Naina: first time i will say thank god tum ho!! I dont know what would we all do if you were not here...
Natasha: aaww thats so sweet!!
They both hugged...
But they were unware of the fact that someone was listening to them...and that was none other than Samir...he had heard everything...he was actually shearching for Natasha and followed them...he smiled and left...
Sandeep was also tensed...he was sitting on the bus stop which was in front of where the two girls were talking...
They both crossed the road and from there Naina directly went to her house while Natasha, how could she came home that early she got back towards college and as the bus stop was in way she saw an upset Sandeep...Sandeep was much more worried than Naina...he was in the verge of crying...
Natasha sit on the bench next to him
Sandeep quickly smiled
Sandeep: hi!! You are taking the bus??
Natasha: is it your problem??
Sandeep: what kind of girl are you?? Even after a nice approach you are showing attitude? By the way you are right...i have better problems than you!! I wont loose my time with you!!
Natasha(talking quickly): I know that i am not the problem, I cant be the problem because i am the one who solve problem, so please tell me what is your problem?
Sandeep: huh?? (Trying to understand) why should i tell you whats my problem, because my problem is not your problem ok!?
Natasha: as you wish, stupid!! Tumhara koi friend to hai nahi, apne maa ko hi batana!!
Sandeep got tears in his eyes recalling his mother, his mother was the sweetest one for him...he wished she was her, he would have told her immetiadly...
Sandeep(tears falling from his eyes): kash...if she was here do you think i ll be sitting here like that?? My mom is no more...
Natasha(feeling sorry and sad): oh...i am really sorry, i didnt knew, so sorry...
Sandeep(wipped his tears): its okay...its actually my problem...my father is so mean and rude with me...i have no one in this whole world...you are so lucky, you have a best friend, a brother, a mother, a father
Natasha: no, my father is dead...
Sandeep looked at her
Sandeep: sorry...
Natasha: its okay, dont worry i ll be your friend(extanding her hand)
Sandeep smiled
Sandeep: waisse to...you all are my friends, but you are the first one who can understand me...BUT that doesnt mean i ll shake your hand...woh kya hai naa, i will have to wash my hands if i do so!!
Natasha: huh(surprised) you that even doesnt mean i like you as friend or something i just got pity on you, poor thing!!
Sandeep: my bus is here i wont waste more time with you!!
He said as he got up and walked towards the bus!!
Sandeep: even i hate you!! Stupid guy!!
The bus left and so as Natasha...in ways she met Samir
Samir holds her by her shouder from back as htey keep on walking
Samir: you know what Natashu, i am often ashamed of you, by your behaviour, but today i can say i am proud of you!!
Natasha: oh really?? Thats new to me...and why??
Samir: because you are the bestest friend, sister, daughter anyone could have!! I am so lucky that YOU are my best friend!!
Natasha: yeh aaj saab filmy dialogues kyun marr rahe hai
Samir laughed
Samir: you are so cute and innocent
Natasha(evil look): oh really??
Samir: sorry, oh my god, today i saw another you so i forgot about the real you!! Kept that evil look, it match you more!!
Natasha: shut up!! Okay i am going to your house to leave my bag and take some water, dont forget there is a football match at the yellow court!!
Samir: okay i am going to CFR see you there..
Natasha: ok
She left
Samir smiled...
At the mall he saw Shifali in a bar she was having a drink
He joined her
Samir(to the waiter): a green diabolo please!!
Shifali: oh Samir..Hi!
Samir: hi, you drink??
Shifali: yeah!! Who does not!! I drink sometimes...to feel better, why dont you??
Samir: no, and you are still young, i mean its not good for health also...
Shifali(lightly drunk): you are really funny, first person to care about me...
Samir: Shifali...are you okay??
Shifali: yeah!!
Samir: hhmm, you know with Tashu i drink too when we are tensed...
Shifali: but you said..
Samir: we drink coca, juice...
Shifali laughed in a druked state...and a guy started to stare at her
Samir: its not funny, it make us feel better without harming us...also another things when we felt cold we eat sweets!!
Shifali(laughing): whhaatt?? You know Natasha...she is verry sweet, you should marry her
Samir(shocked): tum apne hosh me nahi ho...what the hell are you saying...
Shifali(more drunked state): nothing...anyways i ll remain single for ever...but thats not a problem...i have to make my career, even become a bi**h but i have to hvae money!! Loads of money!! But you...you have someone at least...
Samir: Shifali you are mad...anyways i am going...i have a match...he started going and that man came towards her and put his hand on her waist missbehaving with her,
Shifali: dont you dare to touch me!!
The man: and what will you do??
Samir couldnt hear but he saw that man missbehaving with her and rushed to her
Samir: hey you...dont touch her...
Samir called the manager
The manager: dont worry mr, i have called the police, they ll arrest him...
Samir: thanks...
Shifali couldnt stand by herself she was holding Samir' T-shirt...
Samir: tum naa!! What is the need to drink and come here...look at your age...come i ll drop you!!
Shifali: sorry...i am so sorry...
Samir: its okay let me call...
Samir called Natasha
Samir: hey Tashu i am sorry i cant come...have a little probkem, i ll tell you later...you ll manage with the match naa...
Natasha: its okay,dont worry main houn naa!!
Samir: tum kyun ho??
Natasha(giggled): okay bye!!
Samir: Shifali tell me the way to your house...
Samir dropped Shifali and promised her not to tell this to anyone...Shifali got asleep for one or two hours...
Back home Samir sat on the sofa and start thinking about her
She was so young...what problem could she have at that age that she need to drink...
He was interupted by Natasha and Sahil who came back after winning the match...
Samir: so dont tell me without me you lost it naa??
Sahil: what do you think of yourself?
Natasha: come on we won, whats new in it!!
Samir: yeah, Tashu lets do our homework!!
Natasha: oh yes! I forgot about it...
Sahil: anyways guys i am going home, see yaa
Samir: bye!!
Samir and Natasha started doing their homework...but while doing it, they used to chat...
Natasha: so what happened?? Why couldnt you come?
Samir: woh...(remembering his promise)...nothing...
Natasha: nothing?? Sam!! Anyways i know it must be important, i wont ask you for it...
Samir: but...i just cant lie to you...but i had promised someone i wont tell anyone
Natasha: then kept your promise, thats more important...by the way everyone is having problems today...
Samir: yes, oh i just remember, whats going on between Naina and Sahil?
Natasha: whhhaatt?? Emm nothing like that, have you lost it or what?
Samir: Naina is my sister why she told you about it and not me!
Natasha: look Samir i also cant lie to you so please, either i promised not to tell anyone
Samir: i heard you talks Tashu!! But why are you hidding, if my sister is happy why would i object then
Natasha(exited): really?? Oh thank you so much, so whats next whats the plan??
Samir: you are too much fast, breath yaar, first tryto ask Sahil what he think about Naina, then we ll see...
Samir saw Natasha got busy in doing geometry...
He thoughts of calling Shifali to ask how was she..
Shifali was feeling better, tears in her eyes,she had done such a bad thing today, she wanted to open to someone, she didnt wanted to drink anymore, she heard the phone and pick it up
Samir: hello
Shifali: hi Samir...
Samir: how are you feeling now??
Shifali: better...
Samir: okay please take care if yourself thats not a way...
Shifali: at least you dont scold me Samir...and yeah thanks for the lift,
Samir: anytime!!
Shifali: i am sorry if by mistake i told you something wrong...
Samir: no thats okay, Shifali can i ask you something?
Shifali: yes
Samir: can i tell Natasha about you?? I am sorry but she is verry understanding and i feel guilty when i hide something from my close ones...
Shifali: ok...you can
Samir: thanks
Natasha(calling him): Samir!!
Samir went to her without ending the call
Samir: kya hai
Natasha: help me for this naa...
Samir: okay, you know Tashu why i couldnt came, actually..
Natasha(cutting): nnnooo!! Dont tell me!! Keep your promise duffer!!
Samir: but i...
Natasha cut starting singing ignoring him purposelly..
Shifali heard everything, she was giggling a little by how childish Natasha could be...
Samir(irritated by her singing): shut up!!!
Natasha: Samir dont broke the promise yaar...
Samir: have you kept your one?
Natasha: that not my fault if you heard!!
Samir: the person to whom i promised said i can tell you!!
Natasha: oh then tell!!
Samir: who was not letting me do?
Natasha: telll!!!
Samir: thats Shifali, she was in a bar...drunk...
Natasha: oh my god...
Samir: some guy was missbehaving with her...
Natasha(shocked): is she ok?
Samir: yeah, i left her to her home...
Natasha: you did a good thing...
Shifali was still listening
Natasha: poor her, what was the need of drinking?? I really wish her problem get solved, i ll pray for her...
Samir: your so nice Tashu, i am proud to be your friend...
Natasha: rreeaalllyy?? Can you do anything i say????
Samir: hey dont look at me like that!!
Natasha: please buy me an ice cream tomorrow, please please, pleeeaaasssee!!
Samir giggled
Samir: ok, ok...you will never change, do the homework first!!!
Shifali smiled and cut the call...
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Here is the next update i am really sorry for verry late update but its a long one, hope u like it and leave ur wiews...

Edited by The_Imane - 11 years ago

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Vishaka Sanjana

@Sanjana4Rajeev

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Hey Imane!!

What an update dear!!..I really loved it!!..So i'm liking the progress between the couples and their chemistry is simply rocking. So at first Samir and Natasha were practicing with their lines but somehow their spark was missing so the play director thought to cast somebody else. Meanwhile,Shifali thought that Natsha and Samir were in love and somehow I get this feeling that she has also a feeling for him and I really loved the pub scene where she expressed her feelings towards him , in a drunken state that he should get married to Natasha, and he is feeling concerned about her , that's a very interesting twist and I really loved the fact that they were concerned about Shifali's feeling and i'm sure as a friend they will understand her problems and surely she will overcome!!..And Naina is also in love with Sahil and she shared it with tashu as well . I also liked the progress between Sandeep and Natasha..so overall it is a very good update dear!!..Hope we can all see exciting scenes as well!!..Please continue soon and pm me!!

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Imane

@The_Imane

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Recap: Sahil Naina getting close, Shifali tensed...

Secretsducoeurpart8:

Later in evening that same day, Natasha has gone home and after having a good dinner and giving a warm bye to his parents Samir went to Naina's room
Samir: are you sleeping??
Naina: no you can come in...
Samir: okay!! Dear sister do you know I love, you a lot...
Naina:what are you saying Samir
Samir: why hidding your feelings from me??
Naina: what feelings? What are you talking about?
Samir: you like Sahil??
Naina: what?? Oh my god...i knew Natasha cant keep anything to herself!! Damn, why!! Why does she told you!!
Samir: stop doubting on her, she didnt told me anything, i heard your talks!! She didnt have anything to do in this...
Naina: and...and why do you listen to ours talks then??
Samir: i didnt listened purposelly...
Naina: my foot!!
Samir: stop being childish now, your my dear only sister, and i am so happy you love Sahil, he is a nice guy!!
Naina(blushingly hides her face in her pillow): nnnooo...
Samir laughed
Samir: i know you like your space, privacy and all, i am going...good night
Naina smiled and went to sleep...
There Sahil was also thinking about her, she was kind of differant from others girls...she was soft hearted, naive, sweet and simple...she was also shy, not like others girls who used to talk freely...sometimes talk to much, Sahil was feeling kind of a new feeling!!
Just when Natasha came in his room
Natasha: hey!!
Sahil(come out of his thoughts): you??
Natasha: what do you think?? Who will come in your room late at night huh???
Sahil: Natasha please...
Natasha: oh my god!! Dont tell me anyone else, a girl appart from me come in your room late at night??
Sahil: what the hell?? Tashu can you please stop this nonsense!! And why didnt you knock before going into someone's room??
Natasha: why are you yelling at me!!
Sahil: ok, i am verry sleepy so please be direct and tell why did you came??
Natasha: i just wanted to talk to you, about anything and everything...how is college going on??
Sahil: as always...why are you behaving strangely??
Natasha: nothing..you know Naina??
Sahil: off course i know her!! What is happening? What is wrong with you??
Natasha: she is a nice girl naa??
Sahil: yes, who said she was bad!
Natasha: do you like her??
Sahil looked at her
Natasha: i mean as friend??
Sahil: yes she is a sweet girl...
Natasha(exited): really?? You think she is sweet??
Sahil: huh??
Natasha: emm...why, dont you think she is nice, i mean verry beautifull also and...
Sahil: what the hell ?? Natasha tumhe ho kya gaya hai??
Natasha: nothing nothing(starting to go) you forgot what i said, you didnt heard, good night!!
She said as she left in hurry
Sahil(thinking): what is wrong with her?? And how does she know i was thinking about Naina? She know everything! Oh my god if she know about my feelings then...no..how is it possible i havent told anyone...she cant read my mind, no she is just mad!!
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The next day:
In hall of the college, a verry tired Shifali was putting her books in her box...
She closed it and locked it with her keys...she then difficulty took her heavy bag and put it on her shoulder...
That was noticed by Samir and Natasha who were also there in back to take their books...
Natasha: she look tired...
Samir: i told you naa...
Natasha: you think is hould talk to her??
Samir: are you asking permission for this??
Natasha: do i ever ask permission from you??
She left his bag which she has been holding to help him, his bag felt on his feet, she left taunting and he look at hee
Samir: how mean!!
In class Shifali was sitting somewhere near the wall, her head on her table, almost sleeping...
Samir came in the class and saw her, he felt bad and looked at her for sometimes...he go and to sit with Sahil...
Naina was also sitting beside her friend...
Natasha came in little late...she saw the place she was used to sit, in behind Sahil and Samir to chat with them, she then saw Shifali and went to sit beside her...
Samir gave her her strange "why" look
Natasha sigh and gave him "whatever" look
Shifali noticed someone sat beside her, she looked up, to see Natasha.
Shifali(sleepishly): hi!!
Natasha: oh hi!!
She smiled to her and Shifali gave her back a little weak smile...
Natasha: did we had homework??
Shifali: yes i think we had two exercices..
Natasha: oh my god!! I forgot to do them!!
She hurriedly took her workbook and opened it after asking the page to Shifali,
Natasha acted to behave dumbly...
Natasha: can you please help me??
Shifali: huh?? Oh yes...here breafast in english...
Natasha: why does they say breakfast??? A fast, mean fasting, mean u kept a fast, and so you break the fast!! And so why does they say breakfast, as i didnt kept a fast????
Shifali: what?? (She giggled at her stupidity) Natasha, in english its breakfast and thats all...now dont ask me why, ok
Natasha: emm ok...and why does they do write light with g n h, we can write lite, it will be the same pronounciation naa??
Shifali: haan??
She giggled once again,
Shifali: stop asking things, teacher will come and you will be not done then...
Natasha: okay...
There Samir was chatting with Sahil
Samir: Naina is so cute, i enjoyed her birthday party verry much!!
Sahil: yeah her birthday party was verry nice, so as her..
Samir: do you think, i mean you know David, he said he liked Naina, that she has a beautifull side, and that he would like to go out with her, do you think i should allow him??(all that part is a lie to see Sahil'reaction)
Sahil: what???? No!!! Not at alll !! (Calmed down) i mean she is verry sensitive, she is not his type, he is not a nice guy!!
Samir: no he is my friend, he is nice...
Sahil: please try to...
Teacher: Mr Samir!! Stop chatting!! Go to sit behind Shifali, alone you wont chat with walls i suppose?
Samir frowned and went to sit there, while Natasha give him a sarcasting smile and he gave her a killing look...
Later Shifali was feeling cold so she closed the window,
Samir: its hot!! Why did you closed the window!!
He opened it back, and give her a challenging smile
She closed it back, and hold it with her hand to make sure he wont open again,
Samir: your laces are open!!
Shifali bend down while Samir opened the window back, she gave him a killing look and closed it back
Samir opened it again, this time Shifali smiled at him and didnt closed it, he was surprised, that game was also funny, to make her react he closed it but unfortunetelly her hand got caught in...
Shifali: ouch!!
Samir opened it back quickly
Samir: i am really sorry!! Show me..
Shifali: Samir, tum bhi naa...
Samir: really sorry...
Shifali: its ok...
The teacher had seen the scene
Teacher: Natasha, please drop you friend to the nurse...
Natasha: sure..
Teacher: and you Samir, give me your shcoolbook!!
What was this, she can easily have a fracture!!
Natasha: but mam
Teacher: please, you will have severe punishment for this...
Shifali: mam, it was a bit my fault, i had put my fingers there, but Samir has warned me...its not his fault...
Teacher: if YOU are saying then, ok, go to the nurse...
Samir was left surprised...
Natasha: what had happened??
Shifali: nothing, you know Samir naa, always behave stupidely
Natasha: lol, anyways got a pause of the stupid lecture!!
Shifali: you naa!!
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Later Shifali, Natasha and Samir were having their lunch...and completing some homework outside...
Samir: i am happy that you agreed to have lunch with us Shifali...
Shifali: well its my pleasure only, you both are so fun, and my friends...
Natasha: ok stop the emotional drama...Sam I have a plan...for Naina and Sahil...
Samir: oh yeah, i talked to Naina its confirmed from her side she love him...did you talked to Sahil??
Natasha: yes and no...i actually tried but failed...
Samir: god Tashu cant you do just one thing correctly!!
Natasha: it was no that easy!!
Shifali: what are you talking about??
Samir: emm well, Naina likes Sahil n we think Sahil too does, and we need to reunite them
Shifali: oh, thats very interesting!!
Natasha: now listen my plan!!
Samir: tell your useless plan!!
Shifali: Samir chill yaar, let her talk...
Samir: dont praise her, she already fly to high
Natasha: Sam!!
Samirk tell
Natasha: Naina's marriage has been arranged
Shifali(shocked): when did that happened??
Samir(understand): Shifali, she is telling so she is telling Naina's marriage has been arranged!!
Natasha: right!
Shifali: but what?? I didnt understand
Samir: we will act so Shifali, it must look very real, and if Sahil loves her, he wont let that happening!!
Shifali: so smart!!
Samir: thanks thanks i know i am smart...
Natasha: it was my idea!!
Shifali: true!!
Natasha: Saturday, i will talk to mom, she will surely help us!!
Samir: your the mother is the mad, she can the help us!!
Natasha(annoyed): shut up Samir!! Be serious yaar!!
Shifali: you are saying that
Samir: she loves Sahil very much Shifali, so does he!!
Shifali: thats very sweet!! Well i have no sibblings...
She said sadly
Natasha: who said?? I am your sister!!
Shifali looked at her very touched by her words
Shifali: really?? Promise that you will always be??
Natasha: offcourse i do!!
Samir: Shifali, so you are coming naa?? Nat's house at 2pm??
Shifali: i dont know, i will tell you later...
Natasha: come on!!
Shifali: please i just cant promise anything...
Samir: ok chill!!
Natasha: okay Samir, i have to leave, going to the doctor!!
Samir: FINNALLY???? you realised you are mad, so going to psychatric??
Natasha: shut up Samir!!
She left..
Shifali:why do you always tease her??
Samir: like that, its our kind of love!!
Shifali(giggled): weird!!
Samir: your bus is here!!
Shifali: oh!! Ok bye then!!
She also left
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Next day:
Samir and Natasha came to Sahil'house looking all happy
Sahil: hey guys!! Come in!!
Samir: sweets for you!!
Sahil: thanks!!
Natasha: that's so cool, i have never ever atten a whole wedding!!
Samir: normal tum to mehendi ka cake kha ke nikal leti thi!!
Natasha: it was not funny!!
Samir: it wasn't meant to be!!
Sahil: what wedding??
Natasha: oh yes we forgot to told you!!
Samir: Naina is getting married, papa have arranged her marriage with some guy from London!!
Sahil: what the hell?? I mean how can?? Did she agree??
Natasha: offcourse she did!!
Sahil: but she is too young!!
Samir: yes, thats why they will only get engaged and will get married some years later!!
Sahil: But...you cant do that Samir, if he is not good for her??
Samir: i know him since childhood dude, he is a very nice guy!!
Doorbell rang and Natasha went to open.
Sahil was very upset...he was feeling as he isgoing to loose something...
Natasha came back with Shifali behind her
Shifali: hi all!! Nice house!!
Natasha: oh thanks, See Sahil, even Shifali came to congratulate us!!
Sahil: what??
Shifali was surprised, Natasha gave her a box of sweets from behind, without letting anyone notices, and push her little towards Samir
Shifali understood, she gave the box to Samir
Shifali: congratulations Samir, i am very happy for Naina, give this to her from my side!!
Sahil was getting more upset, everyone'hapiness were becoming his pain...
Romilla came from the kitchen a phone in her hand
Romilla: Samir puttar, you mama just the called the me, she told me the everything, consolations puttar!!
Natasha: congratulations mom!!
Romilla: oh yes, the sorry...Naina will be the very happy, uss larke ko janti houn main, bohot acha larka hai...
Shifali: yes anty i also know him!! My mom and his are friends...
Romilla: tu kaun??
Natasha: mom wo Shifali, humari friend...hhmm
She winked
Romilla: oh haan, main the work finish karke aati houn...
Sahil: are you all sure Naina is happy about it??
Samir: come on yaar she is my sister!!
Interphone rang...Natasha went to open..
Natasha: its Naina, she is coming!! Now i hope your doubts will be cleared Sahil!!
Few minutes later Naina joined them, she was dressed very traditionnally and had mehendi on her hand!!
Shifali: wow!! Your parents already made a bride of you!!
Naina: what do you want me to do, just by hearing the new look what they did to me, imagine my wedding!! god!!
Sahil: Naina are you happy with this wedding??
Naina: off course
Sahil: you dont even know that guy!!
Naina: but my family and friends know him!! I trust them!!
Sahil: but Naina, you used to belive in love so much!! And now arranged marriage lik that...you cant marry that guy!!
He said possessively...
Naina: and why not??
Sahil: because...because i love you damn it!!
All were happy but acted surprised...
Sahil didnt belive he said that in front of all...
Naina: me too..
Sahil: what??
Naina: i love you too
She blushed...
Sahil: really Naina (he held her hands)then cancel this wedding please...
All laughed and Naina too
Naina: there is no wedding...
Sahil: what??
Natasha trowed red roses on them!!
Natasha: april fool Sahil!!
Shifali and Samir laughed...
Sahil: you shut up cartoon!!
Natasha: but what..
Sahil: i said shut up!! Samir you tell me, what it is all this...
Samir: this was plan Sahil to make you both confess, you dont know how hard it was to convince Naina!!
Sahil: what, i hate you guys!,
Samir: dont hate me, it was your sister's idea!!
Sahil looked angrily at Natasha
Natasha: i have homework to do!!
She runs away saying this
Sahil: yaa run away, tumhe to main dekh loun gha!!
Shifali: come on, you both are togheter only because of her!!
Naina: thats true!!
Romilla came back as Natasha told her everything while going
Romilla: so you both are in the love??
Sahil: mom, app ne bhi inka saath diya!!
Romilla: sorry puttar, you know i cant say no to your sister, and it was for my son's hapiness...
Sahil: ok i forgive you all appart from Naina, she will have to pay for this sooner or later, he winked
All teased her while she blushed
Naina: shut up Sahil, she left...
Romilla: aaww sharma gaye!! Samir i will go to your the parents, and tell the them about all the this.
Samir: sure anty...
She left along with with Sahil
Only Samir and Shifali were left in the living room
Samir looked at the flowers petals on tbe floor...
Samir: my god, that crazy girl!! I will have to clean the whole house now...
The house was actually in a mess..
Shifali: i can help you...
Samir: really?
Shifali: well i have nothikg to do...
Both giggled on this
He bring two brooms and both start cleaning...
Shifali rarely used to clean or do housechores, she find it quite annoying, but with Samir, it was differant as, cleaning the house with others persons is better and can be amusing rather than doing it alone...
Natasha had also on the music very loud and Samir was doing funny steps with the broom according to music...
Shifali giggled she turned and sliped on a plastic shaper she was about to fall but Samir held her...
They had an eylock...
Natasha: erm erm...what is going on here??
Samir let Shifali who stand correctly...
Samir: who do you think will clean all this??
Natasha: oh yes sorry, i will help you!! Shifali you gan go...
Shifali: no...i mean if i could stay a little, if you dont mind after all its your house...
Natasha: sure stay..i was saying maybe if you are busy...
The three friends quickly cleaned the house, Samir proposed to play football on Wii...Natasha agreed and priposed canets of coca also..she went to the kitchen to bring them...
Shifali: i dont know how to play well but will try my best!!
Samir: Its ok, its for fun, Tashu is a very good player...i think she can make at least two goals in 3mins...
Shifali: really?? Wow thats awesome!! How did she learn to play so well??
Samir: you know she play in real too, and we must be playing this game togheter for about 8 or 9 years!! I am not bad also, but i think i can make only one goal in 3mins...
Natasha(from the kitchen): guys do you want brownies too??
Samir: which ones??
Natasha: the ones i bought yesterday!!
Samir: yes bring them!!
They sat to play and had a great time!!
Later in evnening...
They were so busy playing that Shifali didnt noticed the time passing and it was already 7pm and she was supposed to be back home at 6pm...
Samir: aah(sigh) very tired...what is the time Tashu??
Natasha: emm i think 7pm...Sam lets order a pizza!!
Samir: sure i will do it...
Shifali hearing that was very worried, she was suposed to be at home at 6pm only...
Natasha: kya hua? Any problem??
Shifali: actually i am late...i was not supposed to came here firstly and i was supposed to be home at 6pm...
Natasha: oh no!! I have an idea, what are you supposed to eat for dinner??
Shifali: why are you asking me this??
Natasha: look, we are saturday naa?? And that too afternoon!! You go home, i will drop you!!
Shifali: last time you dropped me...dont mind my mom didnt liked it...
Natasha: dont worry i will drop you in front of the pizzeria, take my pizzas, a bread for you, tell your mother you had gone to take bread and it took time as they were many peaple at the bakery and the baker had to make more bread ok??
Shifali: oh my god...how do you have such ideas??
Natasha: thats me, now hurry up!! Samir cancel the order i will take them on place!!
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Shifali did as planned and came home..
Samina: where were you?? I am at home from about 15mins Shifali!! Where have you gone??
Shifali: mom i went to took the bread...god you know saturday naa?? This baker knows there is too much peaple on Saturday he should make more breads..
Shifali casually put the bread in the kitchen and casually went in her room...
Samina also went back to her work leaving this matter and trusting Shifali...

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