Short Story – Majbooriyan - Page 2

wonderful story
i ead it at one shot
impressed
great job frnd
-brinda.

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WOW awesome story! and what a treat fr all of us :)
Thank you so much!
It was very realistic in some ways and I enjoyed it thuroughly
thank you 😳

Sheena_row: I love the way you tell the story, the writing style is beautiful, the story simple and straightforward. But the emotions you brought forth are fantastic.

I really loved the way the story started and the way it ended. The unpretentious way Jai and Bani act with each other, it was perfect. You did not try to put their relationship on a pedestal and it starts out as an attraction that ends up in stronger feelings, physical and emotional.

thanks sheena, love getting comments from a wonderful writer.

moudeb2005: Very beautifully written. Loved the strong Bani. JW was pretty sexy
glad you like JW, don't we all like sexy men.

jnawaz: waiting for you lamba comment.

jigna:
omg that was aamzing!
bani did have to make alot of sacrifices...
it was very sad but in the end it wroked out for her
amazing

Thanks for reading. We all love happy ending.
amiee & suime: Thanks for reading.

davia: story is over or going to have next part to??
it was a good one..
just a short story no updates. glad you liked it

saksena: A very cute short story. Loved it!!!
Thanks. thank you

nema123: thank you

pkbains: thank you

brinda: wonderful story
i ead it at one shot
impressed
great job frnd thanks, prefer writing short story, easier to do with work, home etc

srkfever: WOW awesome story! and what a treat fr all of us
Thank you so much!
It was very realistic in some ways and I enjoyed it thuroughly
thank you thanks for the post, glad you enjoyed it, real life too has its ups and downs

its beautifully written i couldn't catch up till the end. i'll surely read and coment good divan that was nice....

Very nice, shows J's fear of committment slowly being replaced by the awareness of how much he really cared for her..thoroughly enjoyed it..
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Kami, swati and btkr, thanks for posting comments.

Thanks to all the silent readers.

Hi divan

very well written dear..i really loved ur writing style.pls write sm more in future...

PS: just one question. it would have been nice if u wrote about wht was jai going throught tt two year after he left Mt Abu. If he was so much in love with bani y he did nt search her before???

Originally posted by: j&b84

Hi divan

very well written dear..i really loved ur writing style.pls write sm more in future...

PS: just one question. it would have been nice if u wrote about wht was jai going throught tt two year after he left Mt Abu. If he was so much in love with bani y he did nt search her before???

He did go and see her in Mt Abu but knew she would never live her father to and come back to him. Previously they had a relatioship that was not based on love but just attraction. He went and spent time with her when he wanted.

Hey Divan,
Liked the story..Very well written..very clearly penned all the emotions..the way u had put up the story was fabulous.