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Posted: 11 years ago
cant have apart n this dream is related to geet n kids in some way i know hope geet does not destroy the dream. aww tam n mann are so cute.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update after sooo long...but really nice update ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the FF.
I just hope Geet won't do anything drastic which she will regret later.
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Posted: 11 years ago



Gals I wud really love if u can visit this amazing thread of Maaneet creation, it's my bestie Sammy's creation corner, do visit tell her how u liked it..



PART 85


Maan was shocked and amazed at the same time hearing a 6 yr old kid can crack his password and another was informing it like it happens on a regular basic. They heard a chuckle and Tammy turned to give her cute smile to Rudra who was standing leaning on the door frame looking at Maan's horror filled expression, he has a grin that says "I told you they are Devil."

A sound caught their attention and Tammy hissed under her breath.

Tammy: I told her not to start now. Anyway she couldn't make the tune only with the lyrics.

Apparantly they had cracked Maan's dream project file that was in it, Maan wanted to get rid of the paper so he was making a CD but in the middle he had to leave the laptop open only with a password. Never in his nightmare he thought anyone can crack the password.

So great for thinking so much. In tht moment Tamanna took a run but not before taking her special hamburgers made by her dad. Maan watched his little daughter running with a cute frown and 2 hamburgers, Rudra's chuckle brought him back to reality.

Rudra: does it bother u tht they are 'playing' with your thing?

Maan shook his head: No. If it was anyone else i woukd have kill that person but Tammy and Mann,,,, my everything is for them. I m just amazed how can they do this?

Rudra: u haven't seen everything yet. His eyes were glinting with mischievousness. Maan actualaly feared for a moment but then got distracted with a sound. His heart stopped hearing the first cord then another, He didn't knew when his feet took a haste chase. Rudra followed him feeling curiosus.

Maan's heart was shuddering violently as he heard the music, piano and guiter mixed a soft yet powerful tune took the atmosphere to an another level of breathlessness. Maan watched his kids playing his tune, which till now he wasn't felt so much as confident as his kids made him feel right at the moment. It's like God himself played his unusual game. His dream was playing his dream. He knew his lyrics were soulful, it came from his heart, hearing from Tammy and Mann its like his heart will come out just hearing the tune.

Rudra: Tammy can compose tune, she understand rythm and music, and about Mann, she learnt hacking devices from Geet. So basically your both children got talent from expert.

Maan can feel the lump forming in his throat, Rudra shrugged and walked towards the drum, he read the lyrics then the composition Maan was working, He eyed Maan with one eyebrow up in appreciation. Kids saw Maan watching them and the proud feel cross their face made his heart arch, they loved the composition and it amazed him Tammy can actually work on tune which he did.

They sat there and for hours the 4 of them played music, Maan finally took the drum and Rudra gave his voice, as Rudra's band member came to the house as scheduled, they also participated. They swore confidentially hearing it's yet to release, they even offered to make the album which Maan seriously considered. He never heard Rudra before today and he accepted Rudra and his band is phenomenon.

Just then Maan's cell rang breaking the musical atmosphere. He excused himself from the chaos as the kids were making a lot of noise.

Maan: Yes Aditya what's the news.

Adi: S, sss, ssir

Maan knew whenever adi stammers like that means bad news. And indeed it was.

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Rudra heard the cracking noise, he signaled his frnds to keep eye on the kids before running towards Maan's direction, he was seething, face hard and eyes murderous.

Rudra: Maan.

Maan looked at him with rage filled eyes that was enough to shiver devil from hell. Rudra's eyes took the smashed phone and knew something really bad had happened. In these days he had never seen Maan so angry, not even when he arrived here. Guess Geet did her work.

Maan: you were right, she did her number, I could have never guess she could became so malicious, so bitter, vindictive. I can't believe she sold my dream, how could she?

Rudra became alert, in a few hour he got to know how much he value his dream, he got a vivid picture in those lyrics why he hold them so close to his heart, and now Geet had entered the den snatching lion's favorite possession. First time Rudra is afraid for his best friend, he can see Maan is carrying a storm with him.

Rudra: Maan relax, we can handle it, just give me some time to solve all this.

Maan: you are telling me to relax Rudra, she sold my heart, ripped it with cruelty. You said right, she isn't my Geet anymore, she has become henious but she forgot even Maan isn't the same anymore. If she had asked my every ounce of blood I would have presented her, if she had asked my soul on her feet I would have given, I just asked one chance Rudra, one chance to rectify my mistake, I have waited for yrs with a hollowness in my heart and life, I just wanted one chance to ask forgiveness for my sin, even it mean for only a moment before I die, but she snatched one thing that was the meaning of my life, you have to pay for it Geet.



Precap: You wanted to rip my heart when I had already ripped it the moment I had tore your heart, but this was one step further, now wait how I snatch the only thing you respect so much, I will see u squirm the way I did watching my dream destroying while I stand there and someone else sang those songs.



2nd teaser: if this is the only way to bring my old Geet and kill this vindictive Girl, then I am ready to do anything. If u once said u want my heart I would have given u but that wont bring u back Geet. This is the only way I have now.



Sorry for all the grammer and typing mistakes...


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Posted: 11 years ago
it's awesome dear. maan is shocked after knowing his children's qualities which are god gifted for them. in such a small age they are doing fabulous job. he is feeling so much proud to being their father. . maan is angry on geet. she sold his dream. now maan is in action. what will he do for getting his geet back. very very exited for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan is hell shocked 😆😆
tammana can compose music n mann can hack password wah
both get training from expert 😉😉

ops geet ne kya kiya
behara maan
geet dont to give chance to maan but maan want a chance
if geet come to know rudra helping maan tab uska band bajna pakka hay 😕
abb dekhne GEET N MSK KA TAKKAR 🤢🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
tamanna can compose & mann can hack the password
geet sold maan's dream...what will maan do
precap's...interesting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb part
loved it
maan is proud of his both children ..they are blessed by amazing talent one can compose songs at such a age and another can hack passwords..
geet sold maan's dream and maan is very much angry on geet for selling his dream
now he decided to tackle with her in his own way
eagelry waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u for updat di...Hahaha Maan was shocked beta Maan ye ap hi ki production h..do extra ordinary logo ki production aese hi hogi..so Geet actually executed her plan she didwrong ...now waiting to see what will Maan going to do n how will Geet face MSK...next update jaldi dena di plzz dieing to knw what is going to happen next

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