Ishra new os : Tumhaare aansu me jo dard hai..pt 3 on pg 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hellooo..dear friends..Thankss soo much for the previous feedbacks . I know that u all were waiting for this part as this is special , Ishra hug . Here it goes .

Raman and ishita walking on a all alone road holding each other's hand . Ishita feels to thank raman as he was the only who consoled and supported her at when she had a very sad moment in her life . Cool wind was blowing . And the atmosphere was all around to turn into a romantic climate for a couple . There was a silence so raman thought to have a nice and cute conversation with her beloved wife which they never had :

Raman : Ishita..

Ishita : Haan..( smiling )

R : Tumse ek baat kahoon ?

I : Agar manaa karoongi , to aap nahi kahoge ?

R : Kya yaar..kitna romantic climate hai..aur tum jhaansi ki raani ke mood me ho .

I : Achcha..baba..sorry..Kaho..kya kehna hai ?

R : Woh main..

I : 1 sec..1 sec...

Raman gets furious at ishita...for not letting him to complete the sentence which he wants to ask :

R : Ab kya hai yaar..kuch kehne dogi yaa..baar ..baar beech me bolti rahogi ?

I : Mujhe bas yeh kehna tha ki..aapne abhi bola ki romantic climate hai ..to isse aapko kya matlab hai ? Kahiin..

Raman thinks : Yeh jhaansi ki raani ..meri har ek word ko observe karti hai . Ab kya bahaana maarega raman .

Just then ishita says : Bolo naa raman..

R : Main kya boluun..mera kehna ka matlab tha ki..dekho ishita ..romantic climate means..baarish shayad hone waali hai .

I : Kya keh rahe ho..jo man me bahaane mil rahe hain..ussi ko keh de rahe ho..kuch soch samajh ke bolo..yeh to mujhe bhi pata hai ki..jab ...

R : Offo ..ishita..kya leke baith gayi tum . Bhool jaao jo maine kaha aur jo tumne poocha .

I : Ok..

Raman was so embarrassed , so thought to change the topic :

R : Ab baarish shayad hone waali hai .

I : Yes..raman . You are right..mujhe bhi lag raha hai . Aapko baarish achchi lagti hai raman ?

R : No.

I : Me too .

R : Hmm..chalo achcha hai..kuch to hum dono me similar hai .

I : Right !! Waise raman..aap mujhse kuch poochna chah rahe the naa .

R : Nahi aise hi..bas time pass u know !

I : To abhi bhi kahaan time pass ho raha hai . Poocho naa .

R : Theek hai..to kuch bataao apne pasand and naa pasand ke baare me .

Ishita smiles and stops then says :

R : Kya hua..ruk kyun gayi ? Kahiin baithna hai ?

I : Aap meri kitni care karte ho ..meri feelings , main jo words nahi kah paati..use bhi aap samajh lete ho . Aap mere liye mid-night me mujhe cheer up karne ke liye mere saath baahar walk karne aaye ho..to kya main aapke liye aapka saath dekar..kuch der tahal bhi nahi sakti ?

R : Par mere liye tum..

I : Kya..tum..aapka saath hai mere saath , to phir kis baat ki fikr hai ?

Raman smiles :

I : Aur aapko pata hai..meri pasand kya hai ?

R : Kabhi tumne bataaye kya ..jo mujhe pata rahega ?

I : Meri pasand aap ho . I am really a lucky woman who got you .

R : Achcha jhooth bol leti ho tum .

I : Haw..kaise ho aap..taarif kar rahi hoon ..aur aap ulta mujhe ..hi..

Ishita gets angry on him and leave from there but raman holds her hand and stops :

R : Are..mazaak kar raha hoon ..baba..sorry .

I : Aapko pata hai naa..mujhe aisa mazaak bilkul pasand nahi hai .

R : Sorry..please..maaf kar do . warna main..

I : Warna kya..

R : Warna main ..ruhi se tumhaari complain karoonga .

Ishita laughs at his words and hugs him , Just then it starts to rain , Raman is happily shocked and hugs her too for a while , First time ishita feels comfortable in his husband's arm . Finally raman accepts his wife ishita happily. After a while , they come to the their world and ishita tried to broke the hug but couldn't as her locket got stuck with raman's neck chain . She again tried but she failed , then raman helped looking at each other and got free by the problem . Ishita and raman are all wet now :

I : Woh..sorry.

R : Sorry kisliye ?

I : Abhi..hug..iske liye .

Raman knows that ishita is embarrassed , so he came in his raavan kumar mode :

R : Hug..friends ke beech me..to common hai..phir iske liye sorry kyun ?

I : FRIENDS ??

R : Haan..friends..tumne hi to kaha tha ki hum dono friends hain .

I : But..

R : Jhaansi ki raani ..ghar chalo ab..puri bheeg chuki ho .

I : Baarish ho rahi hai abhi bhi .

R : Puri to bheeg chuki ho..ab bachne ka koi fayda nahi hai .

I : To chalo .

They left from there smiling and reaches home :

In the morning , Shagun & Ashok at the dining table discussing :

Shagun : Good Morning .

Ashok : Good morning darling .

S : Kya baat hai , Aaj face pe smile hai ?

A : Are shagun..smile kaise nahi rahega , Aaj meri raman ke saath meeting hai . Agar raman ne iss deal ke liye haan kar di mere saath to ..phir woh apni agli har ek kadam par haar hi dekhega .

S : Dont worry , Woh haan karega . Aur parmeet bhi to hai tumhaare saath ..then jeet to tumhaari hi hone waali hai .

A : Hopefully !!

Shagun whispers : Bechaari ishita..woh to puri tarah tut chuki hogi . Kal raat ke baad to uske face par se smile hi chali gayi hogi .

At Ishra' s house , Ishra in their bedroom :

I : Raman..kya aaj aap mujhe clinic drop kar doge ? Please ?

R : No..ishita..I really cannot . Actually , Aaj meri bahut important meeting hai . Aaj main late nahi ho sakta . Tum aaj khud chali jaao . Pls .

Ishita mutters : Huh..raavan kumar ..maine kal mana kiya tha..aur aaj khud saamne se request kar rahi hoon ..to drama kar rahe ho . Mujhe bhi nahi jaana tumhaare saath ..apna morning kaun kharaab karna chahega .

R : Kuch keh rahi ho kya ?

I : No..main kya kahoongi ..kuch nahi ..aap jaao ..main akeli chali jaaungi . ( with a fake smile )

R : Ok .

Ishita left from the bedroom and goes to living room :

I : Ruhi beta..chalo..school ka time ho raha hai .

Ruhi : Mumma..1 second ..papa ko bye kehke aati hoon .

I : Ok..mera bachcha ..jaao .

After saying bye , They leave for school then clinic :

At raman's office :

Mihir : Good morning bhai .

Raman : Good morning , Sab kuch set hai ?

M : Yes bhai ..everything is set .

R : Then good .

In the conference room :

Mr.Suryavanshi ( the boss ) : Good morning gentlemen . Aaj hum log baby products ke deal ke liye ek professional Bussiness man ko select karenge .

So on...( I don't know much about these ) ...

Mr.Suryavanshi : So raman ..of all the last ..aap yeh deal kin ke saath start karna chahenge ?

Ashok thinks that raman will continue this with him but insteads raman says :

R : Mr.Suryavanshi ..main yeh deal Mr.Mehta ke saath continue karna chahoonga as he is the intelligent one . And hum agar unke saath yeh deal karenge to hume kaafi profit hone waala hai .

Ashok in between : But Mr.Raman...

Raman : Yes Mr. Khanna..We have sorted ..and agar hum aapke saath ..deal karte to hum logon ko bahut loss hota . Remember the last fake deal . Isliye deal hum Mr.Mehta ke saath karenge .

Ashok had nothing to say and he left , At last , Raman asked for a break and left from the cabin . He sees ashok and goes to him :

R : Oye 6 foot 2 inch ..kya hua..?? Deal nahi mili ..isliye upset ho . Kaise milti tumhe ..uske laayak hote to naa . Tumhaari wife...sorry..sorry..tumhaari girlfriend ne meri wife ke aankhon me aansu laaye aur tumhe laga ki main kuch nahi karoonga . Tumhe yeh deal tumhaari girlfriend ki wajah se nahi mili hai . Jaake use samjhaao ki agar woh tumhaara bhala chaahti hai to meri ishita ke saamne nazar nahi aani chahiye .

Ashok : What ????????

R : Oho..react to tu aise kar raha hai jaise teri girlfriend ne tujhe kuch bhi nahi bataaya .

He tells him the incident done by shagun with her ishita in a short way , Ashok gets very angry on shagun and after listening , He left from there to meet shagun :

At shagun's mansion :

Shagun : Are ..ashok..tum itni jadi aa gaye ???

Just then ashok slaps shagun :

A : Yeh tumne kya kiya..agar tumhe ishita se badla lena hi tha to mere bussiness ko drag karne ki kya zaroorat thi..pata hai aaj sirf aur sirf tumhaare wajah se maine aaj ek important deal kho diya . Don't you ever dare to interfere in my professional life with ur worst and useless mind .

Shagun was totally shocked after that :

Shagun : ASHOK...How dare u to...

A: Shut up !!!!!

S : Why will I..?? Tumhe himmat kaise hui ..mujhe thappad maarne ki ? Uss contract ke liye tumne mujhe thappad maraa .

A : That contract for me is more important than u !

S : Really..Thankfull to u ..mujhe bataane ke liye . Raman aur Ishita happy married life jee rahe hain aur main ?? Main sirf aur sirf tumhaare parties me tumhaare bosses ko impress karne jaati hoon . Hamesha se jhootha dilaasa dete aa rahe ho tum mujhe . Kya mujhe khush rehne ka haq nahi hai ?

A : I don't want to listen ur voice . Just get lost from here .

She in angry mood leaves from there :

Shagun whispers : Iss ishita ke wajah ne meri life barbaad kar di . Mujhe pata hai tha ki yeh ...Aur raman ..usne meri thodi si bhi fikr nahi ki . Go to hell .

Main ishita se badla leke rahoongi .

THE END .

Guys , how is this ??? Nice or really really worst ?

Do tell me in your lovely feedbacks . Thank you .!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
shagun you deserve this...Ashok love you dear for the "slap"...
Really nice os dear...continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Slap was the highlight of the update!! loved itt soo muchhh!! keepp continuingg.. eager to read moreee|!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
awesome update...
dat slap on shagun ' s face was superb...
thank u soo much for d pm...
update soon...
ll be waiting for d next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Lovely :) Keep continuing :)x
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Awnn super cute ! Raman ka kya dialogue
Ta
But add more ishra moments please
This shagun grrr
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update...
Ishra are so cute..
Shagun deserves it...
Loved it...
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: avni_19

Slap was the highlight of the update!! loved itt soo muchhh!! keepp continuingg.. eager to read moreee|!!!


Awwnn..thankss dear alot .😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishra-rocks

awesome update...

dat slap on shagun ' s face was superb...
thank u soo much for d pm...
update soon...
ll be waiting for d next part



Awwwnnn thanksss alot dear for the lovelyyy feedbacks . I'm Busy so much , getting no time to chat . So forgive me for not continuing next part .😭😭

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