^^My Heart Rings For You^^*SANDHIR OS*

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😊😊😊A/N: Heyya guys...See, I'm back again. My last OS was a sad one and everyone told me to write one with a happy ending. Henceforth, I decided to write a happy one...But frankly speaking this is not a happy ending OS, actually it doesn't have an ending, maybe it is a drabble but that you all will decide...And it is related to the current track with some changes that I made...Guys, I know it is not good, also it didn't come out as I expected but plzzz read and comment as your comments are very valuable to me and lastly this is based on Sanyukta's life, her feelings...RAKHI😊😊


MY HEART RINGS FOR YOU



PLOT: Sanyukta was going home when suddenly her car broke down. A church was near that place and she decided to take a quick visit of the church. Here, in FITE, everyone was searching Sanyukta but couldn't find her anywhere. Randhir, on hearing from Kaustuki that Sanyu might have left for her home, without thinking anything, started on his bike, maybe to stop Sanyu or maybe to bid her a last goodbye...

Sanyu was standing in the empty prayer hall, looking at Jesus, thinking about her so messed up life which she knew couldn't ever be made right, thinking about her dreams which she was giving up for her family's sake, thinking about Sameer with whom she had to spend her whole life in spite of knowing that she could hardly spend a day with that man, thinking of Vardhaan Suryavanshi, who had always been there for her, for her dreams but she disappointed him also...

Sanyu: I want an answer, God...Why are you doing this to me? What have I done? I should also have a right on my life...Don't you think I should be having a chance to pursue my dreams? Don't you think I deserve better than that MCP, cheap Sameer Mittal? Why am I not getting my rights which I deserve? I want my family to be always happy but what about my dreams, my aspirations, my life? What about me, Jesus? What about...

And she choked. Tears were running down her cheeks uncontrollably. She sat on a bench and hid her face in her palms and began to cry miserably. She began to say one thing between her tears, "I want an answer, God. I want an answer...". After a while, suddenly she felt a hand on her head. She looked up and saw Father of that church standing beside her.

Father: (sitting beside Sanyu and looking at Jesus) He will give all your answers, my child.

Sanyu: (wiping her tears and asked like an innocent child) But when Father?

Father: (smiling at Sanyu) Whenever the right time comes...

Sanyu: But if till then everything gets finished?????

Father: He never lets his children suffer, my child.

Sanyu: I am leaving my dreams, Father...

Father: Why, you want to???

Sanyu: I don't have a choice. I'm getting engaged tomorrow... (and fresh tears began to roll down her cheeks)

Father: Don't you love him, my child???

Sanyu: I hate him...

Father: Then???

Sanyu: I can't give pain to my family, Father...

Father placed one hand on her head and smiled at her...

Father: My child, Jesus will never give pain to a person who loves her family so much, who is so pure in her heart, who is so selfless...

Sanyu: If He gives???

Father: Never, my child. He will definitely send someone for your help. Believe me. Maybe he is on his way to you...

Sanyu: I really don't know Father and I have no hopes. I am leaving my dreams, I am getting married to a person whom I hate, I really don't have any hopes from life now... (getting up) I must leave now Father or I'll be late...

Father: God bless you, my child.

And Sanyu began to leave, when suddenly Father called her from behind...

Father: One minute, my child...

Sanyu: Yes, Father????

Father: Come with me...

And Father started to walk. Sanyu silently followed him. Father came to a room adjacent to the prayer hall. The room was quite big. At one side of the room there was a big cross where innumerable tiny bells were tied and below that cross there were candles burning...

Father: (taking out a bell from a box in that room) Tie this at the cross, my child.

Sanyu: (taking the bell) Why?

Father: When you tie this bell at the cross, this bell gets connected to your heart and if your soulmate is near you, it will start to ring.

Sanyu: My soulmate is nowhere, Father. But if you want me to tie this, I will.

Saying this she went to that cross and tied the bell but the bell didn't ring. Sanyu came back to Father.

Sanyu: See I told you...

When suddenly Sanyu's driver came there...

Driver: Madamji, aap yahan ho... Car thik ho chuki hai ham ja sakte hai...

Sanyu: Ok, Father. I'll leave now...

Father: Yes, my child...

And Sanyu left. But no sooner did Sanyu leave, than the bell started ringing. Father was amazed.

Father: Oh, Jesus!!! Your ways can never be judged. I think it is not the right time when she should hear this ring, the ring of her heart. Maybe she still has a long tough way to go. Please keep your hands on her, Jesus...

But Father didn't know one thing... The moment Sanyukta left that room, a bike stopped outside the church from which got down a boy who loved Sanyu like anything in this world, who cared for her more than himself, who was ready to share all her pain, who was ready to stay with her through thick and thin...but the fact was he didn't know that he loved her...because God has his own ways...we all are His servants...And the boy was none other than...RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT...

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WITH LOTS OF LOVE

RAKHI😊😊😊

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Zyra thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Me first for the first tym!! YaYaYaYa
Awww!! This was so cute. Wish it was a bit long.
But, still I liked it.
And I love churches ❤️
Edited by Zyra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zyra

Me first for the first tym!! YaYaYaYa
Awww!! This was so cute. Wish it was a bit long.
But, still I liked it.
And I love churches ❤️

Thanks a lot, dear and I also like churches very much, specially the peaceful prayer hall...😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww...it was such a cute os...
i lovd it...
ending was apt!!!!
write more
loads of love,Shreyasi😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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[QUOTE=123456me]awww...it was such a cute os...
i lovd it...
ending was apt!!!!
write more
loads of love,Shreyasi😳
[/QUOTE]Thanks for such a lovely comment...😊
Edited by raksbasu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey there !!! Brilliant concept i mist say ..
So impressed !!!
God really does have his own way to look after his people..
However twisted twisted and unbelievable it may be !!!
Randhir is always there for sanyu.. her soul mate..
Even god knows it... only she is yet to know
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks yaar...but its a oneshot...I have no clue to continue it...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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[QUOTE=sumana.shesha]Beautiful OS :)[/QUOTE]
Thanks dear...😊
Edited by raksbasu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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[QUOTE=ChasingLiberty]Hey there !!! Brilliant concept i mist say ..
So impressed !!!
God really does have his own way to look after his people..
However twisted twisted and unbelievable it may be !!!
Randhir is always there for sanyu.. her soul mate..
Even god knows it... only she is yet to know
[/QUOTE]Thanks a lot...and i really hope in the show, Sanyu soon sees the way Randhir cares for her...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks a lot for reading it...😊.

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