OS Rumbling of Storm

hey all 😊 dis will be my frst OS here . based upon the new spoiler .
posting through phone .. ignore mistakes n clumsiness


Rumbling of Storm :-

He was left alone. His kids walked away so did his wife .all he could remember were her eyes which were hollow ...the same eyes which sparkle with life nd warmth are now cold n hollow. Wat did he do he ruined his life ..he ruined the dream of a happy family ..he ruined the relation of truth nd belief..he ruined the meaning of friendship..above all he ruined everthying wat made him a normal man all over again he knowingly broke her heart...the kindest of anything on this planet. Her eyes just looked at him neither questioning him nor complaining.like how would a dying person look at their parting soul with pain to stop it yet hav no power over it.A lone tear escaped his left eye nd there was no stop. He remembered how easily he broke her trust ..nd expected her to trust him nd forgiving that she is always took decisions thinking frm his POV. Invested all her trust in him so dat he will come back to her n share wat was eating him up day n night. He will clear everything wat has been killing her every nano second.
He walked aimlessly ..the weather wasnt kind either .weather of delhi somehow depicted her state.the rumbling of storm seemed nothing different than wat he witnessed hrs ago .which warned him destruction is ahead.he found himself standing in a bar .he laughed at his pity self ..his unconcious mind brought him to same place wer he found solace. Wer he drowned his sorrows after shagun left him crying nd pleading to give another chance to him nd their relation.
Wer he drowned all his emotions.wer he promised to not let any1 else make him puppet nd discard him at their convenience.wer he locked his heart nd threw away the key in the deepest of seas.frm wer she brought him out to show him wat he actually is missing out. How wonderful n pleasant his life is. She somehow managed to bring back those emotions in him. She found the key to unlock his heart .nd wat did he reward her with pain, agony,tears ,broken heart and shattered trust. He laughed at the irony how once he was at the receiving end of the pain .nd promised himself to never let any1 go through it was now at the giving end. He was highly intoxicated . He decided to head home nd thanks to his intoxicated state he was not in the position to drive ..one if the resort staff volunteered to drop him to his place
He blabbered everything but nothing in genereal to the driver. Who kept quiet heard his tale of broken heart ..it was nothing new to the driver everyday he met dat one person who poured their heart to him.
"Few hours back i had everything...nd now everything woooshhh"said raman to the silent driver
"I...i ruined everything "he poked his finger to his chest
"She didnt complain...once again she proved me wat a big heart she is cursed with"
"No...i dont deserve her...damn no person on this damned selfish earth deserve her...she is the feel of fresh air in this suffocating surrounding" he commented
"Hav u ever met her ??" He asked to the driver ..who nodded in negative
"Daant k saath toote dil ko bhi thik kar deti hai" he said pointing towards the right side of his chest
"Dil right main hota hai na ...madrasan dekhege toh lecture degi hai dentist par khudko doctor sabit karegi" he laughed at his own joke
" meri ruhi ki maa ban gayi mere gharwalon ki jaan ban gayi ..meri humsafar ..maine ? Maine uska bharosa aur vishwas...tod diya"
"Meri jhansi ki rani ...naah ab main meri nahi keh sakta na ..ruhi ki ishimaa . Ishita...meri ishita ...shhh shhh nahi batana usey main ab uske layak nahi ." He was dropped at his place
"Byeee yaad rakhna shhh nahi kehna wo srf ruhi ki ishimaa hai bass ...meriii nahiii" he slurred
And walked tipsyly towards their home he stopped right in front of her car
"M sorry ishitaaa...main kehna chahta tha but nhi keh paya " he animatedly apologised to her car
"Galathi meri hai srf meri...kyunki i 've taken u for granted...har waqt galathi karta hoon aur tum phir bhi mujhpar bharosa karti ho...kyunn ishitaa??" He asked
"Main andha hogaya tha bete k pyaar main...sahi galath jab mujhe khud samjh nhi ata to main adi ko kya sikhata tha" he sat in front of the car resting his left arm on the bonnet
"Tum jab bhi chup hoti ho mujhe khud se nafrat hone lagti hai ...samjh ata hai ki main kitna gira hua insaan hoon" he spoke to her car again
He once again drank frm the bottle in his other hand and threw it across the pavement breaking it into million tiny pieces
Guard came running towards the sound
"Saab aap...aaiye main apko apke ghar tak chod deta hoon" guard helped him to stand up
"Nahi nahi mujhe yahan rehna hai ...yahan mujhe apne akelepan ka ehsaas hota hai...meri galatiyon ka ehsaas hota hai"raman replied not wanting go towards his home
On the other side bhallas nd iyers both woke up. Hearing the bottle crashing
Ishita who was lost in thoughts walked to the window nd saw raman making a fool of himself.she closed her eyes stopping herself frm any kind of emotional erruption.
She ran towards door to be stopped by senior bhallas
"Mummyi papaji ...main raman ko lekar aati hoon...wo hosh main nhi hai " said ishita in a monotone deprived of any emotion
Bhallas understood the pain their daughter is going through cursed their fate for witnessing a pure soul being tattered.
Ishita walked towards raman nd asked him to come home
" nooo... m not going home..." he slurred
" there is no place for me in dat house ...m the person who supported n helped wrong...main galath hoon "he slurred again walking towards the outside of the society
Ishita pulled him back put his arm around her neck held him by waist taking all his weight
"Jab khud ko sambhal nahi paatey to peete kyon hai " she said gritting her teeth
"Main nhi peena chahta tha...i promised u " he said
"Aapne kaunse saare promise poore kiye hai jo iss choti se promise ko poora karne wale thay ...ya should i say jise tod chuke ho" she replied
"Ishita...adiii"he slurred
She didnt replied him just walked towards stairs
Wer romi came running to help his bhabhi
" bhabhi main help kr deta hoon"
She thanked heavens for sending romi at the right tym...she was in no position to take any of his reasons
Ishita nd romi brought him home . Anger was evident in mr bhallas eyes nd concern in toshiji's
"Romi issey room mein lejaa"said mr bhalla
Ishita went straight to kitchen taking a chilled botyle frm refrigerator she was startled wen she felt a hand on her shoulder she turned to face a crying toshi ..she just kept her hand over toshijis nd squeezed it and walked towards their
Raman was settled in his bed blabbering
She gave him a glass of chilled water nd inspected his bleeding wrist. She brought the first aid kit and nursed his wound
"Adi k liye sab kuch kiya...tumhe srf ada sach pata hai ..." he slurred
"To poora sach batao.." she said in a deadpan voice
"Shagun...accident.." and he drifted to sleep. She was once again pushed in the dungeons of darkness.

Next morning he woke upto the worst of hangover...his head bursting even with the slight of movement he pressed both his hand to his head nd sat up. He heard ishita talking to a lawyer about filing a case against shagun
"Ishita..." he said in a croaked voice
She walked out of room directing neelu didi to make lime water for him. Raman recalled ishita calling lawyer abt accident case and called pathak ensure dat nothing happens to shagun .
Which was heard by ishita who was at the door
"Ishita..."
She left room raman went behind her

contd ..below


~shab

"Look ishita ..i hav to save shagun..." he was interrupted by a slap right across his face. He was shocked .everything fell into silence even the little ananya who was crying stopped at once. Raman looked at person ..who was none other than toshiji ..tears streaming down her cheeks
"Beda garkh jaaye uss shagun ka ..jisne mere haste khelte parivar ko barbad kardiya" she cursed
"Lanat hai meri parvarish par jo main apne bete ko sahi bure ka farq nhi samjha paayi...bete ke pyar main itna andha hogaya k gunah kardiye tune gunah"
"Khotey tune uss vishwas ko tod diya jisne humari khushiyan samet rakhi thi..tune uss bharosa ko choor kardiya jo tereliye kisi bhi toofan par sakti thi...tune usss dil ko tod diya jisme tu basta tha"
"Jane kaunsi manhoos ghadi main maine shagun ko tere liye pasand kiya...wo iss ghar se jaakar bhi nhi gayi...har pal mera ghar tod rahi hai...meri beti k zindagi main panauti ban kar chipak gayi hai ...aur tu zimmewar hai iss sabka...meri beti k har ansoo ki hayy lagegi uss shagun aur tuj..." she was interrupted by ishita
"Mummyji.."
"Sharam kar raman sharam kar ...jis dil ko tune tabah kar diya wo ab bhi tera bhala sochti hai ...tujse zyada badnaseeb toh koi nhi hoga...main aajtak uss shagun aur ashok ko kosti thi mere bete ka ghar todne k liye ...bol tujhe kaise koson ..jab meri har baddua meri beti ko lagegi kyunki wo tujse judi hai" toshiji cried silently ...
"Maa.."said raman
Toshiji stepped away
"Main aaj thik thik bata deti hoon...meri beti jo bhi faisla karegi ..main uske saath khadi rahoongi"
This was witnessed by iyers too who had tears brimming their eyes
Raman felt stranger at his own home ..he felt isolated among house full of ppl
Felt the pain of being alone for the first tym in his life.


-----------The End-----------

i hopu u all liked it
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~shab 😊

Originally posted by: sweetshab

Next morning he woke upto the worst of hangover...his head bursting even with the slight of movement he pressed both his hand to his head nd sat up. He heard ishita talking to a lawyer about filing a case against shagun
"Ishita..." he said in a croaked voice
She walked out of room directing neelu didi to make lime water for him. Raman recalled ishita calling lawyer abt accident case and called pathak ensure dat nothing happens to shagun .
Which was heard by ishita who was at the door
"Ishita..."
She left room raman went behind her
Wer romi came running to help his bhabhi
" bhabhi main help kr deta hoon"
She thanked heavens for sending romi at the right tym...she was in no position to take any of his reasons
Ishita nd romi brought him home . Anger was evident in mr bhallas eyes nd concern in toshiji's
"Romi issey room mein lejaa"said mr bhalla
Ishita went straight to kitchen taking a chilled botyle frm refrigerator she was startled wen she felt a hand on her shoulder she turned to face a crying toshi ..she just kept her hand over toshijis nd squeezed it and walked towards their
Raman was settled in his bed blabbering
She gave him a glass of chilled water nd inspected his bleeding wrist. She brought the first aid kit and nursed his wound
"Adi k liye sab kuch kiya...tumhe srf ada sach pata hai ..." he slurred
"To poora sach batao.." she said in a deadpan voice
"Shagun...accident.." and he drifted to sleep. She was once again pushed in the dungeons of darkness.

Next morning he woke upto the worst of hangover...his head bursting even with the slight of movement he pressed both his hand to his head nd sat up. He heard ishita talking to a lawyer about filing a case against shagun
"Ishita..." he said in a croaked voice
She walked out of room directing neelu didi to make lime water for him. Raman recalled ishita calling lawyer abt accident case and called pathak ensure dat nothing happens to shagun .
Which was heard by ishita who was at the door
"Ishita..."
She left room raman went behind her



contd ..below
~shab

this ws PERFECT PERFECT...i wanna see same same in show too..!!

"he animatedly apologised to her car"

Omg its such an awesome os when i was reading it i felt like i am reading written update of actual episode not for once i felt its os great job buddy

loved the part about druken Raman talking to ishita;s car! That can be quite expected from Raman😆 I wish they have someting similar elements in the episode to lighten up the mood

loved it specially 2nd part.Toshiji was at her best.Tussi cha gaye toshiji.""Khotey tune uss vishwas ko tod diya jisne humari khushiyan samet rakhi thi..tune uss bharosa ko choor kardiya jo tereliye kisi bhi toofan par sakti thi...tune usss dil ko tod diya jisme tu basta tha"I can't say how much I loved this dailogue.muaah!

beautiful os.it seems so real.hp to see smthing like this in the show too.raman is likely to do all this.