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This is my first OS so feedback please! I speak only fluent English and therefore if someone wishes to post an Urdu/Punjabi translation in the comments then please do.
Raman stops the car outside the resort and Ruhi looks out the window excitedly.
Ruhi: Wow papa! Can we go to the swings first!
Adi: Ruhi, shut up! It's nothing special. It is probably the cheapest resort out there. I mean your papa booked it.
Raman thinks about Ishita's words
"Adi never tried to be friends with her at school. He never looks at her lovingly, so why now?"
Raman stutters : Adi beta, you know, your papa looked long and far for 5 star resort.
Raman tries to impress him by telling him about all the things to do and famous actors who performed.
Adi: That's nothing! Humul kucha is a good resort.
Shagun stares at Adi as Ramans heart drops. Ruhi sees Raman in the mirror and says
Ruhi: Papa. I love it! We will have lots of fun!
Shagun looks at Ruhi and gets teary-eyed. Shagun smiles at Ruhi and pays no attention to Adi.
Shagun: my Ruhi will have the best time! Won't she!
Ruhi remembers Ishita's words "Please be a good girl for me and show your manners for Ishi-ma". She agrees. Raman looks at Shagun.
Raman: Ishit- (Raman thinks about seeing Ishita sleeping) I mean sh-shagun. You go check in with Adi and Ruhi. I'll get the bags.
Shagun gets out the car and goes to get Ruhi first. She walks with Ruhi, Adi waits in the car for Shagun to get him. She holds her hand to the door and signals Adi to come. Raman is closes the boot and begins to lug the bags. He sees Adi and goes to get him out. Adi sees and raises his hand to signal him not to come. Adi gets out and walks past Raman. Raman thinks about what his mum told him.
"Raman! How could you do this to Ishita? She convinced Ruhi to go and was praising you. But you Raman. You don't deserve this praise! You are as good as Romi. You scold him but no more Raman. You aren't allowed to say one thing against your brother until you fix your act. (She leaves crying)"
Ruhi runs out and hugs him. They look at each other lovingly.
Ruhi: are you missing Ishi-ma too?
Raman: Haa Ruhi. (He thinks to himself: more than you) and he frowns. They walk inside to see Adi talking to Shagun. All Raman hears is Adi saying
Adi: You don't think he knows, do you?
Shagun: No! And he won't mera beta, that's my promise.
They see Raman and abruptly stop talking. He comes and forcefully puts the door key in Shaguns hand. He thinks:
"Ishita was very right. There is something going on. I must get to the bottom of this matter. I knew Shagun wasn't telling me the full truth. But how do I protect Adi? How do I protect Ruhi? How do I protect Ishita? As well as reaching and exposing the truth. You are wrong Ishita, I am not Ravan Kumar Bhalla. I am Ravan Kumar Kala. Please Ishita leave me, you deserve better. I promise you one thing. I will set you and Ruhi free from my menace. Don't worry Ishita, let me expose the culprit, then tum jaho. I love you.
Shagun screams.
Precap: Raman carries Shagun and remembers how hurt Ishita was the time before. He drops her at the door. Ishita calls Raman and assures herself that if he doesn't answer her next 3 calls, she will pack.
Raman runs inside carrying Ruhi and Adi runs to him.
Adi: My mum has electrocuted herself! Please save my mum now please!
Raman is once again lost in Adis demands and tells Adi to take Ruhi straight to the room. He nods and tugs Ruhis arm and pulls her along. Raman walks over to Shagun and picks her up. Her arm is burnt a bit. He carries her up the stairs and Shagun opens her eyes when he is not looking. She smiles and closes them again. Raman sees Ishita at the top of the stairs. He drops Shagun and she tumbles down a few stairs, she screams and also Ishita screams. He doesn't look at Shagun and runs up stair shouting Ishita! He gets to her and sees her fine, he places his hand on her and he sees it was his imagination. He goes down to Shagun but she is not there. He his shocked. He goes to the room and Adi and Ruhi aren't there. He cries and yells for Ishitas help.
Adi is telling Ruhi he knows a quick way to the room and leads her to an empty room he locks her in and shuts the light. He laughs and Ruhi screams and cried very hard.
Adi: Oh sorry! I didn't see you in the room.
He pretends the door is broke and says he will get Raman. He sees Shagun walking alone along the hall and she sees him but runs away crying. He thinks Raman is behind it and runs after her. They meet in the room and Adi comforts her mum as he explains what happened. Ruhi is very scared and becomes unconscious due to the scare. Raman gets to the room and says sorry Shagun I fell down the stairs after I saw a man robbing a young woman. He lies and looks at Adi who is fuming.
Raman: where is Ruhi?
Adi: why did you do that to my mum?
Raman: Adi, where is Ruhi?
Adi: did you think I wouldn't find out?
Raman: Adi, WHERE is RUHI!!!
Adi: Tum jaho, go try and find her. I don't know. She ran off herself.
Raman storms out and shouts for Ruhi. He drops his key beside the door of the empty room and when bending down to pick it up sees a fire in the room. Ruhi sees a fire a screams:
Ruhi: ISHI-MA, help!! Mama help!! ISHI-MA SAVE ME!! Fire!
Raman hears her and barges the door down. He grabs Ruhi and sits her down with a picture of Ishita and tells her to keep looking at it. Raman uses the fire extinguisher and the employee comes. The room is wrecked. Raman scolds him for not having working fire alarms and slaps him. He shouts at him about Ruhi being in danger and Ruhi shows Raman a picture of Ishita. Raman smiles seeing her and copies her relaxing nature. They go to the room where Adi is talking to Shagun. Raman and Ruhi talk at the other side and Ruhi asks.
Ruhi: Papa, why do you have Ishi-ma photo on your cell?
Raman: she was looking very pretty that day so secretly I took a picture of her in blue dress.
Ruhi: secretly? Why secretly?
Raman: becau- (he thinks) I don't know. I didn't have the courage to admit how pretty she was looking.
Ruhi laughs: cute papa! Ishi-ma will be very happy to see this. Between you and me papa, please don't get angry. I accidentally asked ishi-ma about babies because of the new one coming and she didn't get angry that I forgot. She put on a brave face and we hugged together.
Ruhi and Raman hug. Shagun sees them and tries to copy with Adi but he pulls away to check his phone. Shagun looks upset.
Ishita throws her phone. She talks to herself:
Enough Ishita. You have tolerated this man too much. Now you must go. Let him be with Shagun. I must go. But Ruhi. I can't live without her it is not possible. I must fight for her. When Raman comes and fight for her case when I divorce him. I will use the evidence that he kept the accident culprit a secret and is too attached to Adi so he should be with him. Then Ruhi can give her opinion and she can stay with whoever she wants. I won't force her. Mrs Bhalla sees this and goes to her room.
Precap: Mrs Bhalla swallows harmful medication with alcohol and Ishita sees her dead with the bottle of alcohol and medication, she faints.
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