FF Winning Her Back 19 July COMPLETED

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Hi, I am new to this forum, and I haven't written fan fiction before, but this track is so difficult to watch, I thought I would amuse myself by imagining how things might turn out. So, this scene is set one month after the resolution of this whole amma accident/Adi-Shagun fiasco. I have never been to India and my hindi is not very good, so here's hoping you can overlook the bloopers and enjoy anyway. Let me know if you want me to continue. Love YHM.

Chapter Index
Scene 1 - pg 1
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Scenes 2& 3 - pg 2
Scenes 4 & 5 - pg 3
Scene 6 - pg 4
Scenes 7, 8 & 9- pg 5
Scenes 10,11 &12 - pg 8
Scene 13 & 14 - pg 9
Scenes 15 & 16 - pg 11
Scene 17 - pg 12
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4084113/ff-winning-her-back-19-july-completed?pn=12
Scene 18- pg 14
Scene 19. - pg 16
Scene 20 - pg 18
Scene 21- pg 20
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4084113/ff-winning-her-back-19-july-completed?pn=20
Scene 22 - pg 21
Scene 23- pg 24
Scenes 24 & 25 - pg 25
Scene 26 & 27 - pg 28
Scene 28 & 29 -pg 29
Scene 30 - pg 30

Scene one - Raman's Office

Finally, the meeting was over. Raman dropped the files on his table and sat down, dropping his head into his hands as he did so. He was exhausted, and it was almost nine pm, but he knew that he had to carry on. Had to find more meaningless meetings to attend, push everyone into a frenzy with his unrealistic demands, anything, everything, just to avoid going home. Because if he went home, he Would be faced again with the distance between Ishita and himself, with how she treated him politely like a stranger. And if he went home, he would have to see the hurt in her eyes again ... No, it was better, he just stayed here.

It had been one month now. One month since the ugly truth behind amma's accident had been revealed. One month since Ishita had told him that she understood why he had done what he had, as a father, but that she could not trust him any more. That she would stay on as Ruhi's mum, but that she would not have any expectations from him, ever again. "Aap ne mera bharosa tod diya hai Raman, aur bharosa ek baar tut jaaye, tho phir jud nahi sakta" Trust once broken can never be rebuilt. Her words resonated in his ears over and over. Since then they had been living in his room as strangers. He watched as she slept each night on the sofa, her face turned away from him. She no longer fought with him over his late night TV, no longer argued with him over silly little things. He missed their Nok jhok so much, ached to hear her say "Raavan Kumar" just once more. " Ishita Ishita Ishita" his heart screamed out. " Please forgive me Ishita"

"Bhai, Kya hua bhabi ko?" Mihir had come into the room and was kneeling next to him, looking up at him in concern. He hadn't realised that he had shouted her name out loud, hadn't realised that the tears that he cried inside were flowing down his cheeks. Mihir, who had stood by him, even while making his displeasure known in no uncertain terms. "Nothing, Mihir" he said " Woh ... Bas... Mihir, I am breaking inside, I don't know what to do. I need Ishita. I need her forgiveness." " But why Bhai" Mihir knew this was his chance to get Raman to come to terms with his feelings for Ishita. " Bhabhi is doing what she was supposed to, isn't she? She is taking care of Ruhi, giving her so much love. So why does it matter how she is with you. You never wanted to marry her anyway, did you?" " Dammit, Mihir, all that has changed and you know it. Before all this happened, Ishita and I had become friends. I realised her goodness. I enjoyed her company. Amma's accident brought us closer. But then Adi ... And now... I am lost without her. I need her. God dammit, I love her. I love her Mihir." " To phir mujhe nahi, Bhabhi ko batao" Mihir responded. " Bhai, you have finally realised and accepted what the rest of us could sense ages ago. You love Ishita Bhabhi and she loves you. " Yes" he continued firmly, as Raman tried to interrupt. " She loves you, why else was she so hurt at your behaviour. But you need to win her back Bhai. You have devastated her by what you did, but you need to try to make things right. Hiding in the office won't do it, you have to face her, and you have to woo her back. And we will help you, Mihika and I will help. " Mihika won't even talk to me" said Raman wryly. " woh to Jhansi ki Rani take two hai" " Well, she will now" said Mihir. " because she wants her Akka to be happy, and Bhabhi cant be happy without you. So Bhai, what say? Kya aap Bhabhi ka dil phir se jet sakte ho?

Raman dried his tears and stood up. " Yes" he said firmly. " Bahut ho Gaya. No more rona dhona. Ab mein apni JKR ko apna bana ke rahunga. Ishita, I am coming"

Precap
Ishita was furious, trapped inside the car as Raman sped away ignoring her entreaties to let her out. " Raman, I don't know what you think you are doing, but this is not done. Telling me we had to go to Ruhi's school and now driving out into the countryside. I have clients waiting for me. Take me back now. Raman!!!!"

So, what do you think. Should I continue? I can update later today if you want to continue reading.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woowowww.Well written dear😊.precap sounds very exciting😃😃..pls pls pls continue dear😊😊
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Amazing Start
Fabulous OS
Please continue soon
And please pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its really good. loving it..especailly the wooing her back track.. plz continue and PM me if you can..there are so many post around and I kinda feel lost and dont want to loose out on reading further.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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And BTW. welcome to the YHM forum.šŸ¤— I see that this is your first post and must say a great start!šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Originally posted by: Angel13

Amazing Start
Fabulous OS
Please continue soon
And please pm me


Thank you😊 This is the first forum I have joined, and I am still trying to figure out how it works. Will try and pm, if I can figure out how šŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: Jyoe

And BTW. welcome to the YHM forum.šŸ¤— I see that this is your first post and must say a great start!šŸ‘šŸ¼


Thank you 😊 Am trying to figure out how to post and pm etc, but will attempt to pm. Am on sick leave and nothing to do, so will update soon 😃
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omg fab start..plz continue soon n pm me too plz
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Thank you to everyone who appreciated my efforts 😊 . Here are scenes 2 to 5. I have never been to India, so I am probably going to get seasons and timings and locations all wrong, but enjoy!!!!

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Bhalla residence - 2 days later

The last two days had been a sweet torment for Raman. Since breaking down in front of Mihir and finally acknowledging his love for Ishita, he had been desperate to run to her and make her understand, and to make her see what she meant to him. Mihir however, had insisted that Raman exercise some caution and restraint. "No Bhai" he had said. " I will tell you what to do and when. You have made enough of a mess of things already." And Raman Kumar Bhalla, CEO of the year, opiniated, Mr Know it All, had been so scared of messing things up further that he had meekly agreed. Although all he wanted to do was to rush home and to fall at the feet of his Ishita, to take her into his arms, to crush her to his chest, to hold her and never let her go, he knew he would have to wait for the right opportunity. He could not get it wrong again - his sanity and happiness depended on it.

Now, as he awoke on a cool Friday morning, he noticed that Ishita's bedding had already been neatly folded up and put away, and that the smell of her perfume lingered in the air. So she was up and ready. He remembered with a smile how she had woken him up before his health check up by threatening to take out his blood. "Meri Jhansi ki Rani" he whispered. " mera khoon pee kar rahegi"

Meanwhile, Ishita was sitting at the dining table with Ruhi, trying to coax her into finishing her breakfast. " Ru, beta, kha lo na" she smiled at her daughter. "Nahi Ishima. Mujhe yeh nahi khana" Ruhi pouted back prettily. " oh Ruhi, ye nahi, woh nahi, sometimes, you are so like your papa..." Her voice trailed off.

The past month had been just as difficult for Ishita as for Raman. She had been devastated and broken by his betrayal- even though he had cried and pleaded with her to forgive him, the disclosure of his duplicity had scattered the buds of love that had begun to bloom in her heart. " Raman Raman" she chided him under her breath. " I thought I knew you, I thought you knew me - so how did it all go so wrong" For the past month, they had lived as strangers under one roof. Raman had tried to explain to her when the truth first came out, but she had shut herself off from him to protect herself. Now, she could see the unhappiness in his face, hear the regret in his voice, but her hurt was too deep, her sorrow too profound for her to forgive him too readily. As the days went on, and her anger softened, he had thrown himself into his work, and the distance between them remained unabridged. Now, though, she found the rift to be intolerable. " Raman, Raman" she thought. " Didn't I mean anything to you? "

Her reverie was disturbed by a soft hand clutching at hers. " Sorry, Ishima, don't be sad, dekho mein ne pura breakfast kar liya.ab chalo, mujhe school par drop karo aur aap clinic jao". " Haan, thank you beta, Bahut saare appointments hai" Ishita said wrapping her little daughter in her arms. Saying their goodbyes, they left the house.

Ten minutes later, Raman walked into the kitchen. He had shaved and was wearing a crisp white shirt with a black suit. " Ao putar, Nashta kar lo" Toshiji said to him. Then looking at the bag in his hands, she asked " kahin ja rahe ho putar?" Raman started to speak but was interrupted by Mihika and Mihir walking in the door. Mihika walked straight up to Raman and handed a carry bag to him. " yeh lo Jiju, Akka ke liye woh saaman. Lekin I am warning you Jiju, agar aap ne mere Akka ko phir se rulaya, mujhse bura koi nahi hoga"

"Mihika Mihika" Mihir interrupted. Nothing will go wrong. Mein ne Bhai ko planning mein help kiya hai. Bhai sab sambhal lega."

" Tumne help kiya. That's what worries me" Mihika muttered.

Raman placed his hands on Mihika's shoulders and looked at her. " Don't worry Mihika" he said forcefully. " Aaj mein sub Kuch theek kardoonga. Aur tum meri Jhaansi ki Rani ka phikr mat karo. Aaj ke baad woh mujhpe raj karegi, jaise tu Mihir pe karti hai.

" Oye Raman" Toshiji interrupted. " Yeh Kya ho raha hai.Kahan ja rahe ho?" " Ma, mujhe Ishita ke dil mein apne liye phir bharosa aur pyar laana hai. but I can't do it here, na waqt milta hai na mauka. So I am taking her away for the weekend, and I will make her see how much she means to me..." Raman told her.

" Raman putar, agar tum ne phir meri bahu ko rulaya, to..." " Don't worry, Ma, aisa Kuch nahi hoga. Aur Ma, aap meri Ma hai ya Ishita ki. Meri to koi fikr hi nahi. Actually na, aaj to woh mujhe rulayegi"

And saying that, he walked out with Mihir. Toshiji looked on with a smile. Her Raman putar was back. For the past month, she had seen both his and Ishita's anguish and wept silently, but Raman had been strangely hesitant and quiet. Now though, her wisecracking putar was back and she knew everything was going to be alright.

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Edited by Veeann - 10 years ago
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Scene 3
Raman's office- some hours later

" yeh lo Bhai, farmhouse ke keys" Mihir said, handing some keys over to Raman. " Sab preparations ho gayi hai. Everything you asked for is in the house, aur saare dishes bhi ajayenge"

"Thank you Mihir" Raman was surprised to find his hands shake as he took the keys from Mihir. "Nervous ho Bhai?" Mihir asked mischievously. "Don't worry, bas aap Bhabhi ko honestly aur sincerely apne dil ka baat baat dijiye - she is very understanding. Woh ab aap ko maaf kar hi degi. Aur Bhai, yeh shave wagera kar ke Bahut handsome lag rahe ho aap.

Raman laughed and heading to the door retorted " Tujhe lagne se Kya fayda? Matangi ko lagoonga ya nahi?"


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Edited by Veeann - 10 years ago

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