ROSID FF:LOVE AFTER MARRIAGE completed

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recently i wrote two OS on ROSID.Now iam trying to write a story ...hope u will like it...iam little tensed ,i will try my best..please give ur suggestions...today iam just introducing characters...
Bharadwaj family

Nirmala Bharadwaj

Head of the family. Everyone calls her Mataji. She has two sons, rajendra Bharadwaj and Surendra Bharadwaj.She hate love marriages and will never accept the people who disrespect elders.She loves her grand sons and daughter very much.

rajendra Bharadwaj:

Mataji's elder son. He is an industrialist. His wife is Sujatha Bharadwaj.These couple has four sons,satyendra,shailendra,siddhant and prem.Sujatha is very calm and respects every decision of mataji and her husband .

Surendra Bharadwaj

Mataji's younger son. He helps his brother rajendra in business. His wife is Karuna Bharadwaj.These couple has one son ,sankalp and one daughter,jhanvi.Karuna is somewhat rude in her behaviour and pretends before every one that she obey every decision of mataji but in realty she wont.

Siddhant Bharadwaj:

He is third son of rajendra and sujatha.He is working for a software company in US.He is cool person and loves his brother prem very much.He is romantic guy and love to tease girls. But he is confident about his life partner.He is interested in love marriage. The most important quality is "He is angry young man".

Prem Bharadwaj:

He is Siddhant younger brother. He is very nice person. He is a businessman and loves his brother siddhant very much. He is interested in arranged marriage. He too have some expectations regarding his life partner.

Dwivedi family:

Jamanlal Dwivedi:

He is head of Dwivedi family. His wife is Gauri Dwivedi. These couple has two daugthers,simar and roli. He supports his daughters in every aspect. His nature is friendly.

Simar Dwivedi:

She is the elder daughter of Jamanlal Divedi. She is loving and caring person. She loves her sister .Dancing is her passion. She shares everything with her sister.She is interested in arranged marriage.

Roli Dwivedi:

She is a sweet bubbly girl. She is the younger sister of Simar. She loves Simar so much .She is pursuing her B.tech final year .She loves to tease boys. She too loves dancing.She is intelligent and topper of the college.She believes in love marriage.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good start Dear👏. All the best 👍🏼
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My dear you on a right track can't wait to read more
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Yes its a good start
All the best!!!!!
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Thats too interesting both like love marriage but going to be together in an arrange marriage it sounds fab plz update soon...
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Originally posted by: magicalrosid

Thats too interesting both like love marriage but going to be together in an arrange marriage it sounds fab plz update soon...

iam planning some thing different...let us see
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Characters sketch seem well defined... good start...thank you
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wow great can't wait for post plz update soon
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i will update today small part
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Entry of Siddhanth:

One fine morning everyone in bharadwaj family are busy with their works.A car entered into the compound of bharadwaj house.A man stepped out of car ,everyone felt happy by seeing him because he came to their house after two years .Sujatha got tears in her eyes and called him "SIDDHANTH".Sid forwarded his hands..not towards Sujatha but towards a woman who is sitting in the car.

Yes,Siddhanth stepped in to bharadwaj house along with his wife...

Everyone in the family shocked to see him married that too without their knowledge.Rajendra and Sujatha are confused..Prem even never expected this from siddhanth because sid and prem share everything.But siddhanth never told him that he is in love with some one..Mataji as she hates love marriage and people who disobey elders slaps siddhanth and asks him to go away from the house and tell him never come back again to their life.Siddhanth too argued with Mataji...

All of sudden Mataji shouted loudly and got up ...all the family members went to her and asked what happened? She told them BAD DREAM has come ...she immediately told prem to call siddhanth and tell him to come back from US without asking any queries..

But prem knows siddhanth wont come easily from there.So prem thought to play a trick..He immediately called siddhanth and told him that Mataji got heart attack,she wants to see siddhanth..

By listening these words from Prem ,siddhanth immediately packed his bag and returned to India within two days..When he entered the house ,he found everything is normal and to his surprise Mataji herself welcomed him..Siddhanth did not understand anything as he is confused.

Mataji:siddhanth how r u?

Sid: iam fine Mataji.But how is your health?

Mataji: siddhanth what happened to me? Iam perfectly alright.

Sid: what?

During their conversation everyone in the family came downstairs and felt very happy with his arrival.But siddhanth is still in confusion.

Prem: hello hero?where are u lost?please come back to our house.

Sid: Prem u told me Mataji health is not fine na?but...

Prem:oh ! now I understood why u r in confusion..actually I just played a prank on you..bcz iam missing u here and u r enjoying ur life there in US..if I ask u to come without any reason u will surely reject to come..so...

Sid: So...u played a prank?right?

Both of them ran like a tom and jerry...finally came to sit in the sofa as they are tired..

Sid: ok then ,I will stay here for 1 week and will go to US again..otherwise I may get problem in my job.

Mataji: siddhanth,u don't have any need to go back..U too go to our office and help prem in expanding business...

Sid: but mataji...

Prem: siddhanth this time u cannot change mataji's decision..

Sid: ok then...(in confusion)

Sid went to his room to take rest...

After completion of dinner,both sid and prem went upstairs and started their normal conversation

Prem:Sorry ,siddhanth

Sid: sorry?for what prem?

Prem:For lying about mataji health...so might have tensed so much because of it..but what can I do?i have to do it because u wont come here with simple reasons right?

Sid:prem !need not tell sorry about it..but iam still in confusion.Please tell me what such happened ?

Prem: nothing happened.Mataji is worried about your marriage...

Sid:what?about my marriage...?

Prem:yes,Mataji got dream that u married some girl and came to our house..U know about her she hate love marriage..so she thought not to give u any chance to do such thing and told me to call u..

Sid: so u did it ...right?

Prem: what can I do ?it is order of Mataji

Sid:Prem,iam interested in love marriage

Prem:what?are u kidding?

Sid:no iam not kidding.It is the matter of my life .why I will?

Prem:Are u in love?

Sid: no..not yet..but surely I will find my love..

Prem:what about mataji decision?

Sid: don't know..what happens...let us see..nothing has happened yet right?

Both of them laughed and went to their rooms after the conversation...

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