AsYa's (KaBhi) View On SaHil OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It Was The 1st Day Of Ramadan, Havy Rains Were Washing The Streets As Well As The Evil Atmospheare Of Bhoopal,

In Bhoopal It Was Not Any Usual or Ordinary Day, There Was Something Extra_Ordinary n Special About The Day, No Not Only Becoz Of Ramadan, But Also Becoz Of Those Things Which Were Going To Take Place That Day,

SANAM Was Walking Towards The Dargah For Morning Prayers With Her Only Friend REHAAN and They Were Completely Unknown About The Fact That Someone Was Following Them,

Yes, It Was None Other Then The Younger Nawab Of Bhoopal Mr. AAHIL Raza Ibrahim,

Aahil Had No Idea Why He Was Following Them On The Early Morning When He Was Supposed To Sleep, He Did Not Know Why His Eyes Always Choose To Stay In Touch With Sanam, Why His Heart Filled With Pain Whenever He Saw Sanam n Rehaan Together, Why He Wanted Sanam To Understands Those Unspoken Weird Feelings Of His Which Aahil Himself Failed To Understand. All He Knew Was "SANAM" Who Mattered Alot To Him! From When? And Why? He Was Clueless About It.

After Sometime The Confused Soul Aahil Found Himself Infront Of A Dargah!

All Of A Sudden Sanam Felt An Unknown Attachment and Presence Of Someone As She Steped Into The Dargah!

Sanam Turned Arround But Her Eyes Could Not Catch Anyone Special, There All Peoples Were Strangers To Her But There Was Something About That Place Which Made Her Very Comfortable and Gave Her Such A Feel As If She Belongs From There,

Covering Their Head n Eyes Sanam n Rehaan Took Their Respective Sits and Raised Their Hands For Prayer,

Aahil Was Still Standing Outside The Dargah When All Of A Sudden He Saw A Young Lady Infront Of Him Who Was From Top To Button Covered In Burkha Only Her Beautiful Eyes Were Visible To Him And Those Eyes Reminded Him Of Sanam's Eyes,

"Sanam" > Aahil Spoke

"Allah Miyaan! Whats Wrong With You?" > The Lady Asked

Not Only Eyes Even Her Voice Was Also Same As Sanam's... Aahil Realized,

"Aarz Kia Hai, Har Jagah, Har Wakt, Har Kisime Tumhe Sanam Dikhti Hai, Har Din Sanam Se Suru Hokar Har Raat Sanam Pe Khatam Hoti Hai, Sanam Se Duri Tumhe Gawara Nehi, Koi Aur Sanam K Kareeb Tumhe Qubool Nehi, Kahi Tumhe Sanam Se Mohabbat Tho Nehi?" > ZOYA Asked In Her Sayarana Aandaaz n Naughty Tune!

Aahil Was Shocked. He Closed His Eyes All His Moments Sharing With Sanam Started Flashing In His Mind, All His Questions n Confussions Started Coming To An End, He Opened His Eyes To Look At The Lady BUT Where Was She? No One Was There, ZOYA WAS NOT THERE.

In Dargah...

Sanam Felt A Hand On Her Head But No One Was There When She Opened Her Eyes, She Closed Them Again n Started Praying...,

"Yeh Wohi Jagah Hai, Jahaan Pehli Baar Main Apke Ammi Se Mila Tha Sanam, Aur Ushi Pal Se Meri Zindegi Badal Geya Tha" > ASAD Told Sanam Who Could Not Hear His Voice,

Asad Had Tears In His Eyes n Smile In His Lips,

"Aap Ki Suraat Bilkul Apki Ammi Ki Tarha..."

"Aur Seerat Apke Abbu Ki Tarha!"

ZOYA Choose To Complete ASAD's Sentence, Why Not? Afterall Zoya Always Completes Asad In Every Sense!

Asad Smiled At Zoya,

"Humari Sanam" > Both Asad Zoya Said Together,

"Jo Bohat Jald Aahil Ki Hogi" > Zoya Said,

Asad's Smile Faded, "Apko Lagta Hai Aahil Humare Sanam K Liye Thik Hogi?" > The Protective Father Asad Asked Zoya!

"Pyaar Mein Kuch Thik Yeah Galat Nehi Hota Mr. Khan, Har Kaide Har Kanun Har Bandish Se Upar Hota Hai Mohabbat, Mana Aahil Bohat Aalag Hai, Ushka Parvaarish Galat Hai, Per Aahil Pyaar Karta Hai Sanam Se, Bharosa Rakhiye Sanam K Parvaarish Pe, Aur Allah Miyaan K Sabse Paak aur Khubsurat Taufe MOHABBAT Pe" > Zoya Answered,

"Aur TANVEER?" > Asad Asked

Zoya Looked At REHAAN, n Said, < "Tanveer Kamjor Hai Mr. Khan, Woh Dekhiye Woh Hai Tanveer Ki Kamjori"

Asad Also Looked At Rehaan, Who Was Praying For Sanam!

"Humare Samne Jo Walad Tanveer Ki Takaat Thi, Woh Rehaan Aahil_Sanam K Samne Tanveer Ki Kamjori Hai"

"Tanveer Ki Haatiyaar Rehaan Banega Aahil_Sanam Ki Dhaal"

ZOYA Announced, ASAD Smiled,

AAHIL Entered In The Dargah,

Aahil Sat Beside Rehaan Opposite Sanam Just Like Asad Ayaan Were Sitting Sitting Opposite Zoya 24 Years Back!

ASAD ZOYA Smiled At The View, & Said,

"QUBOOL HAI"

It Was Not The End...But A New Beggining For Aahil Sanam With The Blessings Of Asad Zoya,

Edited : Suddenly Zoya's Smile Turned Into Worried Expressions, Which Did Not Go Unnotice By Asad, He Placed His Hand On Zoya's Shoulder,

"Sanam Ki Tarha WOH Bhi Aayegi Na Inha?" > Zoya Asked,

"Han!" > Asad Answered,

A Drop Of Tear Touched The Floor Of Dargah From Zoya's Eyes, A Mother's Eyes, As She Remembered Her Another Daughter "SAHER"

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[Asad & Zoya > Karan Singh Grover & Surbhi Jyoti]
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mine!

How creative! Asad-Zoya! on Sanam Aahil! And sweetheart Rehan!


All in one.


Thank you for this!!


Wonderful concept!

:)
Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful OS...
i am not watching the QH 2.. anymore...

but loved ur OS...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Guys, 😳

Btw I Edited The OS n Added Saher Also!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arpita, this was amazing. Loved loved loved it so much 🤗
It was quit emotional specially when Zoya mentions Seher.


Her interaction with Aahil was so hilarious 😆


I could picturize every second that you wrote. It was damn good.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow...just wow!!What an amazing OS this is Arpita, one of the best I have read in the recent times. Simple yet so touching. Kudos to you 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww.This was such a sweet and simple concept :)
Awesome idea it was to have Asad and Zoya there with Sanam-Aahil in the dargah. Such a pure and divine place to meet - god's place :)
Although I have never watched AsYa's time. Still i could picturise every single thing they said.
So amazing. And the best part when SaHil were on the dargah praying, sitting next to each other. So serene! ❤️
Loved it soo much! :)
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Like Buttons Are Not Working So Could Not Press Like To Every Comments But Thanks Guys I Am Glad All Of You Liked It.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesomely written arpi
luved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is lovely!!!😃 lovvvee it! plzzz do write more on SaHil!

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