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Posted: 18 years ago
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after knowing the truth

😲dev ko KA ka sachhai patachal jata hai.paowa use sab bata deta hai ke NT ji ki maut kajjal ke waja se nahi balki karan ke waja se hua hai kyunki usne sirio main marble rakh diya tha.then dev understand his fault.and goes kajjals home to say her sorry. but kajjals dad tell him that kajjal usdin ke baat abtak ghar nahi lauti.and the entire blame put on dev. now dev started to find her.dev use bahaut dhoonta hai par kajjal nahi milti.dev jab ekdom se toot jata haai then sudden one day he finds kajjal. but kajjal could not identify dev 🥺coz she has lost her memory.the new character who save kajjal he was a docter.usne kajjal ki yaadas{memory}lotane ki bahaut kosish ki but he felt.dev tell him that she is his mangitar.docter dev se kahete hai ke purani kisi hatsa ya koi ahem{important}baat se kajjal ki memory wapas aa sakti hai.

sorry friends i have to go now.but i will back soon to complete the story..........😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow nice fanfic buddy

will be waiting for the next part for sure

Love u sowmya 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh very good beginnig 👏 👏 👏 continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi friends i am back

so kaha the hum ha now dev tells her everything releted to her past but she could not remember anything.then dev think that kajjal ko purani koi hatse se guzar na parega jisse use sayet use sab yaad aa jaye. dev NT mom ke maut ki hatsa kajjal ki samne phirse daurahi gaya. kajjal woh hatsa dekhne ki baat chillane lagti hai plz NT mom ko koi bachao koi unhe bachao and behose ho jati hai. dev kajjal ko apni baho main uthake room tak le jata hai.{so cute na} kajjal hos main aati hai ab use sab yaad aa gayi hai. kajjal aapni ghar jane ki zeed karti hai dev use chor aata hai.after that kuch din wohi roothne mana ne ko chali jati hai atlast kajjal man jatihai par woh kahati hai ke unke sadi se pahele woh KA ko saja dilwana chahati hai NT mom khun ki bhi and dev ko marne ki sajis ke liye bhi.the they both start to findout the sabuts. they finds some important sabut against KA.nd they handover it to the police.police arrest KA.afterthis panna chchi goes to kajjal's father.and tell him that bhaisab bahaut muskil ke baat ab dev aur kajjal ka rishta ek naya more pe aaya hai jaha se woh dono ek nai jindegi ki suruat kar sakti hai.kajjal's father also consider that and call the pandit ji to fix thier marraid day. 👏

the next scene DK going to a long drive.dev stop the car on a lonely place. and tell kajjal that akhir woh din aahi gaya kajjal jab hum ek ho jayenge.kajjal tell him ha dev humne bahaut muskil dekha hai. main tumse bahautdin dur rahi hu ab kavi dev mujhe chor kar mat jana dev warna main mar jaungi.dev stops her and tell herthat fir kavi aisi baat mat karna. main tumhe kavi nahi chorunga. and goes to kiss her but kajjal dev ko dakka dekar gari se nikal jati hai.dev follow her at that time rain is strarted.. and they dance background music is humtum title trak.now dev kiss to kajjals forehead after her chick.and now try to kiss her red lip but kajjal move from there.then dev understand and kajjal ko apni baho main utha ke car ke andar le jata hai and they both leave that place.

sorry friends i have leave now.but don't warry i will come back soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very interesting track, please continue soon. 😊
Edited by autumnleaf - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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then DK return home and kajjal's dad informed them that teen din ke baad kajjal aur dv ki sadi hai.ye khabar sunke kajjal aur dev bahaut khush ho jate hai.atlast woh din aa hi gayi jab woh dono ek ho jayenge.sadi ke din kajjal looking so nice.wearing a red colour jora looking so beautiful.and dev wearing a broun colour sherwani.dev andop pe bathtta hai uske bathoti & nandini bhabi kajjal ko lekar aate hai. dev kajjal ko dekhtahi raheta hai.atlast DK ki sadi ho jati hai.now kajjal apni suhag raat ki sage par baithihui hai aur hoti & nandini bhabi dev ko uske room ke andar dhakka deti hai.dev room ka darwaza lock karta hai uske baad kajjal ke paas jata hai.phir dhire se kajjal ki gunghat uthata hai and kajjal se kaheta hai kajjal aaj tum bahaut khubsurat lagrahi ho ji karta hai jindegi bhar tumhe samne unhi bhaitha ke dekhta rahu.then kajjal feel shy and smile 😊 then dev dhirese uski haat thamta hai and kiss her hands kajjal sarmajati hai and close her eyes then dev kiss her eyes uske baad dev kajjal ki jewellery utar ta hai and then he start to kiss her forehead her chick and her red lips and then they going down and the lights are put off. next day kajjal get up and see that dev sleep like a baby.then she kiss his forehead and going to take bath.kajjal fresh hoke puja karne jati hai.puja karke sabko arti thene ke baad woh NT mom ki tasbir ke samne jati hai aur aapni nai jindegi ki suruat ke liye unse ashirbaad mangti hai.after thatshe prepeared tea and dev ko jagane gai.still dev is sleeping. kajjal dev ko bulati hai par dev firse so jata hai. then kajjal take his fingar and put it into the tea cup then dev shouted and wake up.aur kajjal se kaheta haiye kya tarika hua jagane ka.iske answer main kajjal kaheti hai ke side side need se uth jaoge to mujhe aisa karna nahi parega.then kajjal tells to dev that jaldi se chaye pi kar fresh ho kar niche aao main nasta lagadeti hu.kajjal niche jane ke liye piche muri then dev hold her hand and pul her.kajjal bed par gir jati hai then dev tell her i love you kajjal also tell him i love you to but jaldi taiar ho jao niche sab intezar kar rahe hai ye kahekar woh dev ko dhakka deti hai and niche chali jati hai

i have to go.soon come back...............
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice job
cont soon
😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Subha naste ki table pe panna chachi DK ko goa ki do ticket deti hai honeymoon ke liye.Dk bahaut khus ho jate hai 😊 woh dono panna chachi ko thanks kahete hai. kajjal aapni aur Dev ki bags pack kar leti hai. next day woh dono honeymonn ke liye nikal. woh dono goa main bahaut enjoy karte hai.aur kuch dino baad woh dono ghar laut aate hai. after few months one day Dev ready ho raha hai then sudden kajjal feels uneasy.Dev noticed that and ask her is everything alright kajjal tell him yes bas thodasa thakan mahesus horaha hai and chakkar aa rahi hai par tum fikar mat karo main thodisi rest le lungi aur thik ho jaungi.par dev insist her to go to docter and check herelf but kajjal razi nahi hoti then dev khud hi use docter ke paas le jta hai. docter check her and tell dev that aisi halat main aisa hota hai thakan mahesus karna chkkar ana ye hotahi hai. then dev ask to docter kaisi halat main kya hua hai kajjal ko then docter tell him that kajjal is three months pregnent. ye sun ke dev bahaut khus ho jata hai and tell to kajjal that kajjal iska matlab main papa banne wala hu. mujhe bhi koi papa kahekar bulane wala aa raha hai kajjal tell him ha tum papa aur main mammi banne wali hu.Dev become very happy 😊 and hug her 🤗 .aur kaheta hai ke chalo ghar jake sabko ye khus khabri sunati hai.sab bahaut khu ho jayenge.kajjal also agree with him. Dk ghar lautte hai. then nandini bhabi aur panna chachi Dk se puch te hai that kaha the tum dono aur itne khus kyun ho kya baat hai. then Dev tell tham about kajjals pregnency news. they are getting very happy panna chachi kajjal ki nazar utarti hai. and kaheti hai ke kaas bhabi aj humare sang hoti. then Dk Nt mom ki tasbir ke samne jate hai aur asirbaad mangte hai.

have to go,soon back..............
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Posted: 18 years ago
#9
KAJJAL AUR DEV BAHAUT KHUSH HAI. DEV APNE ANEWALI BACHE KE LIYE DHER SARI TOYS KHARIDTA HAI. AUR AAPNE BACHHE KI ROOM DECORATE KARTA HAI.IDHAR AMEESHA KE PAPA NE KA ko bell kara dete hai aur un dono ko bahar nikal late hai.jail se bahar ane ke baad KA Dev aur kajjal se badla leneki baad sochte hai. Ameesha karan se kaheti hai agar Dev ko marna hai to pahele kajjal ko marna hoga. kyunki dev ki kamjori kajjal hai.aur agar kisi insaan ko marna karna hai to pahele uski kamjori ko khatam karo woh insaan khud ba khud mar jayega.and started laughing loudly 😈 .karan also agree with her.next day dev kajjal ko jaldi tair hone ko kaheta hai. kyunki aaj kajjal ki appoinment hai docter ki saath.aur woh dono nikal jate hai.woh dono nikal jane ke baad ek admi karan ko phone karke kaheta hai ke kaam ho gaya.then karan tell to ameesha that the work is done. raste main dev kajjal se kaheta hai mujhe to ek ladki chahiye bilkul tumhari tarah.tumhari tarah aankhe,tumhari tarah hot, tumhari tarah chahera bilkul tumhari tarah.aur kajjal kheti hai lekin mujhe to ek ladka chahiye woh bhi tumhari tarah.then dev tell her phir to twince hoga ek ladka aur ek ladki.then kajjal feels shy.then sudden a track dev ki gari ke samne aa jata hai dev try to control his car but he feel that the bracks of the car do not work.dev bahaut koshis karta hai he can't do it.aur unki car ek per (tree) se jake takra jata hai aur kajjal gari se bahar gir jati hai aur ek pathhar se takra jati hai aur behos ho jati hai dev ki sar pe chot aata hai woh bhi behos ho jata hai. kuch local log unhe hospital main admit karte hai aur dev ki ghar main phone karke inform karte hai.panna chachi ye khabar sunte hai aur she get puzzle.nandini bhabi,panna chachi,aur bir hospital main pauchte hai.idhar dev hos main aata hai aur docter se puchta hai docter meri patni kaisi hai docter tell him kajjal ki condition bahaut critical hai.uski operation chal raha hai.ye sunke dev become shocked 😲 .

episode end with dev's shocked face........

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