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Part8


Hi everyone...thank you sooo much for liking this story sooo much...and seeing your positive response...i have manged one more update after this one...but pacca next will be the last update...i will post last update tonight or tomorrow...extremely sorry for mistakes as i always update in a hurry😆...and as the story is ending ...i want a little big wala comment to know what u like or dislike in the story or what u want to read more in my new stories...


Astha dressed up beautifully in the white bridal gown...

She was looking so stunning that it became impossible for shlok to move his eyes away from her for sometime...but very next minute he leave the living room and went to his own...

Astha's patience hit its limit...she went behind him and hold his hand...

Astha:Shlok...

He turned to see her dull face...tears were floating in her hazel eyes...

He just wanted to hug her and break his promise to Elena...but he was sooo helpless...

Astha saw him staring her silently so she finally spoke...

Astha:Shlok why are you doing this to me haan???...he turned his face to other side but she came infront of him...cupped his face ...I know I have hurt you a lot...by flirting with many boys...I m very bad i know this tooo...but this time my love is true for u ... I swear...i will not cheat you...

She paused seeing him standing like a statue...took a deep breath and said...

Astha:I thought that I will not beg for my love but now nothing is in my control shlok...I just want you in my life...please say that u love me tooo...and what happened that night was ur love for me... not a mistake...tears started flowing through her eyes...

Like always shlok couldn't see her crying and gently wiped her tears with his thumb and softly asked her to leave ...

She hold his hands on her face...

Astha:whenever someone hurt me I always came to you and today you are hurting me where should I go shlok... tell me????...
His heart squeezed at her pain but he didn't break his silence ...still his intense and painful gaze was telling it all to her...

Astha:You cann't hide the fact that you love me tooo...she came to his face and locked her lips with his...making him more weak in his decision...say it you love me ...she spoke in between the kiss...and this is when he composed himself again and slightly pushed her away with a jerk...

Shlok:I said na that I don't love you ...I love Elena...so.stop wasting ur time and just go from here...

It was very hurtful for astha the way he humiliated her love again when she herself came to talk to him putting her anger and ego on side...

Astha:Fine then...go to hell with ur Elena...uptil now I just wanted to break ur silence but I wasted my time hitting my head on a stone...she shouted like insane...her tears stained her beautiful face...now you will regret your whole life for me ...I m going...going to marry engin only because of you...she left the place crying bitterly...

Shlok ran behind him but with a thud she closed the door on his face...it felt to him like all the ways to reach astha also get closed with this door...

He was guilty and angry for his behavior and helpless tooo ...he just went on his knees and cried endlessly on his misery...

While there on the whole way astha was crying thinking about shlok's cold and rude behavior with her...she was short tempered right from childhood...always it was shlok who use to calm her down...and today her only support was not with her ...and thats why she was going mad in anger not understanding what a big mistake she was going to make by marrying Engin...

She reached the place and before entering the hall...she corrected her condition...wiped her tears but her heart was still weeping...her eyes were swollen due to constant crying...

However she entered the hall...where Engin ,Elena and other people were waiting for them...

Shlok had already refused to attend the wedding making some excuse but astha was well aware that why he is not attending the wedding...

Elena tooo came there with heavy heart as she was not sooo strong to see his Engin marrying someone else...

After a delay of some minutes the wedding rituals started...

Elena left the hall silently as she felt weak in her decision of seeing him marrying to astha...but engin noticed her leaving the hall as his eyes were only focused on her all the time...

The minute Elena left from there...engin asked the man to stop the rituals as he wanted to talk something to astha...

Engin whispered ...come with me astha I need to talk to you right now...but astha was standing there lost in shlok's memories...

Engin called her second time but she was standing still at her place...finally he held her hand and dragged her outside the hall...

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Elena and shlok now both were alone... their own game ruined their lives...

One hour passed since Elena left the hall...she was weeping thinking that now engin is someone else's and her last hope that may be somehow she can get him in her life shattered...

While on the other side same thought was also haunting shlok...that's why he was keeping him busy in drinking...

Suddenly a call took away their remaining strength tooo...

The voice on the other end said:"Sorry to inform you that the car which was registered on the name of engin and astha for the hotel where they were suppose to travel after their wedding has met with an accident and two of them are in critical condition...or perhaps taking their last breaths...so please come to this place as quickly as possible''...

They were so much horrified hearing
the news that they didn't waste a single minute to reach there... .

But they both left shocked to see them standing perfectly fine...

You two are fine then what was that news...Elena and shlok inquired in anger...

Engin:That was all fake...it was just a small plan to call you both here..while astha was standing quiet avoiding eye contact with shlok when he most needed to see into her eyes...

Elena shouted ...

You both were playing with our emotions...have u any idea how many times my inside died before reaching here...she was about to slap him when engin grabbed her hand tightly ...

Engin:Why you are feeling so bad haan...when you can play such big games so what's wrong in a small joke...

Elena's voice softened... what you mean by this...I apologized for what I did...

Engine shouted...and you think your apology was enough to make everything normal...tell me... he shouted on her...she was confused that why suddenly he is talking like this...

Elena:what...what happened to you...?????r u alright ???...she asked in a worried and shaky tone...

Engine...no I m not alright dammit...I am not ...he lowered his face and said ...since the day I have realized my love for you I am not alright...

She became numb on the sudden confession of his...

Engine please don't joke ...you are married to astha now...

Astha:he is not joking Elena he truly loves you ...and ...she paused ...and that's why we canceled our wedding ...

Shlok and Elena both were shocked...

Elena:Oh...please don't play with our feelings like we did...

Engine:no... its the only truth that I love you not astha...the day you lost ur father...I felt guilty for leaving my friend alone...but the day u confessed ur truth that u and shlok tried to break my and astha's relation I totally lost my peace...I started loving u ...but didn't tell u anything as I wanted you to say first that you still loves me...
I thought u will stop my wedding today and will say that engin...I love you...I want to marry you...but no like shlok you also tried to show ur greatness...
But u know u two have not only spoilt ur lives but ours tooo ...

Elena the game u started is making four of us to suffer ...

Now look u r guilty ...shlok is guilty ..but what about me and astha...u have totally changed our lives...we cann't feel anything anymore for each other...as we have started loving u people...

He paused and suddenly shouted...

You two are big idiots...why u two were repressing ur feelings...why don't you speak...
Today we were going to do the biggest mistake of our lives and u were watching everything regretting ur fate instead of stopping us...what could have happened ...if me and astha haven't talked to each other...


Flashback

Engin took astha outside and confessed that he don't want this marriage as he loves her friend Elena and was waiting for her silence to break...

Astha:This will not happen engin as Elena and shlok loved each other ...we are in the same boat...shlok is silent tooo because they love each other not us ...

Engin:No astha Elena only loves me and shlok loves you... they just fooled us ...played with our emotions...and then he told everything to astha about their plan...and that he acted to agree for this marriage just for Elena but he cannot hurt himself anymore...

Now one thing was clear to astha that shlok only loves her but she was still angry with him for hurting her again and again...

He thanked engin to stop her from doing this mistake...

Engin planned the accident thing to bring them there...astha refused...

Engin teased her ok then marry me if you don't love shlok...astha poked him...no I only want him as my life-partner you stay with ur stupid Elena who made our lives so complicated...

Engin:hey don't talk about her like this...he made a fake angry face...so you gonna support me and she agreed...but she was determined that she will not forgive shlok so easily...

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Elena:I am sorry engin...I am ashamed of myself...
Yes you should be... came the quick reply...

Elena...I will leave this city ...you don't worry...but engine pulled her to himself... who gave u the right to decide yourself...she was baffled by what he said...
Elena:what...

Engin:u cann't leave me understand...I want my friend back...I want you back...

He went on his knees and propose her...will you marry me elena???...

Elena suddenly became teary ...she looked towards shlok and astha and they both signaled her to say yes...and she tooo nodded her head in yes and both of them got married in the same place...

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Astha and shlok congratulated them and astha apologized to elena for the way she always behaved with her...

Shlok was desperate the whole time to talk to astha but she ignored him...and finally when the wedding ended he hold her hand and said ..we need to talk right now...

But astha jerked his hand away I don't walk to talk...and left the place...

Shlok made a sad puppy face
seeing Engin and Elena...

They both smiled...and spoke...she is your astha after all...a hard nut to crack...you know better how to manofy her...

Shlok smiled back...yeah I know very well...

He ran behind her but she was fast enough to hire a taxi and leave him alone...


Shlok:I know where you have gone and what's going on in your mind...



No precap for last update but its going to be a little nirma ...😆


By the way below this update you can drool over Engin in my siggy...my biggest crush😆😆😆😆😆😆




Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omgg I loved it from the beginning right till the end, I was hooked👏👏 you are one amazing writer and you come with such interesting concepts which gets you glued to it. Well done👏👏👏At home beginning I thought Shlok would break down on seeing his Astha cry, but he didn't. Poor Astha😔

Elena and Engin's love story, they are soo cutee and omgg he proposed to her😳🥳 and yes finally Astha knows the ruth about Shlok and that he does love her. I wonder what Shlok does to pacify an angry Astha😉 and did you say a nirma update, *runs to read it*
Edited by ...Ayesha... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so my guess is right
cute proposal by engin😳
poor shlokie, he deserves it. after all, he had hurt her
i want a biggg apology from shlok
nirmawala update?? so the eagerness for ur next update increased now🤪
btw your crush is so handsome yaar😳😉
Edited by pranu_d - 11 years ago
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Hi,meerab I really love this ss now . Yeah atlast the four of them come to know the love of life.At first i really feel bad for aastha and engin how could shlok and Elena play with their feelings but after reading further part its wat clearly visible that it was a mere attractions between them.Yeah we can't change our destiny when shlok was refused to agree is love to aastha i really feel bad for him.When our heart and mind forced us to do a diff things it will always gives only pain not only for us and also for others life too.when u update last part precap TRUE to say i didnot like that but after reading this update i was quite releaved .Thanks a lot for this wonderful update .I love aasthas dialogue when she say when u the caz of my hurt then where would i go it was really very emotional i love it.Great update 👏👏
Edited by raji_ashloksfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

Res, btw check my comments for prev chapters

ok sweety ...i will check them today ..now working on last part of this ss😉😉😉
Posted: 11 years ago

i know maybe u will what a long comment but the love i have for u is unmeasurable.do u know when I saw ur message I rushed to the post and scroll the page down very fast to comment res but already there is a res so I typed here.dear its a great update I'm eagerly waiting to read the last part dear.

I'm so glad as now all the problems are clear and already I'm dreaming about their next nirma plan
u know ur update is killing my patient
love the way u represent the story
plz plz update sooon
today I can't sleeep without reading the rest
update sooon
And here is the preview u have asked
first of alll u have given the right title to ur ss I loved it.
the jealousy concept is amazing yaaar.
the way u represent all the fours emotion is 👏
hatsss offf dear
finallly ur concept is very practical the same things r happening in the present situation tooo.
I'm saying the truth ur story is awesome dear.plz its a lovable request plz update some Ss,OS like this
I'm ur great fan
I'm very very mad regarding ur stories
plz update the rest today right now plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz,plz plz,plz plz I'm so lazy plz add some more plzs
Edited by ashlok - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sahrish-pirzada

Awww why they r ruining thier lives 😕???? hope u make Ashlok together once again ... 😊😊 nd plz dnt do any thing to asthu plz😭😭😭 eagerly waiting for update

thank u sooo much dear😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

Chapter 6:


Wow that was one action packed update😆 first felt really bad fr Elena that she lost her father, but it was nice to see Engin being there for her😃 and omgg Astha and Shlok☺️ wow😲😆😆 finally she admits that she loves him, I found that part really amazingly written meerab, great job👏👏 and the precap, I wonder what happens now😊

action packed update😆----you mean nirma packed update😉😉😉😉😆

omgg Astha and Shlok☺️---aap kabhi nahi sudhar saktey shlok...naughty kahin ke

But thank u sooo much my cutie pie for liking the update...i m trying for some more nirma in last update😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

Oooh wow! Loving the growing closeness of Astha and Shlok, especially Astha's insecurities for Shlok😆 amazing update as alwayss Meerab👏👏👏 precap😲😳 can't wait to read it!😉

thanks cutie pie😳😳😳😳😳
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Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

Omgg I loved the update meerab👏👏 Astha is soo jealous of Shlok and Elena, wonder whether their plan will actually succeed in making Astha admit she loves Shlok😆 Loving their little jealousy game, it was beautifully written😳👏 btw sorry im late😛

awww...glad you enjoyed it sooo much...thanks my cutie,,,love you😳

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