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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

superb superb dear

plz update dooon

love u honey

miss u tooo honey

u r a fantastic writer

its totally amazing

thank god atleast they stopped their intension thinking about the present otherwise I'm dead

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: ashlok

superb superb dear
plz update dooon
love u honey
miss u tooo honey
u r a fantastic writer
its totally amazing
thank god atleast they stopped their intension thinking about the present otherwise I'm dead

awww...I m glad that u like it sooo much...thank u sweety and love u 😳

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suma madhuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#543

Great update meerab loved it,

Thanks for pm

Ramadan mubarak to u and ur family members

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: madhufx9...
Great update meerab loved it,
Thanks for pm
Ramadan mubarak to u and ur family members

thanks a lot sweety...
And happy Ramadan 😳

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.furrii.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#545

Wooow... So much Nirma!!!! ☺️

Awesome awesome update! Loved loved loved it!

I love rain! And scenes like this in the rain is just 😳

Thank you for the superb update and pm! Update soon 😳

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#546

awesome update
felt sad for Elena
nice precap

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Riddhima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#547

Poor elena...

Ashlok romantic moments was amazing...

Very very nice updet meerab...

And precap was superb...

Please update soon dear...

Socha aaj kuch uss ke siwa sochu,

Ab tak issi soch me hu ke or kya sochun...!!!!

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sathuraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#548

Nice Update Meerab...

Thanks for the PM ...

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Nice Update Meerab...

Thanks for the PM ...

Welcome😳😳😳

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#550

Part7

Hi friends...this is the second last update of this SS...i know this update is sort of crap...but still bear it...btw how many of u liked my new banner????...😃

Astha silently leave shlok's room and went into living room checking for shlok...she checked every corner of their apartment ..but he was no where to be seen...

Astha thought shyly that its better to change and clean the mess they both created last night...

After cleaning the apartment...she took shower and changed into a pretty pink dress...her face bloomed like petals on the thought that she is getting ready for her shlok...and she blushed hard when she noticed the love bite on her neck...

She was eagerly waiting for him to come back ...so that she can tell him her feelings opening...

She walked to balcony to enjoy the fresh and cloudy morning...her dress was dancing here and there with the cool breeze...she was sooo happy that she started twirling when it started drizzling... enjoying the true realization of love...

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She entered the living room happily when suddenly she heard the door opening ...she was feeling shy to face shlok...but she froze seeing shlok with engin and Elena...

Their presence with shlok was enough to drag her out of dreamland...

She glanced at shlok for a second but his face was looking so pale and dull... a feeling of sadness and guilt was visible on his face...he avoided eye contact with her...this really pricked her heart badly...

There were complete silence in the room for next few seconds...

She finally broke the spell of the silence and asked them that why they are here????...

Shlok spoke in a low and broken voice...

Shlok:Astha from now onwards Elena will stay here with us...

Astha was already upset on her presence and now this news made her to lose all control...

Astha:what...Elena will stay with us?????...what you want to say...you want a live-in relationship with her...she blurted out...

Shlok:asthaaa...he shouted...you know what rubbish you are talking about????...I think you are still drunken...

Astha:I m very much in my senses shlok...and don't want her with us and thats final...

Shlok:I don't need your permission for this...

Astha:OK fine then u stay here with ur Elena and I m moving out...

Engin:please astha try to understand her condition...

Astha:why... what happened to her condition ...she is looking absolutely fine...

Engin:Astha she has lost her father last night and her step-mother has thrown her out of the house...now she needs a place to live...

Astha softened for a second...

Astha:Sorry to hear about your loss elena...

Shlok:can she stay here now????...

Astha:She can stay somewhere else but not here because i don't feel comfortable in her presence...sorry elena i am saying all this but honestly i cann't stay with you...she left three of them ...and locked her inside her room and cried her heart out...as her every dream shattered seeing shlok caring for elena again...

Her jealously increased tooo much that everyone was feeling it...but still they tried to ignore it...especially elena...

Engin:look shlok i said na she will not feel comfortable with elena...my first decision was right that she should stay at my place ..my family will take care of her...

Shlok:but engin...

Elena:i think engin is right...i can stay with his family...

Shlok agreed but he was fuming because of astha's selfish behavior...

As soon as they left shlok shouted at astha to open her room ...

Astha opened the lock and shlok barged inside the room ...tightly held her arm and started shouting ...

Shlok:whats your problem haan???...cann't you feel someone's pain...???...what was the need to behave with her like that...why are you sooo selfish astha????...why????... he now shouted at the top of his voice...

Astha shouted back..yes i am but only in your case shlok...i cann't see that girl with you anymore...not at all after our last night's confession ...

Shlok:what confession you are talking about???...what happened last night was just a mistake...he turned his face to other side...so that he could hide his pain from him...

His words broke her heart into thousand pieces...she turned him to her face...what you said that was a mistake???? ...our love was a mistake...

Tears started flowing from her eyes...you said that you are mine only...no one can come between us and now you are saying that all was fake...she shouted grabbing his collar wildly...

Shlok:Its better for you to forget all about that...because now elena is my life...she said coldly pushing her on the bed...and leave from there in anger...

Astha got frustrated and heartbroken at his rudeness...she started breaking things of her room ...he is saying that was a mistake...our love was a mistake...tears were flowing endlessly from her eyes...

After some time she herself wiped her tears...and said in a revengeful tone...

Ok fine...you said you love that elena not me...then now i will not beg for your love...you will confess it yourself shlok...

Almost one week passed ...elena was slowly recovering from the trauma of her father's death..engin and his family cared for her in every possible way...

Elena found her old friend back in engin...but she could still feel that astha was always a part of his life...

Shlok and astha were angry with each other...and only used to talk when it is most required...astha also started showing him that he is no more important to her and she wants to spend her entire life with engin...

Elena told her truth to engin...that she loved him since their friendship started ...and wanted to break his relation with astha...

At first she was shocked...and angry...even he stopped talking to her for sometime...

But afterall she was his only friend...

Elena's repeated apologies melted his heart and he forgave her...but a mild anger for her was still in some corner of his heart that why she didn't tell him before that she loves him...

Elena made every possible effort to make engin and astha closer to each other once again...she was glad that astha was now becoming her friend... unaware that astha was doing all this to break shlok's silence...

After 1 month:

Life was getting back to normal...

Elena was glad thinking engin is happy with astha ...she forced engin to marry astha...

Engin didn't want marriage so soon but he had to surrender infront of elena's demand seeing her guilt for what she tried to do in past...

Engin proposed astha and just to make shlok jealous she replied in yes...
Soon their marriage was fixed...

Engin and astha got busy with their wedding preparatioeart ...
In some corner of elena's heart a desire was still there to see engin as a part of her life...but she was silent...

Shlok also showed that he is happy but his heart was breaking slowly...

He started spending most of his time drinking in the bars...he used to come home only when astha has gone to sleep...he was becoming thin...his beard was growing at the pace of his weird thoughts...

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Flashback

He was really happy that night when astha confessed her feelings in drunken state and what followed make him to decide ...that next morning he will tell astha that how much he loves her and elena and he was just acting to be in a relationship...but the elena's sudden call about her father's death shocked him...and when he went to meet her...she declared that she doesn't want to hurt engin anymore...and wants to stop playing this game and requested shlok to please sacrifice his love for her friend engin...as according to her engin loves astha...

She emotionally blackmailed shlok that she was the one who involved you in this game and now she wants to end it...without breaking engin and astha's relation...at first shlok refused ..asked her million questions...because he didn't want to backout so easily when everything was in his favor...when astha was almost his...

When Engin say them argumenting on something ...he took shlok in privacy and asked her to fulfil every wish of elena as she was alone in her life and there was no one to care for her except shlok...

These all emotions made shlok to think over his selfishness...

For elena and engin's happiness and for the guilt elena evoked in him... he agreed to sacrifice his love thats why after that morning he started behaving rudely with astha...but astha's selfish behavior that day really made him angry...

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Astha was also very much aware of shlok's state but she was waiting him to spoke out his love for her...

Everything was going wrong...the four of them were sacrificing their love ...making decisions for each other... without knowing what the other one wants...they were having no idea that they were just spoiling their own lives...

Precap:

Elena and shlok received call that the car in which engin and astha were driving to their hotel after wedding just met with an accident...and both are in critical condition...

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago

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