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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#511

banner is so beautiful.Aastha is becoming more n more possessive.Loved Engine broke out infront of elena.hope they unite.Ashlok moments in precap is so lovely.cant wait 4 that

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#512

hi😛meera..superb update..doing great with love triangles..when astha gonna realise her love for shlokie...hope elina wont spill out the beans😕..precap sounds nirma,rain+short dress..😳do update soon.. Meeru*****HAPPY RAMZAN***** dear... My wishes to u n ur family😊

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: priya_avi
hi😛meera..superb update..doing great with love triangles..when astha gonna realise her love for shlokie...hope elina wont spill out the beans😕..precap sounds nirma,rain+short dress..😳do update soon.. Meeru*****HAPPY RAMZAN***** dear... My wishes to u n ur family😊

😆😆😆awww thanks dear for the lovely response😃...
And Ramzan mubarak sweety😳😳😳🤗

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: ashlok
meerab u r back
I missed u very badly dear
love u dear
happy ramadhan
as always its an amazing story
loved it very much
update sooon
I think aastha will confess her love to him in drunken stage
do u know dear how badly I miss u
come back sooon

with love,
aishu

Awww...i missed u tooo dear...and thanks a lot for liking the story...
Ramadhan mubarak sweety and love u tooo😳😳😳😳

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: whitelily
wonderful update 😃

thanks bobiedhiloon and whitelily😳😳😳

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logambika

@.logs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#516

awesome update yaar... ramadan mubarak...

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#517

Part6

Hi friends ...here is your nirma update but its a bit emotional tooo...waiting for ur comments to know that how was it ...as writing hot stuff gets a bit difficult for me😆...so please honestly tell me u liked the update or not???...

Elena and Engin reached her home...elena immediately fell to the floor seeing her father's dead body...and was all in tears...

Elena always hated her dad as he never behaved like a father..never cared for her...never spoke two words of love with her...she was just eight when after her mother's death...her father married a second time...her step mother was really a wicked lady she tortured her mentally as well as physically...she threatened her that she will kill his father if he opened her mouth about her sufferings...she kept quiet for her father's sake as he was only one related to her in this stranger world...

As she grew up...she tried to make her father realize that her second wife is only after her property but her father didn't listen to her and ignored her..and starting behaving with her rudely due to constant poisoning of his mind by her stepmother...even he warned her that he will throw her out of this house if she didn't stop making all the allegations...with time she showed patience and started adjusting in her life...but her heart was now filled with just hatred for her father for ruining her childhood and keeping her away from all the affection she demanded from him as a daughter...

She was all alone in her life..her life was colorless...as no one was there to care for her...until the day she met engin...with whom she became friends in short span of time...
Engin cared for her in every possible way..he bring back colours in her life...they used to share their every comfort and grief ...
He was the one who could do anything to bring smile on her face ...

When her friend became her love elena was totally ignorant until she learnt the meaning of love...only she got a little late in confessing her feelings...and astha took her place...

Today her father's death again made her alone...she was crying bitterly hugging engin...saying all that she was feeling at that moment...

Listening to her sadness engin hugged her more tightly...her every word made him realize that how lonely her friend was and he stopped caring for her since long ago...he was feeling bad for elena...

She wept hugging her dad's lifeless body...her stepmother was not looking sad as now all property was on her name...but she was acting to be a good mother to Elena in front of others...

Last funereal rituals were accomplished and engin was with her whole time...as she knew about her mother's truth...

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By the time shlok and astha reached their apartment it was raining heavily...

He came out of the car and opened astha's side of door...supported her in walking but being angry and drunken she escaped his hold and run to the back of their apartment towards the beach...

Shlok tooo followed her as she was not in her senses...

She stopped right in the middle of place... trembling from head to toe...as she was wearing just shorts and a brief T-shirt reaching hardly to her belly button...her whole existence was drenched in rain...

Shlok came to her and requested her to come inside otherwise she will catch cold but she refused...

Shlok held her hand forcefully but she again freed herself and pulled him closer to her wet body...

Astha shouted ...why don't you understand that it hurts me a lot when that Elena comes near you...I feel jealous when she touches you...she said caressing his face in a somewhat sad and broken tone...

Shlok became numb suddenly as finally he heard what he wanted to hear from her...

Astha:why r u quiet?????she tightly held his shirt and shook him ...I said I feel jealous when I see u with that Elena...I hate her and u ...when u both came close to eachother...

She just broke down in his arms and started crying slowly...I cann't see u with anyone else...I cann't see you caring for anyone else except me...I don't want to share you with anyone else...she said while sobbing badly...

Astha:say you are just mine shlok...she said looking into his eyes...

The pain was clearly visible in her eyes...

He couldn't see her in pain and what more he could wish when he already heard that only he matters to her more than anything...

He cupped her face with one hand and with other hand removed wet hair strands from her face and tucked them behind her ear...

Shlok:I am only yours astha...no one can come between us...

Astha:Really????...she asked in disbelief...

Shlok nodded in yes caressing her face...

And soon both were lost in each others eyes...

The intense desire were shining in their eyes...the sensual tension rise between them...

Astha went on her tiptoes and sucked the rain stops falling on his face...

And she kissed his whole face before taking his lips into hers ...she slowly licked and sucked his lips...

His hands automatically went to her bare waist and he started caressing her there in circles...making her body on fire even in this much cold weather...

Shlok tooo starting responding to the kiss slowly...he pulled her waist almost to his body...her hands moved into his hair pulling him more close...

They were getting impatient for each other...the kiss was becoming aggressive and more passionate...they were so much lost in the moment that when they both made their way to the ground...they didn't even realize...

Their hands were entangled with each other on their sides...their tongues were dancing together exploring each others mouth..they were kissing endlessly in the rain...without giving a mere notice to the state of their clothes which were totally messed up in sand...

They broke the kiss only when they became breathless...they both correct their clothes...their noses were getting red due to their impatient and long kissing but it was not the end...the rising desire in their eyes was still driving them crazy...

Astha again rushed to him and he lifted her up ...her legs circled around his waist while her hands circled around his neck and they both started kissing again...

Shlok carried her to his bedroom without breaking the kiss...

He gently throw her on the bed and followed her ...
He came slightly on her top and started kissing her face...her eyes ...her nose... and her lips...then he kissed her along the length of her throat ...

Her moans were driving him mad...

He moved down and slightly removed the shirt from her shoulder and gave a love bite there...making her to moan even louder...then he licked the mark to soothe the pain he caused...

Her hands moved to his shirt and within seconds she removed his shirt...rolled over him and came on his top and kissed every inch of his face...throat and chest...

When it became impossible for him to bear anymore...he again rolled and came on her top...and started kissing her madly...her nails dug into his back as she was finding it impossible to bear his sweet torture anymore...

Finally his hands moved to the hem of her shirt to remove it but suddenly he realized that what he is going to do next is not right ...though he loves her sooo much but he wants her like this only after marriage...he left her alone in confusion and moved to the balcony to calm down his raging hormones...

Next morning when astha opened her eyes she found herself sleeping in shlok's bed...the state of the bed and her own condition was telling that something had happened between her and shlok last night...and as she recalled their last night's passionate kissing and lovemaking ...her cheeks became cherry red and she was blushing like idiots...

Astha:I love shlok...the realization made her more happy but she was feeling shy that after her last night's boldness how she will face him again...but she made up her mind that she will confess that she only loves him not engin...she was behaving so selfish at the moment by thinking only about him and shlok totally ignoring the existence of elena and engin in their lives...

Precap:

Astha slowly went to the living room slightly blushing after hearing the door opening...but left shocked to see elena with engin and shlok...

Shlok:Now elena with stay here with us...he informed astha...

Astha created a big issue out of this...

Engin decided that elena will stay with him at his house...

Elena told engin about her truth ...

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago