KriYansh Drabble Series: Tough Summer's Epilogue-pg58 #End!

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vaishnavi

@vaishkreya

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#191

It was such a lovely update🤗 🤗

tat forehead linking part wass shooo sweeettt...

i just loved their confession...w8ng fr kriya's too..😳😳

n rey's naughty thoughts hogaye chalu😆😳😉

update soonnn

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David

@arshafan94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Loved the way you wrote the chapter.
the hesitation and finally the confession.
i am just in love with your stories.

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Supab

Finally their love story starts

Awww

Such a cute confession

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

good one ... 😃

his stammerings while conveying his feelings actually tells state of his heart... 😊

its his first time ... n he's quite nervous... awww 😳

still he managed to tell her... when he saw her leaving... 👍🏼

well... seems like nimish must be in some trouble now... 😔

n rey will rescue him... n earn her love 😉

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

reserved

Unreserved.

This was real good.

the confession thing was so well written.

the way she asks her, and the way he pulls her back everytime she tries to leave is just so beautiful

I'm in love with your work di, and you know its just an understatement,

The entire thing was well written, and being honest, you shouldve given it a read, tab shayad aap thoda aur improvise kar lete.

But anyways! I loved it! Full too awesomeness! The way you wrote that. "Earn it.. to hear it" is seriously amazing. plus the way he says "I will earn it" and then imagining a thousand scenarios in his head. lol. good good.

You are great. Keep it up!

and don't worry, tareefo ke bojh se aap jesa baccha dab ke marr nai jayega :P

Love it and You as well

Take care of yourself.

-Bookworm :)

Edited by Painted_Sky - 11 years ago