Sanam aur Ahil ki Prem Kahani

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Posted: 11 years ago
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The story begins when Sanam stepped out of Ahil's house after ahil found out that sanam was the new cook. He couldn't believe his eyes that all of the time she was in the house, he didn't know it was her.Ahil was fuming with anger, he took sanam by her arms and pulled her close to her. She was shocked, his arms started to hurt. Tears were coming out of her eyes but ahil didn't care. He told her to leave the house right away and never show her face ever again. Sanam was now angry. Instead of crying she took ahil's hands and pushed them away from her body. She slapped him across the face for behaving her like this and walked away. Ahil was pissed and wanted to teach her a lesson but he decided that he will make her regret what she did.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awesome plz continue and pm me plz 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start. 😃
Continue..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part2

As sanam was walking out of ahil'a house. She was having different kinds of emotions. She was feeling sad and happy. She was sad because she just lost another job and she was happy because she would never see that "jalad Jin" face ever again. As she was waking on the road, tears were fuming in her eyes and she was recalling the memories of her burning Shaba and how ahil ruined her life, took away her family and her happiness. She slowly wiped her tears off and said to herself "I can't let go of that man that easily, Ab sanam dikayegi ki woh bhi asad Ahmed khan Aur zoya Ahmed khan ki Beti hai. Sanam decided that she will ruin ahil'a life as he ruined hers.
Sanam didn't know where to go. As she was waking, raindrops started falling on her and it started raining heavily. Sanam started running but stopped when she saw a cottage. She went inside the cottage and stayed there for a while. When she thought that the rain is not going to stop for awhile, she decided to make fire. She got some woods and a matchstick.
On the other hand, ahil was feeling restless as he saw the weather outside and he felt bad for kicking sanam out of the house. He was thinking all of the things that could happen to sanam which made him tense. But why was he getting tense? He didn't know why he cared about her. He brushed off the thought of saving her and decided to go to sleep. As he was sleeping, he had a dream about sanam being in a jungle and some gundays are misbehaving with her when one of those gundays started to rip sanam's clothes. He shouted "SANAMMM". He couldn't just sit there, he decided he would go look for her. He started driving and as he was driving his car stopped in the middle of the road. Due to the heavy raining, there was no signal. He decided to go in the jungle. As he was waking he saw a cottage. He went in the cottage and saw sanam lying on the ground unconsciously. He started to get worried. He quickly ran towards her. She was so cold. He took off his jacket and put it on her. He checked again and she was still freezing. There was only one way left thought ahil. He was hesitating as he couldn't do that to sanam. He didn't know why he was feeling so embrass and shy. As he started to get close to her their lips were just some inches apart ...

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Edited by Shivy31 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey buddy. Thats an awesome story. :)
Loved the beginnning. I read both parts in one go. So amazing it is. Ruining and revenge. Hmm. Sounds interesting.
Can't wait for what happens next. Update soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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He slowly lifted sanam up, and he locked his lips to her. He didn't know why he felt sparks in his body. He was amazed by how soft her lips were. He loved every part of it. When he broke the kiss, he looked at her and smiled. Why did he do that ? He didn't know the answer to that. He lay her down on the ground and hugged her from behind and brought some heat to their bodies. Quickly both of them were slept not knowing about their environment.
Ahil woke up in the morning feeling a warm body near him. He looked at sanam who was still sleeping and pulled her bangs to the side which were coming in the way. As he pushed her hair out of her face, sanam woke up. She looked at ahil confusing and angrily. She quickly got up and made a distance between them. She hesitated and asked him what was going on ? He said" woh main bas tumhe cold se bacha raha tha". She was more angry now as she thought he was lying to her. She said to him" what do you think of yourself ahil razaibrahim. You think you can take advantage of him whenever u want. But let me tell you one thing, I was probably a servant in your house but not a gulam" she slapped ahil again. But this time he didn't stand still. He took her from her arms brought her closer to his body. He looked at her with tears and anger in his eyes. Sanam was amazed by his reaction. Ahil told her what happened last night. Now it was time for sanam to say something. But she was about to speak, ahil Said " now if you ever come near infront of me, you will see the worst of me. Did you hear that sanam. I HATE YOU. I don't ever want to see your face again... Ever. He was crying now and he let of sanam harshly. She fell to the ground hut ahil didn't care and he left from there. Sanam was standing still. She didn't remember anything that happened last night. She was balling her eyes out. She started running after him and trying to say sorry but he already got in the car and left. She didn't know what to do.
The same day at night, ahil was in his room pacing around and was very angry. As he was coming near the window, he saw someone climb his window. It was no one else, it was sanam. Sanam felt really bad when he left so she decided to go say sorry to him. She climbed the window and got in. Ahil saw her and he was pissed. Before he could say something, sanam out her fingers on his lips. She said "I know that you are mad but I don't remember what happened last night. I really want to say sorry. Ahil thought of doing something that would make sanam live with him. He decided to be rude and quickly took her fingers off his lips. He said " if you want to apologize, you have two options. Either you rub your nose on the ground and say sorry to me or stay here for three months and be my "gulam". Sanam was so mad and she came back to her senses and realized that he was the same jalad Jin. She said " I was so wrong about you, I decided I would go say sorry to you but you what.." She was stopped by ahil saying " which one did u pick? Gulam or... Now ahil was stopped and said " I would rather be your gulam than be rub my nose and say sorry to a person like you. As she was leaving, ahil quickly looked the door with her remote and locked both of them in. Ahil started to get closer to her, as he was getting closer to her, she decided to backup but stopped when she hit the door. Ahil recalled when he kissed her. He put her hands on her waist and said" now since you are my gulam, I can do whatever I want" he said with smirk in his eyes. And you can't imagine what happened next...

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