Series: Twines of the heart [OS 6 - Page 14] - Page 3

read both the parts,beautifully written

Beautiful!
I loved your writing style. It's so unique. Truly a blessed writer you are buddy.
Loving the story! Do update soon! :)

Hey you are an amazing writer ...eventhough you've changed settings and situations...I liked it very much...glad you mentioned muthu...how beautifully and realistically you've expressed things...like this one...so aptly described

" her throat suddenly feeling like sandpaper"

Very much interested to read further...

Pls PM me too.




PS: Since ur writing style is so amazing , it would be a treat for us if you could write some small OS in context of the show too...

Hello Veil,
I am quite enamored by your Idea of basing your OS' on Keerthanas.Its unique and quite brilliant.I love your writing style too.I loved your first in the series.It had the chemistry that lingers in your subconcious.It was absolutely beautiful,the imagery you created.I have once said the same to a brilliant writer on IF and I'd like to say the same to you.Its like looking in a pensieve and getting a tangible idea of the persons feelings.
Thank you for the enjoyable read.
Take care.

loved it...u story has a ethnic touch...I can imagine the whole scene...pls continue soon😳

Loved and enjoyed reading both of the OS...you are one talented person. Cant wait to read more from you, thank you for sharing this with us. Keep up the good work!

wow, another beautifully written part👏
i didnt think you'd continue this 1 but am glad u did..🤗

she likes him right? so why so disappointed... 😒
i actually cant wait for them to be together..😃
im not liking ishita's dad..

eagerly waiting for the next part
take care

Jagadananda Karaka

Keerthana: Jagadananda KarakaDear friends,

If you are reading this, first of all a huge thank you for such a warm welcome you guys gave me in this forum.

Secondly, if there is one story I have huge confidence on, it is this and hence I wish to work on it and publish it someday. Hence, I have to remove it from here. I hope you will understand.

Love,

Veil/ Shika

the descriptions of the home took me back to my childhood summer home. quiet summer afternoons in the shade of mango trees with music and occasional laughter wafting in from surrounding homes - ah the memories. i'd give anything to be back there again. thank you for taking me there at least mentally.

i love the ishra interactions- you balance the subtleties of spoken and unspoken beautifully

thanks for updating this one quickly. i do believe i'm becoming a fan of your writing!😉