OS: Ishita-Adi-raman faceoff

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everybody, I'm back with another quick-OS after yesterday's episode. I had this in my mind after seeing the last emotional scene with Raman shedding a tear for Adi and that brat just insults his own dad without any guilt!
Anyways, I don't know what track CVs are focussing on, I just don't want Ishita's Mission-Aditya-Sudharo so soon before ISHRA realises their love for each other.

So, let me stop my bak-bak and get to the OS.

It starts from where the episode ended yesterday. Ishita drives off to shopping mall with Adi in her car while Raman looks on standing at the door entrance. He is wanndering outside Shagun's house hoping Adi would behave properly with Ishita. He didn't want anyone to hurt her, not even his own son.

At mall, Adi is browsing through the school uniform sizes to select his size. Ishita picks up a size and gives it to him to try. He refuses flatly and picks a different size and goes to trial room to try it.
He realises it is too big for him so he comes out. Ishita knew it he picked wrong size so she holds out what she picked for him and this time he reluctantly takes it to try.

Amusingly, it fits perfectly for Adi. He is surprized but doesnt bother much and tells shopkeeper to pack it. He browses for other clothes in casual wear section.
At billing counter, Adi takes out the money which shagun gave him. Ishita stops by holding his hand and says "Let me pay for it. It's a gift from your dad"

Adi gets angry: aap kaun hoti ho unke taraf se mujhe paise dene wali. khud ko meri mom se compare mat karna. aapki wajah se unhe humesha dukh hua hai.

Ishita is largely upset at his words yet tries to maintain calm posture and in a soft tone she says " aapko aisa kyun lagta hai beta? Main aapki mummy ki jagah nahi lena chahti. I know you love your mom and that's really good. Par tumhe nahi lagta tum apne dad se bahut rudely baat karte ho? Unhone tumhe janam diya hai. Thodi to respect karo apne papa ki beta."

Aditya is now fuming in anger: aap hoti kaun ho mujhe seekhane wali ki mujhe kisse kaise baat karna chahiye? ek to Ruhi ko use karke aapne mere papa ko fasaya hai...aur ab mujhe meri mom se door karne ke liye aaye ho na...main sab jaanta hu...mom ne sab bataya ki aap kitne gande ho.

Ishita is in tears hearing all the crap from him but doesn't let her tears out. They settle the bill [Adi gives the money] and she drives him back to Shagun's house where Raman is eagerly waiting for them. He sees them from a distance.
Ishita parks the car and both of them get down.
Before Ishita could move, Adi comes to her pointing a finger at her and warns : Ye pehli aur aakhri baar hai jab maine aapke saath apna time waste kiya. ainda aapko ya unko mere ghar aane ki zaroorat nahi. Aur meri mom ki jagah aap kabhi nahi lesakti...mind you so just stay away!

He walks off angrily towards the house and Raman could sense that something happened between him and ishita as he worried about.
He asks Adi" beta, kya hua? uniform liya na tumne?"
Adi ignores him and goes into the house shutting the door on Raman's face.

Raman is deeply hurt by Adi's behaviour but he somehow got used to this since shagun poisoned his mind.
He turned to see Ishu who was facing towards the car, leaning on it to support herself. Raman couldn't see her face as he was facing her back, but he could sense that she was crying.
He slowly walked towards her trying to be strong and hide his pain and tears.
She saw his reflection on the car window as he neared her and she quickly wiped her tears taking a deep breath to divert her mind.

Raman holds her by the elbow turning her to face him, with her eyes still looking down.
Raman : Ishita, idhar dekho
Ishita slowly lifts her eyes up to meet his eyes while forcing a smile on her lips.
Raman understood she cried seeing her swollen red eyes and forced smile.
Ishita quickly starts "Adi bahut pyaara bacha hai Raman. Bilkul aap par gaya hai. Uski selection bhi aap ki tarah hai-classy. Humne bahut enjoy kiya saath mein." she lied

Raman just keeps staring at her looking into her eyes without a blink wondering how can someone be so selfless and so pure at heart?
His eyes filled with tears, not for Adi but feeling the Ishita's pain.

Ishita shakes him asking "Kya hua raman? kya soch rahe ho? ab chalein? aapko office drop kardeti hu..." she tried to open the driver side car door when he pulled her out closing the car door.

Raman " Tum se kaha tha maine ki jab jhoot bolni aati nahi to kyun koshish karti ho?" saying so he gently touches at the corner of her eye area with his thumb which was still wet with tears.
Ishita is startled as she looks into his eyes.

Raman "Mujhe ye nahi pata ki Adi aur tumhare beech kya baat hui, par itna jaanta hu ki usne firse tumhari insult ki." He takes a deep breath as he steps back to free her from his hold and continues "Dekho Ishita, tumhe iss sabke beech padne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Adi mujhse nafrat karta hai aur main ye nahi chahta ki wo meri wajah se tumhari insult kare."

She tries to stay calm. "Raman, aapki pareshaani main shayad door na kar paon...lekhin aapka saath to de hi sakti hu na?" she tried to read his mind. "aur adi to bacha hai, isme uski koi galti nahi. Shagun ne bahut negativity bhar diya hai. par mera dil kehta hai ki ek din wo zaroor badal jayega."

Raman is moved by the selfless concern for his son Adi. She steps forward taking his hand in hers as she looks into his eyes and says "Hum dono saath me Adi ko ye ehsaas dilayende ki uske papa kitne ache hai aur usse kitna pyaar karte hai. Trust me"

Raman felt surprizingly happy at her words. Not because Adi will love him but her understanding his inner turmoil, standing by his side whether he needed or not and asking him to trust her which obviously he does.

Raman keeps his other hand over hers confidently looking into her eyes and says "Ishita, you don't need to say that. I trust you!"
She feels happy and they share an emotional eye lock.

[Feel free to imagine this bcg song playing at this scene...

Do alag alag dil ka...ek samjhauta tha...Teesere ke khaatir hua tha...]

Finally Raman breakes the eyelock, turning around to wipe his tears.
Ishita too wipes her tears and teases him "aap na bahut cute lagte ho...jab aap rote ho. ekdum Ruhi ki tarah"

Raman smiles as usual giving it back to her in his style " Zyada flirt karne ki zaroorat nahi mere saath. Tum thak nahi jaati mujhe pataane ke chakkar me? and plz...I'm not gonna fall for you to ye sab faaltu me apna time waste mat karo"

IShita narrows her eyes making an "hawww" expression with her mouth open. "kuch bhi? aap se flirt karne se acha hai main Siddhart malhotra ka daant saaf karti...kam se kam ek hot n handsome hunk ke saath kuch to chance maarti😆"

Raman is highly jealous, "Haan to jao na uske paas. Mere saath kyun aayi? aur waise bhi madam, tumhe mere alawa aur koi jhel bhi nahi sakta. samjhi?"

Ishita's heart was jumping with joy as she tried to maintain straight face infront of him. She could see it clearly written everywhere on his face that he was jealous and posessive of her.
Jhoote Jalkukdoo Bhalla-she smiled to herself.

Ishita thinks to use this chance to ignite his jealousy. She replies "Jhela to maine hai aapko. Aap jaisa akdoo aur khadoos aaj tak nahi dekha maine. Ab sochti hu to lagta hai, subbu bhi aapse behtar tha. kam se kam meri likes n dislikes ka to usko idea tha"


Raman couldn't take it anymore. What? She is comparing me with subbu? bewakoof aurat- he cursed her in his mind not realising how jealous and hurt he felt hearing his wife praise her ex-bf😆

Raman fakes his anger "behtar to sheila ki jawani thi tumse...kam se kam maths me zero to nahi milte the use tumhari tarah"
He failed at that, she knew it and so did he.
Ishita "uff...ye jalan...kitna jalte ho Jalan kumar...main to sirf mazak kar rahi thi. [pauses a bit] ...itna pyaar karte ho aap mujhse" she looks at him with smitten looks.

He blushes unknowingly. He feels his throat dry and his mind blank seeing Ishu's expressions. He just loses to her words happily as she looks on with a proud smile.


I know I'm not good at writing😆 hope it was not boring? plz leave your comments/suggestions/feedback.😳

Happy reading😛
Edited by ishra4ever - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely post.
pls do continue👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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...hey it is not boring...it is really good...such a nice...move of yest...epi...end...just wishing to see similar kind of thing in real...but pata hain...aisa nahi ho sakta...kyunki...rather than...solving their own things...they are still stuck to accident crap...jab tak ye solve nahi hota...we will not see...our ishra's progress to next level...but i guess...they will wind up the thing soon...but till that happens...u keep writing...UR BORING STUFF!...its better than than accident drama!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! It's beautiful Yaar. Amazingly written. I don't mind something like this on the show, even if Adi is rude to Ishita, Raman and Ishita could share a beautiful scene regarding that. Very well written :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this ws super amazingg cuteee!!! kya update tha yaarr!!! reallyy wishedd atleast bits and pieces of this OS is being used in the serial by CV's..
soo realll... im left speechless!! awesumm updatee!! *claps*

keepp continuingg.. eager to read moree!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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emotional n cute os..loved the ending...hope show mein bhi aisa ho coz lik u evn i DNT WANT adi angle to come before ishra confess their love to each other..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Madam, Ishra 4ever!!


Pl continue.
wanted to see how Ishra make Adi understand Raman;s true love for Adi.

Keep writing!!!!

Waiting for part 2!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's sweet how Ishita hid her tears and put a brave face for Raman and how Raman comforted her knowing very well what happened. The fact that they both are working together to change Adi is nice and I loved the end bit with Raman getting jealous of Siddharth Malhotra and Subbu!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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All emotions were beautifully expressed...liked it. 😃
Edited by Elita - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey very well written..
Loved it.
Haye raman aur ishita k taunts kabhi khatam ni hote..
Keep writing more... 👏

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