Young Love- A poem

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Young Love

Hi!! Here's Young Love, a dedication to AsYa of course. Here, Asad is the super hot hunk where Zoya is feeble and almost unnoticed. She's beautiful but Asad finds her mysterious. What happens when the superstar of college falls for the timid girl who is even scared to talk to him? To make it simple, Zoya has a crush on Asad and he knows about this :)

This one's for my amazing gal Farz :)

Written from Zoya's perspective

Our eyes met

But I broke contact

Couldn't stand your playfulness

Every cell in my body mortified.

I look back to you after minutes

I shut my eyes for I see you again

Looking at me like a predator

And your smirk makes it all worse.

Try and relax, I console myself

With new found courage I look up at you

I mutter a Hi, What's your name?

You stay there like that, making me vulnerable.

Your lips parted slowly

I noted every move you made

As if you don't know me, he said

Yeah, I mentally kicked myself, again.

I faked up a laugh and got up instantly ready to leave

Then you got up, held my wrist, making me stop

I was astonished, too hard to absorb

Consternated, I felt my heart just dropped.

Seemingly he said, I know what you think of me

What.The.Hell was all I could think of

Right then he smiled and leaned towards me

And husked, I like you too.

I gulped hard, sweat on my palms

My mind was crazily waving, I couldn't think

How I wish I could get a look of Panic Attack: 101

But, I just stood there baffled.

Pulse rising like water fountains

When we stood there like that

As if his presence was not enough to make me skittish

He kissed me on the cheek.

My mind unusually empty,

The cheesiness overcoming me

It feels like a dream, I say to myself

Now that he knows who I am.


How was it? Do let me know :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice, of course Asad's the hot hunk😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice n sute expression for AsYa <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You got me at


Our eyes met

But I broke contact

Couldn't stand your playfulness

Every cell in my body mortified



EVERY CELL IN MY BODY MORTIFIED




Like. HOW.



That is so. Real.


I could feel it in MY body. Like. HOW.


Oh goodness.



Skittish? I WAS FEELING THAT.



Oh he likes her too. Of course he likes her too.



OF COURSE!!


He belongs to her? ;)


Young love indeed Sparkle!


So sweetly done.


ANDYOUDEDICATEDITTOME????


WHY you so sweet? WHY!! Tell me, I demand answers!


You're a darling Sparkle, mwah from the bottom of my heart. And thank you thank you THANK YOU!!!


I love this.


And here I was thinking of a collab.


No way I could match something as sweet as you.


Hugs!


YouAWESOME!



Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: farz_parachute

You got me at


Our eyes met

But I broke contact

Couldn't stand your playfulness

Every cell in my body mortified



EVERY CELL IN MY BODY MORTIFIED




Like. HOW.



That is so. Real.


I could feel it in MY body. Like. HOW.


Oh goodness.



Skittish? I WAS FEELING THAT.



Oh he likes her too. Of course he likes her too.



OF COURSE!!


He belongs to her? ;)


Young love indeed Sparkle!


So sweetly done.


ANDYOUDEDICATEDITTOME????


WHY you so sweet? WHY!! Tell me, I demand answers!


You're a darling Sparkle, mwah from the bottom of my heart. And thank you thank you THANK YOU!!!


I love this.


And here I was thinking of a collab.


No way I could match something as sweet as you.


Hugs!


YouAWESOME!




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You don't know how sweet you are Farz! No way I could not have dedicated that to you! And yeah, the cell mortified, I actually was studying for my test and then I came up with this around 2 am in the morning lol!

Let's write something soon!

Miss ya, love ya, hugs and kisses muaaah! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 713_Sparkles


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You don't know how sweet you are Farz! No way I could not have dedicated that to you! And yeah, the cell mortified, I actually was studying for my test and then I came up with this around 2 am in the morning lol!

Let's write something soon!

Miss ya, love ya, hugs and kisses muaaah! <3


Oh let's let's let's!!!!!



😃😃😃






Heee
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was just so sweet n simple. Definitely felt like 'Young Love'
Very well written 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was very good

Loved it


You wrote it beautifully



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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was so cute
Loved it
Totally expressed the scene
Pls make another poem which is a sequel to this!!

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