I want mala to abandon them again..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Yes I know mala has spilled her past... Has gained sympathy from dilsher has admitted his fault..

I want the story to take a six month leap...where things are all hunky dory for parud.. Rudra has started warming up to his mother... Dilsher and mala are warming up to each other..

Paro Plans to get dilsher and mala to get married again to be together... Paro is new ly pregnant...

Everybody is happy... About it... Meanwhile tejawat strikes he captures mala ... Threatens her he will kill paro and her unborn kid if she doesn't meet him ... When she goes to meet him.. Tejawat kills off mala... And goes champ at with her body cremates her..

A letter is left at the haveli written that she was not cut out for the life ranavat house she has gone back to tejawat .. And they are going away abroad forever..

How is it... Rudra dilsher will again feel cheated abandoned... And the darkness in the story strikes...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice angle but I would like a few changes before the leap. Mala has to move out of Parud room. Mala and Dilsher have to apologise to Rudra for the mess they made and work together to rebuild the family. Rudra should get his honeymoon and we should get lots of romantic moments before the leap.

Tejawat comes to the haveli when Rudra is away on some errand and threatens to kill Mala for deserting him and Dilsher saves her and gets killed instead. That way we will have Rudra out for revenge.