OS: And All That Could Have Been

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

awesome one shot 👏

A very HAPPY BIRTHDAY Ragini. 🥳

May God Bless You and fulfill your every dream

I love your IPK Vms

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

As you know, I know next to nothing about Paro, Rudra or Laila.

What I do know however, is that I will always run over to wherever you are writing anything, because it's always worth it and more!

Beautifully written, and loved the ending. Only you can write this, bas.

Happy-waala birthday mubarak Ragini, and it's great to see you again!

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

^^^ Pretty much share expel's sentiments.

I brake my IF van-vas to cum read ur story.

As always short, sweet (saxy also!) and super powerful.

You pack a punch with your words bro.

👏👏👏 (NS)

I loved the subtlety and humour of it all.

CUM HEER AND GIVE ME MORE!

tfs.

res 5 eva.

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

I am on a train...with my husband next to me, immersed in his book...as i idly refresh the IF screen on my ipad...and suddenly exclaim,,,whattt???!!!

Making my husband look up...glance at my screen...and shake his head..muttering something about me and fanfictions...

But of course, i was shrieking with delight, having seen a story by semanti on the rr forum...

That was...sexy!! Sexily subtle i mean... Loved the way Paro communicated just with her eyes and her expressions...and Laila has no trouble understanding her...

These women share a weird bond...their love for the same man binding them together in hatred..but liked your twist..the almost-sympathy and the advice about the real world and its cruelties..

Hope you're going to write more... Please please please!!

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Vishkanya

@Vishkanya

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Found this story while stalking Ragini. And am I glad or what! This story is brilliant, subtle and full of wry humor. This very average show attracts some phenomenal talent. Still trying to wrap my head around that 😆

And kudos for smoking out Ragini Dhuaan Kumari. She is being a snob and refusing to fangirl with the masses 😛