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Posted: 11 years ago
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~Dream Girl~



Rey's P.O.V
(InDream)
I was walking, walking through a forest.
"Rey!" yelled a voice
"Where are you daddy?" yelled two other voices.
I ran towards the voices and I came to a field.
"Daddy! Daddy! Come on we're hungry!" Yelled the two voices.
I looked to my right and saw two children, one girl and one boy. They looked about 5 years old. They ran to me and when they reached me and pulled my arms leading me to a woman. I looked closer at the two kids and saw that they both had brown hair with bronze glints and midnight blue eyes. The only difference was that the little girl had long wavy hair, when the boy had short spiky hair.
When we reached the woman I saw her more clearer. She had long honey brown hair and emerald eyes.
"Your finally here! These two has been whining about wanting to eat for a long time!" The kids mom and I guess my wife here said.
We started to eat the sandwiches and the drinks that they had brought to this picnic. We all talked, laughed, and had a good time. Suddenly I felt something wet hit my head. I looked up at the sky and saw that it was starting to rain.
"rehan, kiara, get the raincoat and wrap it around yourselves." said my wife as she grabbed the picnic basket.
The three ran into the garden leaving me to run after them. I called out to them, but nobody responded. Suddenly I ran into a tree and blacked out.
End Of Dream
I quickly sat up, remembering my dream. I looked at the time and saw that I had to get ready for college. I put on a pair of jeans and plaid button up shirt. I grabbed my backpack and headed downstairs. I ate breakfast, put on my shoes, said goodbye to my dad, and headed out the door.
I was walking down the sidewalk with my eyes closed and then I bumped into someone.
"I'm so sorry!" I heard a familiar voice say.
I opened my eyes and saw a girl my age with honey brown hair and emerald eyes. It took me a while, but I realized that she was the person from my dream.
It Was Her.
"Yeah, sorry for bumping into you. My name is rey. Are your new here?" i asked
"Yup just moved here. I'm heading to my new class for my first day.'' she said
"Where are you going?"
"third year bcom.''
"How bout I show you there? Thats where i'm heading now."
"Really! Thank you!"
"Yeah of course. By the way what's your name?" I asked starting to walk.
"My name is kriya."
kriya huh.
Kriya.
Thats her name.
I smiled to myself and kept on walking.
Kriya is my dream girl...




So hows it...my first ever work...
please leave your reviews guys...that would help me know if i could proceed with the other story plot that i had in my mind...
all types of comments are welcomed.

Please read and review!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it.
Damn it was so cute.
Please if You Can aage likhna.
Nikki.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice.
Awesome update.
really different os.
loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very sweet one...
Do write more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey...tht was different nd awesOme...can u plz continue...Tht was really gud
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hayee awsm wrkk
continue and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cute os...

Dream girl...

I loved it...

U should write more...

Love Aditi...
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great and good os... lovely

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