Cherry Pop / OS / Edited

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OK I SWEAR I'LL TRY TO MAKE IT CONSIDERABLY LONG, SO ITS NOT A DRABBLE. No promises xD
This will be a cute-ish OS. (Sandhir of course)

"There was this guy and me
I never thought that we could have that chemistry
But he became the one to show me stars in the sky
That light up the night
My fantasy fell into something true
He put a spell on me under the moonlight
And I knew,
Now I can stop thinking 'bout that taste like cherry pop."
- CHERRY POP by Alexandra Stan.

+ + CHERRY POP + +

Randhir was beyond frustrated. Sanyukta was nowhere to be seen. Could it be any more obvious - Randhir's frustration?

"Uh, Kastuki," he called out to a confused Kaustuki.

"What is it?" she asked.

"Where.. Where's Sanyukta?" he asked, swallowing his pride.

"I don't know, why are you asking? You hate her, don't you?" she narrowed her eyes, disliking their last encounter where Randhir had scolded Kaustuki for asking him to stop troubling Sanyukta.

"I hate her, I just needed to see her for some, er, official work, Dream Team," he mumbled up an excuse and blurted it out.

By that, he hurried to the classroom.
Still no Sanyukta.

Could she have left for her engagement without telling anyone?
No, she couldn't have . . She shouldn't have. She didn't.


"Where is this silly girl. . ." he mumbled to himself and tried searching for her in the library.
No Sanyukta.

Rooftop.
No Sanyukta.

Mechanical Lab?
No Sanyukta.

Where else could she be? Even Kastuki didn't know. What if she actually left? Just like that?
No. He wouldn't let her. . . Right?

He tried every place, and failed to find her.
"Where else..." he thought to himself and it struck him; Girls' Hostel.

He rushed to the Hostel, and found her gluttoning on the boxes of candy, sweets and chocolate in front of her.

"There you are.. Who got you all this? Are you crazy? You know, you can die by excess of chocolate. It's a fact," he said and went upto her, snatching a chocolate box away from her.

"Zust shut up Randhiiir," she said between bits of the chocolate in her mouth.

"Sanyukta. Stop. Eating." He pulled her out of her bed, and took her to a side.

"This isn't good for you, silly girl," he said with intensity clear in his eyes.

"But it's - it's so good!" she said, eyeing an unopened box of chocolates.

"Who got you all this?" he said, jealousy already taking over the concern.

"Samir," she continued after recieving a glare from Randhir, "look, I don't like him, but his chocolates are good. I can't let them go to a waste, you know?"

"I don't care. Your mouth, and, erm, your lips, and your cheeks - even your hands. You're full of chocolate. That's enough for today," he scolded her.

"No, just a bit more Randhir, at least the Hazelnut one - oh my god," she said and sighed, obviously thinking of the sweet drug.

"No."

Even though he'd stopped her, she immediately jumped towards the chocolate and ate all of it in one bite. And the freaking chocolate had six blocks.

"Six blocks! Are you crazy? I'm calling Samir if you don't stop right now," he said and folded his arms around his chest.

"Don't. I'll stop, whatever," she surrendered and threw her arms in the air in disbelief.

"Good girl, now go join the team in the lab."

"Fine, let me just, clean this up," she said and ran to the bathroom with a change of clothes.

Now that she's gone... Randhir thought and grinned, looking right at her bed.

He immediately sat on the bed and started gobbling up all the chocolates on it, leaving no flavor behind.

I mean, who can resist, anyway?


+ + THE END + +

A/N: No actual Cherry Pop but cherry flavored chocolate counts right? xD
@Sanch - I swear I tried making it long xD

Feedback appreciated.
For more of my works, see my index in my signature box.

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Lil x



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Let me tell you one thing 😊 😊
YOU ARE AMONG THE BEST WRITERS OF THIS FORUM
love all of your works and this one is amazing too..👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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why lil,
ek din mein ek dose kafi hain 😉
you write such cutteeishh os..😊
they land me directly in sandhir dreamland ...how to return home after reading all these.

surely i will remember this os whenever i eat any chocolate now..😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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your ff'$ n os'$ r very interesting

I just love them
keep writing like this :) :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute n sweet as cherry pop😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lil
update ur ss...ur cliffies await u
oh my oh dear u r such a beaver builing d damn
such a creative thinkin u r blessd wid
u leave me speechless
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: manalee

why lil,

ek din mein ek dose kafi hain 😉
you write such cutteeishh os..😊
they land me directly in sandhir dreamland ...how to return home after reading all these.

surely i will remember this os whenever i eat any chocolate now..😃😃


I felt like writing today xD moods, you know.

Thank yoou :)
Sandhirland - I'm a permanent citizen *_*

Ahahaha me too I guess xD thanks

Originally posted by: Mansi13

Let me tell you one thing 😊 😊
YOU ARE AMONG THE BEST WRITERS OF THIS FORUM
love all of your works and this one is amazing too..👏 👏 👏


You flatter me :P I'm just leaning lol ^_^ thank you :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Na1na

upset now.

will read tomorrow.
sorry.
res


whats wrong?

cheer up, butter cup :P

Originally posted by: Gunseerat

lil
update ur ss...ur cliffies await u
oh my oh dear u r such a beaver builing d damn
such a creative thinkin u r blessd wid
u leave me speechless


I'll try to update one of them today xD Cliffies, I'm not sure you can get rid of those so easily :P
Thank you so much! xD this meant a LOT.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You're one of my favourite writers lil.
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^ I am? That's an honor xD thank yooou <3

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