As you can see, I tried something different in this VM by incorporated Tara's perspective of MJ's acts of omission and commission through scenes with full dialogues both at the start and the end of the VM (with the song playing at the background).
In this VM I also amalgamated the IPKKND sad song with the EBI's signature song which happened to be in the original scene. Do give your honest feedback.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U5fp6MsfVtY