DHOOP AAYE THO CHAON TUM LANA

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Posted: 11 years ago
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DHOOP AAYE THO,CHAON TUM LAANA

Or should I more appropriately say
SAANS JAAYE THO,,HAWAA BAN JAANA
What to do had to make the request...because after the milestone episode
HAWAA CHALI GAYI HAI, SAANS KAISE LOON

OHHH it has been MANY LONG HOURS SINCE THE EPISODE I suppose
But I am still under the hangover of the amazing dose
No, I will not limit the experience by classifying it as GUTTER
IT WAS MUCH MORE ETHEREAL IN ITS APPROACH N CHARACTER

IT WAS TOTALLY APT FOR OPENING THE MANY CLOSED SHUTTERS
Shutters of heart,, shutters of life,, Shutters of ISHQ,,
AND SHUTTERS OF A MAN AND HIS WIFE
Shutters which this closed man had constructed arnd his aura
Shutters which are opening automatically just by the mere light of her persona

Even God sitting up there was smiling his blush filled smile...
""THEY "" were somehow making him proud of the process he designed...

"""THEY""" who are making us cross the limit of our craze and junoon
THEY WHO HAVE BECAME THE MEDIUM TO SUKOON

AND OF COURSE
"THEY" WHO HAVE BECAME OUR VERY OWN WORLD OF FANTASY COCOON

With the magalsutra rightly placed at correct position,
Rudra closes in to get the fill of his long imagined destination.

Amidst the soulful sounds of the musical atmosphere,
He cups her face and makes it his """ TO BE FOCUSSED ON"" sphere

Your heart starts racing , the moment this man tilts his face in proposition,
Your breathing races super, the moment his eyes absorb her every beautiful admittance,

He closes in to create the mark of his love and respect,,
And you follow every inch like a gawking buffoon at total unrest,,

You imagine it to be lips, but it turns out to be the cheek
But do we consider it a miss, if we get to witness the kiss ******nahhh***

THEY ARE CREATING BEAUTY, WHEREVER MAY BE THE FOCAL POINT
THEY ARE MAKING LOVE,,EVERY PLACE OF MARK IS A MARVELLOUS SIGHT

THE KISS SO PASSIONATE,,THE KISS SO FULL OF LIFE
THE KISS SO LONG THAT U ARE QUIEVERING AT ITS MIGHT

Imagining the HABBAD DABBAD position of paro was so out of question,
When my own brain had stopped registering any fact and any worthy notion

Understanding his next all so apparent point of contact
Obviously she ran to get a breather from this sexiest sensation intact
****can we blame her,,,, If I was getting all heated up in my air-conditioned room , then obviously paro was standing in a desert with her ever so HAWTT groom ****
YOU LOVE HER MORE EACH DAY FOR THE SIMPLICITY OF HER WAYS
SHE IS ALL WHITE,BLACK AND GREY SHOO AWAY
****Paro is either sad , or she is happy,,,There is no in between,, and grey is just so unlucky****

TODAY , of course her happiness knew no bounds
TO BE ACCEPTED IN LOVE IS MORE STUNNING A THOUGHT, then all justifications around

HE has given yet another symbolic but not exactly verbal confession in his own trademark style
HE wanted to take it to the next obvious recourse with his scorching sexy invoice

She ran and he chased ,,damn lucky aangan to be witness of
So much heat to gaze and be dazed

YOU ALWAYS ADORE THE MOMENTS WHEN HE GRIPS HER IN POSSESSION
YOU ALWAYS SMILE IDIOOTICALLY WHEN HIS HANDS
ENCASE HER BETWEEN WALL AND HIS OWN BODY OF DESIROUS OBSESSION

Hans kyun rahi hai????
Kyunki aaj maine jaana aapke dil main kya hai... *****just love her full teeth waala hansi***
KYA HAI MERE DIL MAIN...
****OMGGG can he get any more guttrier than that...yes he can as he will so prove the very next instance*****

The way he said it was like BAAP OF ALL HINTS OF INVITATION ,,,
Cant fault paro if she lost her voice to the question.

HIS EYES WERE NAUGHTY,HIS BODY LANGUAGE WAS SUCH A SEXY TREAT
I WAS SO LOSING IT ALL AND YOU WERE FOLLOWING ME IN THE GUTTRIEST DEFEAT
AS for paro, what can we all say
She has suddenly registered the fact that today in hands of her lion,
she was the beautiful prey
*****HEHHEHEH I know it's the cheesy symbolism,, but what to do I am feeling cheesiest right now****

THEY WERE BOTH BREATHING HEAVY,
AND THE SYNC OF THEIR DHADKANS WAS MAKING US GO CRAZY
And those who remained sane the very next moment
Cant be called human amidst this blistering hawwwttt frenzy

He softly traced out the hair strand falling on her face
And her voice went from creaky to squeaky in this little yet so impactful interface
******OHHH,,AWWW,,,WOOOWWW I so love SANZ for doing these "bestest in the world"" VOICE ALL GONE enactments, only she could have added such a beautiful innocence to all this magnificently hawwttt interaction*****

Paro was trying soo hard to meet his confident and intense eyes
But her voice was failing her and her heart was looping against the choice

OHHH GIRLS...OHHH GIRLSSS
HOLD YOUR ALMOST GONE BREADTHS

What he did next was no less than sex between Waist and fingers at its best
Around the glory of beautiful n sexiest ever adornment
He played her on his tunes and she trembled under the fiery zest

IT WAS SO DAMN SYMBOLIC , IT WAS SO DAMN STUNNING
HE WAS JUST PLAIN RAW POSSESSION
AND SHE THE GLORIEST EVER SUBMISSION ,ALL SO DAZZLING

His hands reached her navel, and passion touched the top notch
If she was trembling hard,
then you could too feel the passion drowning you down to the guttriest coast

KYA HUA,,,AWAAZ KAHAN GAYI???

DAMN THIS TORCHEROUS MAN,,,DAMN HIS DAZZLING GAZE
DAMN HIS NAUGHTY QUESTIONS,,,DAMN HIS SEXY FACE

If his KYA HUA is enough for me to melt
His ''HUMM HUMM'' tht followed with eyebrows so admiringly rolled up
Is definitely my symbolism for death.

OHHH PARO,,,OHHH YOU BRAVEST GIRL
ONLY YOU COULD HAVE HANDLED THIS BLISTERING ITEM
WITH SUCH MAGNETIC THRILL

She was too scorched up by now,, by his ways of guttery procedure s
So she gained the voice back, pushed him a little
And finally confessed her words of radiant pleasures

AAPKO BHI MAIN PASAND HOON,MATLAB AAPKE DIL MAIN MHARE LIYE PYAAR HAI,,,

Awww cute baby and wow not so cute man **wink wink**

Her eyes were closed, his eyes were all searching
She was smiling internally, He was being radiant externally
She was feeling sudden relaxation, and he was getting proud at her reaction

JAB AAP PAAS AATE HAIN NA,HAMARI AWAAZ """GHUCHAD MUCHAAD"" HO JAATI HAI
*****hey bhaggu, bring me the dictionary of this girl, kabhi HABBAD DABBAD , kabhi GHCHAD MUCHAD, kabhi CHUSKI PHISKI,,, yeh mujhe lagti hai meri tarah rhymtically sanki and total KHISKI...HEHEHHEH****

IF WAIST ROMANCE WAS A NEW LESSON FOR THE INDIAN TELLY
THEN THEIR FOOT ROMANCE' CLOSLY FOLLOWS IN THE RACE TO GUTTERY GULLY

****hhehehhe, we are so in love with these sexy ever creatures in the world that even their feet appear like falling in the category of NEVER SEEN BEFORE" most beautiful feet of the world***

ISLIYE THO,,,, CHUP REHNA SEEKH

Ohhh this husky voice,, ahhh this wicked man
UFFF THIS DEVILISH COMMAND,,, damn the sexiest stance

DHOOP AAYE THO,CHAON TUM LANA

Awww,,,,,,what perfect lines to symbolize the perfect -ever KISS
***actually two kisses in a row"wow this man was on fire****

HE KISSED HER ON HIS EYES,AS IF SYMBOLIZING
YOU AND I WILL BE ONE' IN THE WORLD'S SIGHT
HE KISSED HER ON HIS EYES,AS IF SUGGESTING
YOU ARE MY BEAUTY TO ENTICE,I AM YOUR SOURCE OF RESPITE
HE KISSED HER ON HIS EYES,AS IF ASSURING HER
YOU MAY BE ALL NERVOUS TO THE WAYS OF ""SEX"""
I AM NOT SO CLEVER IN THE WAYS OF """LOVE "" TOO
YES,,,WE WILL MOVE ALONG, WE WILL STRIDE EVERY SHORE
OHHH MY DARLING BELOVED,,YOU JUST RELAX DOWN WITH THIS KISS
BCOZ YET THERE R MANY NEW HORIZONS TO CROSS

Ohhh the beauty of this show yet again overwhelmed
When paro understood the suggestion behind his purest attempt
SHE STOOD ASSURED,SHE STOOD RELAXED
AND SHE STOOD UNIQUE IN TAKING THE NEXT STEP

Paro cupping rudra's face , was such a glorifying high
She tiptoeing like a princess to smooch the calmest smooch on his forehead
Was such a rare sight

Her feet, his face, her lips and his closed eyes
All were emanating not only heat but purity of the love so astound
You needed to be brave to not blink around

*****Yes we have finally found a heroine at television, Who knows to be bold
Who is normal enough to suggest that "" I TOO CAN DESIRE ALONG""*****

Ohhh if u were still alive after all the 15 minutes of sheer RAW PASSION
Then what he did next was his way of DEATH SUGGESTION

He went down the face to the shoulder,
And your heart just sink with the curiosity matching a goner,

OHHH HE WAS UNIQUE TOO JUST LIKE HIS LADY
Bcoz when he blowed away to soothe
You felt like a mush with no chances to ever improve

IT WAS NOT A KISS AS EXPECTED BY MANY
BUT IT ENDED UP CREATING YET ANOTHER UNIQUESNESS ON TELLY

IT WAS SUCH A PRECIOUS MOMENT TO EVER STARE
IT IS SUCH AN AWESOME COUPLE TO NEVER EVER COMPARE

He came up to rub the cheek
and kantaas created resistance which brought in the remark by paro
and his sexiest ever GLEAM

YUP THEY ARE NOT ONLY SPECIAL BUT COMFORTABLE TOO NOW
THEY ARE THE BEST HUSBAND WIFE DUO MAKING YOU PROMINENTLY FEEL WOW

TAKING THE UNIQUENESS FLOW FAR AHEAD OF THE STANDARDS SET
WHAT PARO DID NEXT,HAS SO BECAME THE SIGN OF "PARUD DO IT BEST"

She grabbed his collar and stood on his feet ,,And you felt as if...
WHAT MUST HAVE I DONE RIGHT TO GET SUCH A TREAT"

They kept closing in ,,and we felt like melting by
If they had not been interrupted at a moment far too close then our imagination
Then we would had witnessed the HISTORY being made by

Still they have already created history of the BEST EVER FOREPLAY
It's a VERY normal thing to think
IF THIS IS HOW THEY PLAY,
WHAT WOULD HAPPEN IF THEY GET SERIOUS AT THIS DISPLAY

If foreplay is still tickling after the gaps of sooo many hours
The consummation will be my death for forever
THE COUPLE,THE WORLD , THE GOD AND HIS SCIENCE
THEY ALL WERE PRESENT IN THESE FEW MOMENTS OF SEDUCTIVE EVER ENTICE'

THEY WERE MAKING LOVE,WE WERE WATCHING GAWKED
THEY WERE BLOWING AIR, WE WERE BREATHING FLUMBOXED
THEY KISSED AND OUR EYES NEVER DID ANY MISS
THEY CREATED HISTORY AND WE WERE THE PROUDEST EVER WITNESS
IF HERE WAS A HERO WHO WAS ALL DESIRING
HERE WAS A HEROINE TOO WHO WAS EQUALLY MATCHING IN THE ASPIRING

Ohhh for those who r still reading
Let me just add these all too famous lines
Bcoz for me, these symbolize the moment best,,in all its glorious prime

LOVE WAS WHEN I LOVED YOU,ONE TRUE TIME I HOLD YOU
YOU ARE HERE IN MY HEART AND MY HEART WILL GO ON
NEAR FAR WHEREVER YOU ARE,YOU ARE HERE IN MY HEART
AND MY HEART WILL GO ON

Yet another set of lines MADE FOR PARUD only.

Edited by mansilovesarshi - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Me shayar to nahi,
Magar aye haseen,
Jabse MILI Rudra aur Paro se
Shayari aa gayi... 👍🏼
~EXO~
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, nicely written.. my favorite quote below

YOU ALWAYS ADORE THE MOMENTS WHEN HE GRIPS HER IN POSSESSION

YOU ALWAYS SMILE IDIOOTICALLY WHEN HIS HANDS

ENCASE HER BETWEEN WALL AND HIS OWN BODY OF DESIROUS OBSESSION

You nailed it!!! hahaha. 😆😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely post. 👏
Just like you I'm still not over this episode. Don't think I ever will be.
The lyrics at the end are so true for Parud.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing!! How do you write lines after lines of such great poetry! 👏
I know I know parud brought it out of you 😉


Great post...I'm sure the lovely episode is still on replay on a lot of screens 😉



Viji


Nafrat_Mohabbat thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg that is a looong post, but lovely!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just when I thought I recovered from Friday's epi, I read this post. Now I am back in PaRud land. 😆
Lovely post!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏 FAB post
Very well written

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow that was just bang on analysis loved it so so much.
u made me revisit the episode again.
Thanks a lot.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsm post mansi luv u ❤️

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