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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear...sasha's plan failed ...😃
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awesome update. thanks for updating
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Hello Di!
How are you? I am fine! Why dont you join me and Kittu on MG VM thread? We both are chatting there! Have been missing you for a while! Please come!😃
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Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Hello Di!
How are you? I am fine! Why dont you join me and Kittu on MG VM thread? We both are chatting there! Have been missing you for a while! Please come!😃


hiii BB
wii join bt give the link
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part 18-20
amazing update
n nice teaser...
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part 18-20
amazing update
n nice teaser...
loved it..

Thanks Di!😃
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Thank you!😳
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Announcement!
Will update in next few minutes!

(Posted this post to send the thread to next page as this is the last post in the page!😳)
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CHAPTER 21. KAHIN PYAAR TOH KAHIN DARD!

Rajji and Khushi waited till they reached Maan's cabin before they started bombarding the couple about how Maan proposed Geet. Geet smiled at them, "Arre! Bataati hoon! Bataati hoon! Sab bataati hoon! Zara saans toh le lo!" Both the girls quieted down and Geet opened her mouth to tell the story.

One Month Earlier...

"Maan? Maan! Aap mujhe kahaan le jaa rahe hain Maan?", Geet asked but Maan did not answer.

"Maan? Boliye na!", Geet pleaded but Maan did not budge.

Early in the morning, Maan had arrived at her door step asking her to come with him. She was of course surprised. It was 7 in the morning! But Maan had almost dragged her out and she was thankful that due to being from village Geet had the habit of taking bath and being ready before 7 or else she was sure Maan would not have given her chance to even change her pyjamas before dragging her. Hey Babaji! Agar mein night suit mein baahar nikli hoti toh? And then out came blindfold and her eyes were covered with it. And that is how Geet found herself getting out of the car with Maan's help with blindfold on her eyes and after driving for more than hour to some secluded place.

"Maan!", Geet whined.

Then, she felt Maan leave her hand and she stopped breathing.

"Maan!", she whispered softly.

Suddenly, she felt her feet leave the ground as Maan picked her up bridal style.

"MAAN!", Geet screamed in fear as she wrapped her arms around his neck.

Maan did not say anything but continued to walk. Geet finally decided to keep quiet as she realized that Maan was not going to say anything. She huffed and pouted while Maan smiled at her antics.

Geet suddenly felt as if Maan was climbing into something and she frowned. Suddenly, she felt the place where Maan was standing was moving and that shocked her. But how can the ground move? Maan put Geet back on her feet and then kissed her cheek. Geet smiled softly, "Maan?", she whispered shyly. She felt Maan go and stand behind her and slowly remove the blindfold. It took her few blinks to open her eyes fully but when she took the scenery in front of her, her eyes widened and her jaw dropped open. Maan hugged her from behind and whispered in her ear, "Geet!"

Geet could see nothing in front of her except the vast sky and the floating clouds and when her eyes looked below, she saw the earth but her feet were miles above it. She looked around in surprise. She was in an air balloon! Maan had carried her into an air balloon. And now they were floating in the air!

Geet turned sideways and looked at Maan with surprise. Maan smiled tenderly at her, "Kaisa laga mera surprise?" Geet smiled back softly. She turned and leaned back into Maan's chest. Both remained silent as they observed the sky from high above.

After a while, Maan got a message on his mobile which he read and smirked.

"Geet! Tum jaanti ho jab se tum meri zindagi mein aayi ho, mujhe duniya aisi hi khoobsurat lag rahi hai jaise aaj ka yeh nazaara!", Maan whispered softly and Geet blushed.

Maan tightened his hold on her and placed a kiss on her cheek, "Kya tum zindagi bhar meri zindagi ko aise hi khoobsurat banaaogi?" Geet frowned and looked toward him, "Matlab?"

Maan raised his hand and pointed towards the sky and Geet turned back and looked curiously. Her curiosity gave way to surprise and wonder as a plane flew in the air with fog coming from its tail end. It was a skywriting plane. The plane flew and wrote on the sky, "WILL YOU MARRY ME?"

Geet stopped breathing for a second and Maan had to nudge her to blink. "Maa...", Geet trailed off as if unable to say anything. Maan smiled smugly. He did it! He had stupefied Geet into silence.

Maan continued to smile and slowly spoke, "Geet! Kuch bologi nahi?"

Geet shook her head.

"Nahi? Matlab tumhaara answer No hai?", Maan frowned at her.

Maan's words penetrated Geet's brain and she looked at Maan in alarm. "Nahi!", she nearly squealed, "Matlab Haan! Nahi nahi! Mera matlab hai ki..." Maan cut her off as he burst out laughing.

Geet huffed and slapped Maan's arm. Then she pouted, folded her arms against her chest and turned away. Maan's laugh petered out and he smiled at the cute adorable face Geet was making. He hugged her from back but she wiggled out of his grasp. Maan sighed at her anger and grabbed her arm and turned her around. Geet looked sideways not wanting to face him.

Maan placed a finger under her chin and tugged her face up. She looked at him angrily and Maan spoke, "Toh kaho Geet! Banogi meri jeevan saathi? Rahogi mere saath, meri banke zindagi bhar?" Geet blushed at his words and hugged him tightly, hiding her face in his chest. Maan chuckled, "Geet! Yeh mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi hua!"

Geet took a deep breath and pulled away from Maan. She stood on tip toes and placed a kiss on his cheek, her lips lingering on his cheek for a second more before she pulled away.

"Haan!", Geet replied softly.

That single word was enough for Maan and he pulled her to him as he hugged her tightly.

"I Love you Geet!", Maan whispered and even though he had said it many times to Geet, all thanks to Rajji's condition of saying the words ten times in a day, Geet realized that the words seemed special today. She softly whispered the words back and Maan's grip on her tightened. Soon they pulled away and Maan pulled out a ring box out of his pocket. He opened it and Geet gasped at the diamond ring in it. It was simple and yet elegant. She raised her hand and Maan slowly and lovingly slid the ring in. They shared their first hug as engaged couple and continued to spend the morning in each others' arms while the balloon floated in the sky.

"Oh wow! Kitna romantic proposal tha Veerji!", Khushi spoke up in awe bringing Geet out of her memories. She blushed at Khushi's reaction while Maan seemed amused at Khushi's reaction. Khushi, Geet and Rajji were seated on the sofa in Maan's cabin while Maan was leaning against the table with arms folded against his chest and ankles crossed and having an amused expression on his face.

Geet looked over at Rajji expecting the same expression on her face as on Khushi's face. But Geet was surprised to see Rajji pouting with her arms crossed against her chest. She gave Geet a glare and looked away. Geet was confused, "Rajji! Tu khush nahi hai meri sagaai ke baare mein sunke?"

Rajji uncrossed her arms and huffed, "Khush! Khush kaise ho jaaun? Kitne sapne dekhe the maine aapki sagaai ke! Ki aap aur Jiju saj dhajkar aayenge! Sabke saamne ek doosre ko anguthi pehnaayenge! Thoda naach gaana hoga! Lekin aap log? Aap logon ne toh mere saare sapne ko chaknachoor kar diya!"

Rajji sniffed for few seconds and Maan and Geet exchanged amused glances.

"Woh sahi keh rahi hai!", Khushi spoke up making Maan and Geet look at her in wonder.

Noticing their glances, Khushi continued, "Haan! Humne bhi aise sapne dekhe the! Humein bhi aap dono ki sagaai dekhni thi! Humein toh apne friends se apni hone waali Bhabhi ko introduce karwaana tha! Lekin aap log..."

Rajji and Khushi pouted simultaneously making Maan roll his eyes and Geet giggle.

Khushi noticed their reactions and glared at them, "Aap dono ko yahi lag raha haina ki hum dono mazaak kar rahe hain?"

She stood up and placed her hands on her hips, "Toh sun lijiye! Hum dono ko ek engagement party chaahiye! Aur wahaan aap dono hindustaniyon ki tarah rings exchange karenge! Yeh foreign waala propose nahi chaahiye humein! Ek Indian style sagaai chaahiye! Kyun Rajji?"

The question was directed to Rajji who nodded. She went and stood beside Khushi with her hands on her hips mirroring Khushi, "Khushi Di theek keh rahi hai! Humein Hindustani reeti riwaaj waali sagaai chaahiye!"

Maan shook his head at their antics and looked at Geet questioningly. Geet shrugged and smiled. Maan nodded and turned back to the girls, "Theek hai! Tumhein tumhaari Hindustani sagaai milegi! Date, time aur arrangements tum dono dekho! Hum time pe haazir ho jaayenge!"

Both girls cheered loudly and high-fived each other. They gave Maan and Geet hugs and walked out of the cabin discussing amongst each other on how and when to plan the party. Maan and Geet shook their heads amusedly the girls' antics and got back to their work.

Arnav had woken up in the morning with headache and hangover. After calling in sick and staying in bed till noon, he had to get moving when his sister came in to scold him for drinking so much. After hearing to a good lecture delivered by Anjali, Arnav freshened up and went downstairs to eat. But he could not eat and ended up playing with his food as he was reminded of the last night events. Hence, after eating enough to satisfy his Di, Arnav headed to his sanctuary, the pool side trying to divert himself by taking care of his plants. But the memories of the night continued to assault his mind. Khushi's words continued to haunt him alongside the almost kiss.

What would have happened if Annie hadn't interrupted them? Would they have kissed? And how Khushi would have reacted to it? Annie had already called him number of times till now but he had simply ignored her calls as he knew that she would bring up the last nights events and Arnav was not interested in listening to her lecture about how Khushi did not deserve him. He did not want to hear her say the words after the lashing out he had already gotten from Khushi.

In the evening, his sister came into his room asking him to watch the evening news. He started the TV and came across the announcement of Maan and Geet's engagement. Arnav felt irrationally jealous of Maan. Maan had everything. He got the love of his life! His love did not reject him! His love did not break his heart! Why? Why me? I followed her for years and what did I get? Nothing! Why?

Unable to handle the pain of loosing Khushi, he took the keys of his car and walked out of the room and the house.

Arnav drove around for hours but the words Khushi had thrown at him haunted him at every turn. "Aapne humein samjha kya hai? Koi khilona? Chalo dekhte hain jalan ki chaabi ghumaaye toh kya hota hai?" Arnav shook his head trying to get her words out of his head but her words did not leave his head. "Hum aapse aakhri baar keh rahe hain! Hum aapse pyaar nahi karte aur naahi kabhi karenge! Aur agar in dino mein humaare dil ne aapke liye kuch bhi mehsoos kiya ho, aaj aapke iss plan ko jaankar sab khatam hogaya!"

Sab kyun khatam hogaya Khushi? Kyun? Maana maine galat kiya hai! Lekin mujhe itni badi sazaa mat do, please! Arnav pleaded in his mind but he still saw Khushi in his mind's eye shouting at him, "Humein bhool jaayiye! I don't love you!"

Arnav's hand struck on the radio and it started to belt out some song. Arnav drove as fast as he could, wanting to get Khushi and her words out of his head.

Tanhaayi...

Arnav took a deep breath as the words of the song washed over him.

Tanhaayi...

Arnav stopped the car and he got out of it.

Dil Ke Raaste Mein Kaisi Thokar Maine Khaayi

Toote Khwaab Saare Ek Maayusi Hai Chaayi

Arnav stumbled few steps ahead as he realized that he had lost Khushi for good.

Har Khushi So Gayi

Zindagi Kho Gayi

Tumko Jo Pyaar Kiya Maine Toh Sazaa Mein Paayi

Arnav's knees buckled and he fell to the floor.

Tanhaayi Tanhaayi

Meelon Hai Faili Hui Tanhaayi

Tanhaayi Tanhaayi

Meelon Hai Faili Hui Tanhaayi

Arnav closed his eyes as tears welled up in them. Her words again reverberated in his mind.

"Aapne humein samjha kya hai? Koi khilona? Chalo dekhte hain jalan ki chaabi ghumaaye toh kya hota hai?"

"Hum aapse aakhri baar keh rahe hain! Hum aapse pyaar nahi karte aur naahi kabhi karenge! Aur agar in dino mein humaare dil ne aapke liye kuch bhi mehsoos kiya ho, aaj aapke iss plan ko jaankar sab khatam hogaya!"

"Humein bhool jaayiye! I don't love you!"

Khwaab Mein Dekha Tha Ek Aanchal Maine Apne Haathon Mein

Arnav remembered the first time he met her on her College Fashion Show as the Judge of the show.

Ab Toote Sapno Ke Sheeshe Chubte Hain In Aankhon Mein

He remembered the smile she gave him when he handed the winner's trophy to her.

Khwaab Mein Dekha Tha Ek Aanchal Maine Apne Haathon Mein

Ab Toote Sapno Ke Sheeshe Chubte Hain In Aankhon Mein

He remembered the way she rejected him the first time years back.

Kal Koyi

Tha Yahin

Ab Koi

Bhi Nahin

Khushi! Please come back to me! Arnav pleaded in his mind.

Banke Naagin Jaise Hai Saanson Mein Lehraayi

Tanhaayi Tanhaayi

Palko Pe Kitne Aansoo Hai Laayi

He wiped the tears away from his eyes but they refused to stop and continued to flow.

Tanhaayi Tanhaayi

Palko Pe Kitne Aansoo Hai Laayi

Arnav closed his eyes as the image he saw in the evening crossed his mind's eye. It was of Maan and Geet smiling at the camera while Geet showed off her engagement ring. Kyun? Mujhe mera pyaar nahi mil saka? Kyun? Kya mujhe khush hone ka koi haq nahi? Phir kyun?

Kyun Aisi Ummeed Ki Maine Jo Aise Naakaam Hui

Kyun mujhe meri Khushi nahi mil sakti? Kyun?

Door Banaayi Thi Manzil Toh Raste Mein Hi Shaam Hui

Khushi please! Please mujhe maaf kar do! Arnav pleaded as he sat on the road leaning on his car.

Kyun Aisi Ummeed Ki Maine Jo Aise Naakaam Hui

Door Banaayi Thi Manzil Toh Raste Mein Hi Shaam Hui

He closed his eyes as he remembered the way Khushi pushed him away.

Ab Kahaan

Jaaun Main

Kisko Samjhaaun Main

His covered his ears as her words echoed in his head, "I Don't Love you!"

Kya Maine Chaaha Tha Aur Kyun Kismat Main Aayi

Tanhaayi Tanhaayi

Jaise Andhero Ki Ho Gehraayi

He opened his eyes and looked around. He was surrounded by nothing but darkness and it seemed his life will also be filled with darkness from now on.

Tanhaayi Tanhaayi

Jaise Andhero Ki Ho Gehraayi

He hid his face behind his arm as he remembered the almost kiss.

Dil Ke Raaste Mein Kaisi Thokar Maine Khaayi

Toote Khwaab Saare Ek Maayusi Hai Chaayi

Kyun mujhe itni badi sazaa di Khushi? Kyun?

Tumko Jo Pyaar Kiya Maine Toh Sazaa Mein Paayi

Tanhaayi Tanhaayi

Meelon Hai Faili Hui Tanhaayi

Tanhaayi Tanhaayi

Meelon Hai Faili Hui Tanhaayi

Tanhaayi...

Tanhaayi...

Tanhaayi...

Tanhaayi...

An hour later, Arnav's phone rang.

Still sitting on the middle of the road, leaning against his car, Arnav answered the phone.

"Hello!", Arnav spoke in despondent voice.

As he listened, his face took on the expression of being alarmed.

"Kya? Kab?", Arnav asked as he wiped the tears from his face, his face showing devastation.

As he listened to the person on the other side of the phone, Arnav scrambled up from the floor and ran towards the car.

He sat in and drove off.

Precap: Accident! But whose?

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oyye kya roller coaster tha ji
not only did we have lighter and romantic moments with maneet
but dark and depressing for arhi
or more like aru
so this is how they got engaged
awww so cute
i loved that proposal man
haiyye what a way to propose
wait he gave her surprise and shock both
with he way he proposed right
of course he did
well whats some lovely surprise
wouldnt mind such surprises myself you see
haiyye that could be any woman dream proposal
provided they aint afraid of heights
that would be disastrous
but that wasnt case for geet thankfully
awww he took her for air balloon ride
popped the question in such romantic manner
a plane huh awww
haiyye main huyi fida for sure
she said no and then yes and then was confused
not to forget mad at him
but it worked out in the end
that was funny though
the way he was pulling her leg
awww khushi and rajji were fascinated
but they want a proper engagement ceremony for maneet
and they are right to want that
after all they must have so many dreams for their engagement
only fair that maneet listen to them
so maneet engagement plans all done
but arhi oh man inki love story nahin badh rahi
its still at the same stage
even with that whole jealousy plan failed
and so much so that he is borken again
who says you dont deserve to be loved
you do and you will be
but it seems yours will take time
even maneet might have under different circumstances
but dont compare to them yaar
tera matter hi different hai
plus aap ne jo mahanta dikhayi thi naa initially sab uska nateeja hai boss
he wasnt to know naa that khushi wont fall for his ASRness now will she
even geet fell for her saviour maan not MSK
so be her arnavji and she will be yours
but who was in an accident
was it khushi or maneet
well guess will have to wait for that now curses hate waiting so impatient me
anyway it was hard to see aru like this
so broken and dejected
with what happened the night before flashing in fron of his eyes
the almost kiss
khushi heart breaking words
but there will be silver lining for him too
he will have to wait for it though it seems such pity that
well lets see what next
cheers for pm
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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