RAGNA OS-YOU ARE MINE (part 4 -last part updated page 6)NOTE PAGE 7

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incredible96

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Posted: 11 years ago

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fab os!! excellent! loved it! you should write some more! :) lol i told you wont get rid of me that easily! :P

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Mihika

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: incredible96
fab os!! excellent! loved it! you should write some more! :) lol i told you wont get rid of me that easily! :P

i don want to get rid of u either dear😆😉

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Minnie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hey, I loved your OS. the concept is beautiful.

it was just little rushed in. with some more detailed work it would be awesome. it had emotions and heat so it was easy to connect n picturize. can't wait to read more from u.

grammar check/editing would be good.

how do I find your other works?

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Mihika

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: spontaneousmini
hey, I loved your OS. the concept is beautiful.
it was just little rushed in. with some more detailed work it would be awesome. it had emotions and heat so it was easy to connect n picturize. can't wait to read more from u.
grammar check/editing would be good.
how do I find your other works?

thank you so much dear and i wud definitely work on making the thing in more detail.😛 i have an ff also that is daastan-e-ishq..its on ragna hope u like it😊 this os was my first attempt and ff is second😉

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