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Vishi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hola guys 😎
Here I am with another story..
Just concept clicked my mind so can't resist myself from writing a story.. 😛
Warning you right in the
beginning I am not a writer 😛
I write only for entertainment purpose 😉
So Plz be patient while reading this story...
This one is going to be a passionate and at times
Thriller 😎

NOTE: All the names,places,people,things,themes,sequences and situations ..everything used in the story are purely fiction...
Resemblance to any kind of reel or real things is just purely coincidence..and yes the continuation of my story will totally depends on the number of comments I get.. 😛
Sorry If I sound rude but its fact 😎

Well I am not going to give any sort of character sketch for the story.. 😛
So I am gonna start this with a Prologue..
Please kindly ignore the
Typo mistakes..

Hit Like & Buddy Me if you want PMs 😛

Edited by Barbievishi20 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Index-
Prologue- Page 1
Chapter 1 - Page 6
Chapter 2 - Page 9
Chapter 3 - Page 11
Chapter 4- Page 13

Edited by Barbievishi20 - 11 years ago

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Vishi-

@Vishi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

Prologue~
One snowy night in Manali after violin practice
Avni's driver forgot to come and pick her up.
Avni ended up having to walk home in the
dark, with a small coat as the only thing to keep
her warm. She accidentally took the wrong
route home and ended up in a creepy alley.
She was about to leave when she heard police
sirens.
Avni's eyes widen with fear. She started
running, but soon ran into a dark hard figure and
fell on her bottom. She looked up and seen a
young man. The man helped up quickly and
whisper to her quietly, "Tell no one you saw
me. Okay?"
She was speechless, distracted by his beautiful
Lightning eyes. "I said tell no you saw me. Okay?"
He said with a little more force in his voice. All she could do was nod, scared she was going to get hurt. He quickly ran off as soon as he seen her nod, not wasting any time of getting away.
As soon as Avni turned around she was met with a police car. She watched as two
policemen came up to her. One of the men
pulled out a picture of a boy, she looked closely
at the picture and realized it was a picture of the boy she just saw.
"Have you seen this man?" The other
policeman asked she shook her head, "No I
haven't sir." She didn't feel right about telling a
lie, but she couldn't risk seeing the boy with
the lightning eyes get in trouble.
"Alright Girl. You should be getting home
soon. It's freezing out here!" One of the cop
told her, she nodded quickly and started
running home, not wanting to be caught in
anymore drama. As soon as she made it home her elder step brother Dhruv yelled at her calling her the most
awful names which can pinch her heart.
"I'm sorry that I had to run home in the
Snowfall because our driver forgot to
pick me up!" Avni yelled at her brother Dhruv,
gaining slight confidence. She was sick of her step brother doing this. Getting drunk and yelling at
her.
She grabed her things & went inside her room. As soon as
she got in she shut and locked the door before
throwing herself on the bed.
That night Avni fell asleep quietly sobbing,
and thinking of the lightning eyed boy.

Edited by Barbievishi20 - 11 years ago

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nini06

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Posted: 11 years ago

wohooo...⭐️ i luv this suprise..!!👏

u rock baby doll..!!🥳

amazing ff..!!⭐️

perfect mixture of thrill n romance..!!

with dash of comedy (which is bound to happen..)..!!😉

luv u loadzz..!😳

muah..:*..!!🤗

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Vishi-

@Vishi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nini06
wohooo...⭐️ i luv this suprise..!!👏
u rock baby doll..!!🥳
amazing ff..!!⭐️
perfect mixture of thrill n romance..!!
with dash of comedy (which is bound to happen..)..!!😉
luv u loadzz..!😳
muah..:*..!!🤗

Aww Thankyou wala Thankyou my LNI 🤗 ❤️
Yes its thriller but comedy nai hoga isme 😎
Glad you liked concept 😳 😊

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771047

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow.. super duper awesome.. loved it completely.. cant wait to read the next chappy..

Intro was hillarious but when I started reading the Prologue.. my heatbeat was moving fast.. haaye AvRaj cemetery scene.. yaad aagaya..

Vishu.. my 12/10 stars .. more then awesome..

⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️/10

Jaldi se update karo.. 😆

//SammyExpress!!

Edited by Sammy11 - 11 years ago

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nini06

@nini06

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20
Aww Thankyou wala Thankyou my LNI 🤗 ❤️
Yes its thriller but comedy nai hoga isme 😎
Glad you liked concept 😳 😊

awiiie...bada wala welcum baby doll😳😳

sachme me baby doll a post with no comedy

i didnt liked it i luved it❤️

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Vishi-

@Vishi-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sammy11
Wow.. super duper awesome.. loved it completely.. cant wait to read the next chappy..

Intro was hillarious but when I started reading the Prologue.. my heatbeat was moving fast.. haaye AvRaj cemetery scene.. yaad aagaya..

Vishu.. my 12/10 stars .. more then awesome..

⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️/10

Jaldi se update karo..😆

//SammyExpress!!

Yay was waiting for your reply 🤗
into bilkul jhakaas dena para 😎
glad u loved concept ❤️
Will try to update 1st chapter soonish 😳
Thinking to release teaser 1st 🤔
Lets see war m gnna do 😕 😃
Yay Thanks a ton... u always motivate me with ur ratings & stars & super awesome conments 😳 😳
Love you tons ❤️