Shattered Dreams - Authors Note Pg 111 :)) - Page 62

Created

Last reply

Replies

799

Views

117.4k

Users

119

Likes

1.4k

Frequent Posters

Loquacious_Aash thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinu127

res

hey bhagwan! maine last chapter ka response abb tak unres nahi kiya aur aapne next chapter update bhi kar diya!
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
sab se pehle..cholly..
this will be a joint reply for 2 chapters n that too a short one...
so sorry

isme sorry kyu😕 jitna mann me aya wo likho.. zaroori nahi ke pages bharne hai.. ye 10 marks LAQ nahi hai 🤣
CHP 7
accha hua u told the meaning ofkun fayakunn.. warna i shld hav googled it!😆

i am soo good😉😎

Dint my love mean anything to you Zain? Mere pyaar pe bharosa kyu nahi kiya tumne?" god this line! how pained aliya is! i can't imagine her like this😭
Riz is a true friend! he handled his bhabi and her family and Zain! he acted like a 🐷 only!no wonder aliya considers hima s her bro!

tu apne zain jiju ke bare me aisa boling😲

aliya is going to Pune???not too far from mumbai so ok!
its good she decided not to bhopal! no need of melodrama!🤢

teri khwaish puri karti hu 😈


CHP 8
aliya's dilemma has been so well potrayed
i'm glad she decided to tell him
i doubt if she will be able to!
esp seeing him part in a club!

🤔 kyu

that bakbak-no comments.. mujhe gaaliya type nahi karni hai!
zain! pata nahi kya kahu uske baare me! behen pyaar karna chahiye lekin itna?
yaar kholo apne aankhon ko!
ur heart noes aliya can never be wrong listen to it!

wonderfully written di👏👏👏
i loved this!
the end is a ray of hope for me!

thank u 😃

eagerly waiting to see what has led to it or what it leads to
luv u di
n cholly for late n short comment

Loquacious_Aash thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Harmony...

My sweet sweet friend... once again you have outdone yourself... this chapter was totally brilliant...


First time anyone has EVER called me sweet😳🤔 having mixed feelings 😛

Aaliya's struggle to take right decision was shown so aptly... She was torn between her inner woman who was humiliated and hurt by his husband and family; and the mother who wants her child to have all love of his father. I am really proud of her that she decided to tell about her pregnancy to Zain.
Coming to Rizwan, he is a great friend to both Aaliya and Zain, he is definitely a precious gem that Zaya has opportunity to have in life. Loved that he helped Aaliya to come to the right decision about telling Zain.

U know friends imporatnce in life now right😉

Now Zain... good god... seriously he digging his pit deeper and deeper by each passing day. He is so gonna regret his every action. Seriously some times i feel really angry for him.. but sometime i feel great amount of pity. He has now lost not only his life, his love but he is going to lose his chance to cherish his child too...

yes😭 poor baby 😭

Now coming to Bawdi ki Bawli Barkat... man... she is such a b****. She can rot in hell for all i care. I really hope she find her hell once everything comes out in front of every one.
Now coming to the very last part of your chapter... babe... what a cliffhanger 😛 .. you left us readers lost 😆😆😆.

was trying to😆

But since till now it has been angsty; i am predicting using my sadist mind.
So according to me, it was not Zain who messaged but Barkat to Aaliya to come to the club. and when Aaliya would have went there, she must have seen Zain enjoying himself with drinks and girls, and she must have come to decision finally, if he doesn't care at all, why she must be bothered to tell him.
Now, the part where he woke up next morning and reached for other side of bed.. God help me.. if he turned casanova and start doing one nightstands. I will kill him.. Already he has done so many wrong, i really don't want him to turn in casanova.

🤔🤣

Well i have guessed the worst, and like most of the time i really hope it does not happen.
Love
Nitz



🤗
Acidity thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
m back... *ran to read the update*
jazmeen thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Oh damn so she saw him with another girl who he thought was aliya in drunk state
Plzzz update sooon
Loquacious_Aash thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazmeen

Oh damn so she saw him with another girl who he thought was aliya in drunk state

Plzzz update sooon


Girl?😕 Drunk🤔

Keep guessing😉😆


Thank U 😃
Loquacious_Aash thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago


THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.


ZayaShiz thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
res!!!😃
unres!!
yay m first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
this is getting more n more interesting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cannot wait now...plz update next one soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
n its awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!this part...aliya..our strong princess😳
Edited by ZayaShiz - 11 years ago
Jyo. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
I am sorry for disappearing. Res-ing for now. Be back on the 24th :)
Laila_Shiri_Lee thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Every update always manages to make me cry..hats of to ur skills..please update the next part much faster..and I very eager to find out about what happened that night..what did zain do?? I think that he probably very close to another girl..aaliya might have seen him kissing another girl I think..hmmm very eager and exited for the next update..
vinu127 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres

lagata hai aap ne
ek se badkar ek update hina chahiye!
this was brilliant
zain toh pukka 🐷 jaise act kiya hoga!
(but don't even think i'm angry with him and will scold him.. sab uss BB ki kaam hai i noe!)
but aliya is hurt!
bhopal-melodrama.. shabana se aur expect bhi kya karoon!
Riz is such a swt hrt. a true friend, a true brother
accha hua he hired the detective
aliya is truly a special creation!
she got nothing from that house but cannot let it be destroyed!
sar pe bithau ya thappad lagau Offo!
i'm glad she is in mumbai and Khala maa is with her...
though pune is not far, mumbai makes me feel better somehow
and how bad she would be feeling when she sees the kid's fathers pampering them na!
abb mujhe zain ki part padna hai jaldi se..
i want to noe what exactly happened!
and the haiders are truly amazing! they sent back the 12 lakhs👏👏
next update fireworks? yaani bakbak ki exit? abb toh wahi bacha hai na😆
uske baadshuru hogi asli kahaani😉
i'm lovin this

actually i need to ask u..
kis cement ya concrete ki bani ho yaar?
u write so damn well
its like i'm reading the screenplay.. i can imagine each expression
kudos to u👏
thank u for such a lovely update
Edited by vinu127 - 11 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".