Sandhir FS: Broken Souls(Dark & Mature) Last Part- Page-20, Epil-P

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Sumedha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

awesome...
itni jaldi khatam????
muze laga tha aur parts honge...
anyways ur full story was awesome
I luvd it...

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Avni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

res

unres

aftr reading this part ,i feel to cry 😭 😭
how much Randhir & Sanyukta had to go through in their life😭
this story was completely differnt from alll which i have read,this ws d one which made me 😭
hats of to u girl👏
fr such a imagination & for penning it down soo beautifully👏
will love to read more of ur wrks in future😳

love
avni🤗

Edited by avniarpitha - 11 years ago

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Pariha khanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

phew ... do u even know kitna bara risk lekar tumhara update padhne aayi hu ? gawd i am glad that u kept ur promise and gave it a HAPPY ENDING .. i love happy endings .. IF khola hai abhi bas ye ek FS padne ko literally apne bestie se laad kar aa rahi hu but the update was WORTH IT ek ek paisa wasool ho gaya

YAY !! he said he loves her xxx

but please ? can u continue it ? please ??

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Mariya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Superb chapters. Sanyal and Agarwal were brainless creatures, thank God they faced such cruel deaths. Hope you'll start something new very soon. Lots of love xxx

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reet21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: avniarpitha
res

unres

aftr reading this part ,i feel to cry 😭 😭
how much Randhir & Sanyukta had to go through in their life😭
this story was completely differnt from alll which i have read,this ws d one which made me 😭
hats of to u girl👏
fr such a imagination & for penning it down soo beautifully👏
will love to read more of ur wrks in future😳

love
avni🤗

thanks a lot dear...

you liked it.i am overwhelmed...

i really feel good when i find atleats some people who love my work, those encourage me to write more...

will try to write in july...

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reet21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: maths_geek
phew ... do u even know kitna bara risk lekar tumhara update padhne aayi hu ? gawd i am glad that u kept ur promise and gave it a HAPPY ENDING .. i love happy endings .. IF khola hai abhi bas ye ek FS padne ko literally apne bestie se laad kar aa rahi hu but the update was WORTH IT ek ek paisa wasool ho gaya
YAY !! he said he loves her xxx

but please ? can u continue it ? please ??

so paisa wasool ho gya? ab mera bhi karwa do...

you know what i demand...

an update...

u liked it, i am happy

thanks a lot dear...

i too love happy endings...always...

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reet21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran
Superb chapters. Sanyal and Agarwal were brainless creatures, thank God they faced such cruel deaths. Hope you'll start something new very soon. Lots of love xxx

yup, you are right, such people really exist in real life too...

will try to write soon

thanks a lot dear

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reet21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Ok, its a crap now...my brain is washed now after typing a lot since morning...but as i have to leave early morning.

so this is last one...

for perfect happy ending...

Epilogue

The very next day,

The caretakers of Shekhawat villa were shocked...Their owner knows to smile too? Not even smile but laugh too...

When Randhir and Sanyukta came downstairs hand in hand, had breakfast together...

Randhir had been to hospital with Sanyukta and met Mum... Anju was on clouds when she listened Mum form Randhir after years...she asked him sorry for her husband's deeds but Randhir brushed it off saying all his pain is vanished when his sandy and Mum are with him now.

Sanyukta was now staying in hospital most of the times at day with her mum while Randhir used to drop and pick her up morning and evening.

After one month, anju got discharged from hospital when Randhir had brought her to Shekhawat villa...

Soon she was fine, she called them both...

Randhir, Sanyu, fulfill my one wish...she looked at them...

They looked at her...yes mum...

Get married... I want to see you both always together...she held their hands...

They both looked at each other smiling and hugged their mum...

And Sanyukta was surprised, when suddenly Randhir slipped a diamond ring into Sanyukta's finger.

Randhir... This ring?

I was just keeping with me for the right time, and what a better timing can be like this? He smiled hugging Sanyukta...

Within few days, Sanyukta had become Mrs. Sanyukta Randhir Singh Shekhawat...they had forgotten their past , their miserable life and lived life happily forever... Together...