another attempt- ache of my heart

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hai
i have made this attempt
all your valuable comments are welcome pleazzzee

say me how is this one
whom does it suit?


Ache of my HEART!


Ache of my heart is felt for you !


Ache of my heart teaches me to be strong !

Ache of my heart teaches me to attain you

Ache of my heart teaches me to be always for you only !


Ache of my HEART! asks

where are you?


whole world says you don't belong to me ?

but i would say you BELONG ONLY TO ME


NO ONE CAN TAKE ME AWAY FROM YOU


Ache of my heart is felt for you !

Ache of my HEART!

no rituals ! no customs can bound to stop

ME

from ATTAINING you

AS you are for me only and aim for you


sky has no limit to its end

like that i have no boundaries for your love


but still


Ache of my heart is felt for you !

Ache of my HEART!


every one says silence is the language of love

but this silence is aching now

silence has become a barrier of love for me !

break this silence and come to me!


Ache of my heart is felt the pain of separation from you


Ache of my heart is felt for you !

Ache of my HEART!


bitter truth of my life is that

Iam separated from you physically !


but my soul

my memories

my happiness are there always with you


my aching heart felt the pain of separation from you

but i know aim there with in you

MY HEARTS STOPS ACHING

AS IT WILL HURT YOU

AS YOU ARE THERE IN IT !!!

AS YOU ARE THERE IN IT !!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is my attempt for kalpi
for the emotional burdenings she is going through it
i have made this only for her as kalpi
hope u liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good, am always looking out for these, looking forward for the next one.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhanuli

U wrote it so beautiful😃

thank u and a big hug for u as for all attempts i get comment from u🤗

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